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Naruto: Brain of Bulma And Eyes of the Supreme King
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[ Schedule 2 chapters a week.] Self-Insert was re-organizing my deck for a local Yu-gi-oh tournament when my deck was stolen and the thief killed me over $14,000 worth of cards. Now I'm reincarnated with no system In Naruto. But not during the peaceful era when Naruto is born but in the middle of the Second Great Shinobi WAR!
Bulma from Dragon ball z
Jaden from Yu-gi-oh GX
As for any of the Naruto information it can be looked up
I DON'T WANT TO SAVE THE WORLD BUT LIVE THE LIFE OF A SHUT-IN OTAKU!
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Hey author here, this is my first story so It's going to take longer to craft chapters. I plan to have the main character strong but not too OP. So, he won't have all the bloodlines, no sharingan, rinnegan, or other overpowered bullshit. Also, I will give him a bloodline that's in cannon but never used. Having the main character able to do everything I feel is too unrealistic and boring. Not to mention I want supporting characters to have a reason for being introduced. The story is also more of a king builder story. I plan to update this story about once a week at least.
CHAPTER 5: The story at the moment is good, it mentions the reason why she went to that world instead of just waking up there, for the moment in chapter 5 there is not a one of Bulma's knowledge, I hope she does not forget that ability in the future In Conclusion: At the moment it is a good story with potential, but if it shines it is for the future. I recommend it to those who don't want a very serious story and for when there are more chapters
Many misspellings, incomplete or wrong words, and grammatical errors. Needs a lot of refinement. (word word word word word word word word word)
i loved the character building and how much you can connect with the mc.It was fantastic work can't wait for the future chapter.