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Other than wrong pronouns every now and again this is quite good. Character has a main goal and a power called tele poof to get rid of fools. Also the character descriptions are well done. Although it would be nice if authour could expand on the Theodore's spying ability is it one way? Since it just says he made a circle portal does that mean they see him as well?
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I like this novel a lot. The only thing that irritates me slightly is how fast the people are becoming interested in him. I get how he's super handsome cliche etc... But Natasha is meant to be a really cold spy that feels no physical attraction to anyone and she starts to doubt that slowly within their first interaction. Other than that I love this and I'll still give it 5*
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On how many alternate realities have I been stalking this duo now? 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Falou que não ia ter Harém mais teve, autor já bagunçou a historia todo colocando muitos elementos desnecessários, perdeu totalmente o proposito de fazer essa segunda historia.
Very good novel with interest story line. Need a bit of tweaking here and there but overall a beautiful novel (with busty beauties as well 😎😎).
Im surprised by the quality of this fan fic most of the fanfics here have major ****ups but still tolerable but this is gold i honestly think this should be number 1 on fan fics just sad that there is only 30 chaps at the moment (author-san if you see this can you please tell me your update sched btw i just copied my review from the other one if you are wondering)
Your story is very good to ignore I repeatedly finished reading it for at least 10 times,Please start updating chapters more frequently.....
I honestly like this and like the whole father genre so I was wondering if anyone knows any novel or fanfic similar to this where there is a father and daughter duo, but the daughter is young and wants a mother or something just similar to this theme