The more luca stared at her, the more he wanted to stare at her and before he knew it, it was as if he had temporarily fallen into a trans.
Devil Slave (Satan system)
Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
Where are blola and virala on the new cover
I think the author meant using ChatGBT to assist with writing, not the system AI
(Author's note: So you guys are not saying Anything. Do you like the current writing style, or are you enjoying the story? No feed back is demoralizing, I swear!)
Devil Slave (Satan system)
Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
But it feels out of left field, like if you were to say “man I hate John, and it’s not even cause he’s black”. It just feels like a strange thing to have to state
And this was not just the fact that Agent 'X' was a man above fifty and was a Queer, but the fact that he made it seem like a difficult decision for him to make a choice when Lenny knew very well the choice that he was going to pick.
Devil Slave (Satan system)
Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
Why did you have to preference that he didn’t hate him cause he was gay😭
And this was not just the fact that Agent 'X' was a man above fifty and was a Queer, but the fact that he made it seem like a difficult decision for him to make a choice when Lenny knew very well the choice that he was going to pick.
Devil Slave (Satan system)
Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
I thought prana healed the mind also
This motive appeared two years later, when Prumace and his family had to experience a Minor Crisis in the Kingdom they had visited for vacation that year. Though they survived the Minor Crisis, Prumace's two children were traumatised, which had paralysed their legs.
I'll Surpass The MC
Eastern · Anvelope
I was assuming this had to do with the greed system
Meanwhile, in a different world, at the dead center of a star, a figure slightly opened its eyes. A gesture that instantly sent cosmic law breaking through the ether of existence. "interesting the Morningstar's seed consumed a fraction of my power."
Devil Slave (Satan system)
Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
???
My physique alone has drastically changed. I'm now one hundred and eighty eight centimeters in height with a lean robust body due to all the workout I've done.
Conquering The Omni-Verse!
TV · KingSeyer
I’m gonna be honest, great descriptions for the scene but I would suggest picking 2-3 paragraphs rather than having 13 so as to not bore the audience and/or become redundant. To take it with a grain of salt though as I am not a writer and am only a reader
At that moment, Duncan felt the weight of Clawed's absence like a heavy chain around his heart. The wasteland, a witness to their shared struggles and victories, now bore witness to the aftermath of an irrevocable loss. The moon, an eternal companion to the earth, watched as Duncan cradled Clawed's lifeless body, a lone figure under its silver embrace in a world that had suddenly turned silent and cold.
Devil Slave (Satan system)
Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
What ever happened to that pink succubus e777 or whatever
Devil Slave (Satan system)
Fantasy · Dere_Isaac