DollShururu

DollShururu

male LV 12

INTP-T and i prefer novels over comics/anime/movies.

2018-08-27 Joint Philippines
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DollShururu
5 months ago
Posted

This is really disappointing. I thought this is about Adventures and Dimensional Travel but 75% of the story content is filled with Experiments and Info-dumps about it and it just doesn't end! Then author decided to forget all interaction between characters and just keep overusing timeskip to make relationship to progress lol. Even his relationship with his wives felt shallow and distant yet he insist that he love them and there's no problem with their relationship lmao. The characters had no depth whatsoever. There's also the Worldbuilding, all the process of building his Empire was all dumped into the 35years timeskip, so many parts was skipped like Building the Empire, Colonizing the solar system, the Existence of Kingdom Atlantis on Earth was just brush aside along with all the Space Travel. So much infodumps for Experiments but didn't bother working on it's characters and the world. Besides the MC already had so much Plotarmor and Cheats: [Ultimate Talent], [Ultimate Luck], and the author had the gall talking about creating tension in the story when MC had an [OP Mysterious Grandpa] he can run off to and ask for help anytime shit happens. MC also get some OP [Cosmic Awareness] ability that can detect Cosmic Level Enteties. You would think the MC started without much blessings at beginning but as you read on you will realize he get more CHEATS even in the middle of the story, so many asspulls. The side characters and some Peak Level Gods also for some reason support everything the MC wants to do so even if some other Gods oppose the MC there's no tension because more Stronger Gods got his back. TLDR: It's not about about adventures and dimensional travels because even when he goes to other universes MC only focus on his experiments most of the time. So only read this if you're prepared for shitton of Infodumps about experiments because that's what this story is about. An experimental log.

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DollShururu
6 months ago
Posted

A fun story from the start but didn't last long. After about 50 chapters the character interaction starts to worsen and the story lose it's creativity. It's obvious that the author lacks new ideas and just squeezing the story of it's worth. The MC's voice-heart dialogues becomes Cringe asf. Author is just forcing himself to write water chapters without any substance.

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DollShururu
6 months ago
Posted

Well it's not as bad as i thought. I thought it was a total garbage fanfic but the idea and romance is actually pretty fun tbh. I actually enjoyed it. 🔸1-40 chapters : They're alright, interesting. MC is mid and not very likable but not too bad. 🔸40-100 chapters : Around this part of the story is very fun to which i enjoyed the most. You will like the MC as he starts to change and starts to act caring and it has quite heartwarming moments. 🔸100+ chapters : It became pointless and boring. MC degraded again, he became so full of himself and he pretty much just focus on sex thoughts and humiliating his girls by making them do degrading stuff. Romance and plot isn't even there anymore, they're like his pet or sex toy. Too much focus on boring porn & slice-of-life, it felt just like pointless fillers. Idk what happened but the story never felt the same after chapter 103 so i dropped it around chapter 120+. Overall it's not a bad read. Read the first 100 chaps you might enjoy it. ~

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DollShururu
6 months ago
Posted

Although grammar and writing style of the author isn't bad. This doesn't look like a quality story. —Comedic-undertone is not funny and quite dull. The Father acts goofy when his son boutta die and Gods have a maturity of a month old baby, one time a God is said to be "rolling on the floor, laughing" just because MC make a weird face. goo goo ga ga. —Bad system. System has plotholes (if u could call it that) to it's main function. The system main function is each level-up will allow the MC to get "additional class" by copying the binded women's Job-classes, so the System function won't work if he bind women with the same classes, like for example: If he wants to bind a certain woman but he already had her class he can't do that because it will waste bind slot! What's more is that there's only 3 classes in the world, so when system reach levels 4 and above there will no new class for him, even if he bind dozens of women he won't receive any more classes! It's pretty much a crippled system. Well tbh what got me to leave is that i'm not sold on the idea of Gods watching everything about the MC. Imagine you're having sex and your wife moaning and doing different positions with you but you know Gods are watching her like a pornstar. Welp this isn't for me. This story is prob fine for a if you don't have anything to read.

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DollShururu
6 months ago
Replied to Zero_Novel

I think the one who made that reviews had a weak heart and couldn't handle Chinese MCs. Ive read lots of CN novels and CN main characters being cruel felt quite normal already. 😂lol

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DollShururu
6 months ago
Replied to djumbo

I felt like this review is misleading by a whole lot. Exaggerated.

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DollShururu
6 months ago
Replied to djumbo

Also is his father an antagonist?

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DollShururu
6 months ago
Replied to djumbo

Wdym saving every single girl from gang members? There's like dozen of girls here..

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DollShururu
6 months ago
Replied to Johnmark_Bodoso

This book is filled with dumbass reviews where they complain yet that doesn't explain anything.

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DollShururu
6 months ago
Replied to Ryuujisan

what uncle? mc has uncle in his harem? wtf are you even saying lmao.