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A Young man who died of an incurable disease in his late teen finds himself in the world of Naruto before the first great shinobi war.
He wasn't blessed with a system like he had read in the stories, however, what he had was a body that could endlessly absorb a form of energy far superior to Chakra. The only limit to his potential being time.
This is a translation of a completed work.
Author:脑洞筑梦师：余青衣
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Story seems good, no harem and it seems pretty interesting and the translation is really good
Boring sword user, energy cheat used in probably the weakest way. I can't be bothered to read further.
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i hate cultivation(qi) and swords(sword aura) based stories... it's just too simple and predictable...
currently around chapter 60, the story is going in a good direction for me, I especially like how the author has developed the character of mc and how side characters feel real aswell especially is squadmates.
Me Encanta el ambiente que genera el protagonista y como conocé a los Futuros Líderes del Mundo Ninja por Excelencia. Pero me quede comiendo la curiosidad por la pelea de Hui con los Invasores de la Aldea Uzumaki
Really good translation. Liked the premise and hoped it delves into village management after he becomes Hokage. Full Raw name?
Nice fanfiction with SI and immortal energy in naruto universe jdjdnsbsbddndndjdjsjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjsjsjsjdjsjsjsjjsjsskskskjsjsjsjsjsjdjdndndndndndnsnsn
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I know it's a translation, but it's very annoying having to read full names all the time, especially the mc. Reduce it to just Hui please, I think it's possible to do that in translation. The story itself is a little poor, with an excess of praise for the MC's appearance, there is also the fact that 6-year-old girls make declarations of love and seek relationships, which is quite silly and unrealistic, at most there could be admiration juvenile (that's what we expect from many Chinese authors and their strange fetishes). I'm still at the beginning of the story. Regarding cultivation with different powers, I don't see a problem, as long as it is well planned and doesn't make the mc too op immediately and of course an idiot. And I hope the other ninjas aren't portrayed as idiots where only the MC can do something (there's a lot of Chinese history that you can't follow because of this).
Using evolutionary energy or life energy could provide a more seamless connection to the Naruto universe, aligning better with themes like growth, potential, and the development of unique abilities. In the Naruto world, chakra is fundamentally tied to both the physical and spiritual aspects of a person, representing not just raw power but also one's life force and potential for growth. If the protagonist's abilities were tied to this life force or evolutionary energy, it would emphasize their personal development in a way that feels true to the series' themes. Introducing this form of energy could work in several ways: Evolutionary Potential: The MC's abilities could evolve naturally over time as their life energy matures, unlocking new skills or even kekkei genkai (bloodline abilities). This would mirror the way characters in Naruto often tap into deeper reserves of strength as they grow. Synergy with Nature: Life energy could be closely tied to the world around the protagonist—enhanced by their connection to the natural world, elemental forces, or other life forms. It would give them a dynamic ability set, much like how chakra in Naruto is used to shape nature and the environment. Innate Power/Hidden Abilities: The protagonist could discover latent, unique abilities within themselves tied to their evolution or life energy. Perhaps the MC could unlock a special kekkei genkai, linked to their bloodline or a deep connection to the world's energy, adding a sense of mystery and potential for the story's growth.
Really love the cheat that the MC gets in this story, I always love Naruto fics with cultivation. Unfortunately the writing quality is poor and story is just bad. MC is arrogant, obnoxious, and too stupid to survive a few days without plot armor. Lot of wasted potential here