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This is the greatest novel I ever read You should never drop this novel It's even greater than emperor domination I shall seal the heavens Unrivaled medicine god and others this novel and astral pet store are the coolest and greatest
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So far so good, there is few plot holes but I don’t care about that it doesn’t bother me that much. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Gran historia, MC estúpido para ser una super inteligente artificial. ........................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................
Why have you stopped writing this novel it’s an 10 out of 10 are u sic or are you bored writing this....."......................."...........
So far it's really great and interesting to binge, it's very conceptual world with a likable Protagonist. There's really no story without a holes so i won't say it doesn't have one but the author is actually filling those later on and then proceed on creating more mystery, although the author kinda overdoing the mystery part. The story never gets boring i binge it until chapter 400+ and even here it's still exciting but since author stopped updating i'll stop on part where i won't feel much of a cliffhanger. It's been a fun ride, might pick it up again !
Why did you stop the novel? Its been 3 months since last update. Are you going to continue this novel? So far the story has been amazing. Will be glad if you keep it up.
Read at your own risk. I mean what I mean. I feel like the author havent been in a single relationship witbh woman or man. Everything in the novel was cringy asf.
Okay i like the idea for this novel, i like the story, but what i find annoying is that when hhe s in a cultivation world to fight in a tournament that he uses advanced weapons, and not even tried to cultivate anything, thats kind of annoying for me. And just let him take Bella, that poor girl
Autor-san, você desistiu ou não ?? Parece que será mais uma novel abandonada. 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
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I like the blend of abilities, cultivation and science along with how the mc acts. The story as well is great so far.
one of my favourite novels of all time but has stopped updating for 4 months. Please continue this novel Authorrrrrr. I check weekly for new updates :(
Overall a good story, even inspired me to create my own (Thanks for the inspiration MadReader) for those who wish to check it out I'd appreciate it (note it's a weekly upload not a daily.) (Shameless plug)
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very good . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .
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I love everything about the novel except for the fact when Ai V ghosted ella nearly for 2 years (might be more). A simple problem which could be solve if only they would have a proper f2f talk over it. Ella was insecure about their relationship and remain loyal to Ai while he went fooling around with some beauties. he cared for the Chinese beauty more than he did for ella. When ella met him after that instead of inviting her for a talk he decided to be indifferent about it. First of all, he's a fking AI ffs, he should've known better. If he thinks ella is a burden he should've been clear about it. He spied on her and saw her getting hit on by John (he's basically using her to get revenge on Ai) but did nothing about it. Ella is a loyal and a good girl that deserves better. Ai is irresponsible towards his girlfriend, while he did asked that one ugly to protect her in the shadows from physical harm, Ai himself is practically torturing her mentally.
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Im not sure why this story even got a contract for monetization. I will be completely honest in this review. It doesn’t deserve to be monetized. The chapters are short, maybe 500 words each, the writing is mediocre, the characters are too dull, and feels like one of those books abandoned by the author on a site like wattpad or FanFiction.Net. I’m surprised the author managed to write so many chapters with giving up, and I respect that.
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read my book you will like it-supreme ancestral god,I also recommend mysterious detective -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The grammar sucks so bad i tought i was reading a mtl. ......................................................................................
Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
This is the greatest novel I ever read You should never drop this novel It's even greater than emperor domination I shall seal the heavens Unrivaled medicine god and others this novel and astral pet store are the coolest and greatest
updates........updates updatesupdatesupdatesupdatesupdates updates........updates updatesupdatesupdatesupdatesupdates updates........updates updatesupdatesupdatesupdatesupdates
So far so good, there is few plot holes but I don’t care about that it doesn’t bother me that much. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Gran historia, MC estúpido para ser una super inteligente artificial. ........................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................
Why have you stopped writing this novel it’s an 10 out of 10 are u sic or are you bored writing this....."......................."...........
So far it's really great and interesting to binge, it's very conceptual world with a likable Protagonist. There's really no story without a holes so i won't say it doesn't have one but the author is actually filling those later on and then proceed on creating more mystery, although the author kinda overdoing the mystery part. The story never gets boring i binge it until chapter 400+ and even here it's still exciting but since author stopped updating i'll stop on part where i won't feel much of a cliffhanger. It's been a fun ride, might pick it up again !
Why did you stop the novel? Its been 3 months since last update. Are you going to continue this novel? So far the story has been amazing. Will be glad if you keep it up.
Read at your own risk. I mean what I mean. I feel like the author havent been in a single relationship witbh woman or man. Everything in the novel was cringy asf.
Okay i like the idea for this novel, i like the story, but what i find annoying is that when hhe s in a cultivation world to fight in a tournament that he uses advanced weapons, and not even tried to cultivate anything, thats kind of annoying for me. And just let him take Bella, that poor girl
Autor-san, você desistiu ou não ?? Parece que será mais uma novel abandonada. 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
Boringggg ............................ ................................................ ................................................ ................................................ ............................................... ...............................................
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email：luffyringdom@gmail.com
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I like the blend of abilities, cultivation and science along with how the mc acts. The story as well is great so far.
one of my favourite novels of all time but has stopped updating for 4 months. Please continue this novel Authorrrrrr. I check weekly for new updates :(
Overall a good story, even inspired me to create my own (Thanks for the inspiration MadReader) for those who wish to check it out I'd appreciate it (note it's a weekly upload not a daily.) (Shameless plug)
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very good . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .
Spoiler de révélation Please write more!!!!! Please write more!!!!! Please write more!!!!! Please write more!!!!! Please write more!!!!! Please write more!!!!! Please write more!!!!!
I love everything about the novel except for the fact when Ai V ghosted ella nearly for 2 years (might be more). A simple problem which could be solve if only they would have a proper f2f talk over it. Ella was insecure about their relationship and remain loyal to Ai while he went fooling around with some beauties. he cared for the Chinese beauty more than he did for ella. When ella met him after that instead of inviting her for a talk he decided to be indifferent about it. First of all, he's a fking AI ffs, he should've known better. If he thinks ella is a burden he should've been clear about it. He spied on her and saw her getting hit on by John (he's basically using her to get revenge on Ai) but did nothing about it. Ella is a loyal and a good girl that deserves better. Ai is irresponsible towards his girlfriend, while he did asked that one ugly to protect her in the shadows from physical harm, Ai himself is practically torturing her mentally.
Spoiler de révélation Im not sure why this story even got a contract for monetization. I will be completely honest in this review. It doesn’t deserve to be monetized. The chapters are short, maybe 500 words each, the writing is mediocre, the characters are too dull, and feels like one of those books abandoned by the author on a site like wattpad or FanFiction.Net. I’m surprised the author managed to write so many chapters with giving up, and I respect that.
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read my book you will like it-supreme ancestral god,I also recommend mysterious detective -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------