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To rebuild death god's glory, was our obligation!
At the start of the story, he and his zanpakuto had to fight for his own territory!
The Lord of Hell, Mephisto?
Playing with people's hearts, you might need to learn more from me!
Necromancer?
Let me test the might of Ryūjin Jakka!
Iron Man, Tony Stark?
Come, come, it just happened that I am in need of technical support in Technological Development Department!
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Lod, who inherited the will of Soul King, crossed into Marvel World and decided to become the biggest behind-the-scenes manipulator!
When Lod ruled the three major organizations of the Wandenreich, Las Noches, and Seireitei, and looking at the entire universe, he could not help but sigh with emotion: In fact, at the beginning, I just wanted to live!
This is translated novel.
Release Schedule: 7+ Chapters / Week
Please give it 5 stars review!!
Translator site: readfanfic . com
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Meh....... like translate Death Lord back to shinigami.... it sounds stupid af.. Edge lord lvl is over 9000 in this one...............................
anime fanfic in chinese writing style are wrong!!! its really uncomfortable to read it... and the naming sense is so wrong... it is if everyone is a weeabo... the idea is nice but i like my braincells more
Well, I like the novel, the only problem is the classical Chinese writing that ruins the whole plot... to explain myself better it would be the Chinese examples of, courting death, or classic things of Chinese culture, like lengthening the chapter with unnecessary verbiage... for Chinese authors, don't forget that the world has many countries and cultures.
It is impossible to read because the logic of what is happening eludes me. The style of writing "Chinese novels" I came to this site running away from them, but they even got here.
the story has a lot of potential but also a lot of holes. please use the term "shinigami" rather than death god. it is kind of out of place. he must find a way to to make a god of death "shinigami" without resorting in killing them. by having the condition of them being killed, it will be almost predictable who will be a shinigami. my prediction of those who will be shinigami are daredevil luke cage jessica jones iron fist hawk eye black widow elektra moon knight quick silver basically anyone who wields a weapon, who doesn't have crazy regeneration and at the B-list will become a shinigami
based on 5 chapters it is readable, better than it's mtl version. rest i will rate again after more chapters .
The idea behind this is good , the execution and translation is what ruins it , if you translate it at least make sure to use the proper terms and NORMAL speech , not just copy paste it , i tried reading this and left after the first 2 chapters , that's how bad translation is.
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its a decent story with a fun concept but there are a few flaws. MOST of the dialogue is the MC spouting nonsense lies and the other characters easily believing him, he has multiple templates to change appearances to help his lies. he explains why he lies but it makes most of what you read pointless to the actual development of the story. the marvel characters he has join him lose any original personality they had and become slav.. loyal companions. Jessica is an albedo type. if you don't mind that then its not bad to read. oh yeah, you'll want to skip the chapter where he lies to the ancient one. its so poorly written and the lies used so bad that it'll make you question reading further.
I did just read Chapter 11 before thinking if I would Start reading this novel just because the Chapter Titel was funny and 🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢
Badly translated, Op Mc, It literally tells the ending in the summary. It is just a generic protagonist with a cheat sytem based on bleach, there ya go that is the entire depth of the story.Wouldn't recommend spend your time reading something else.
i couldnt get past 5 chapters, the grammar is terrible, the kind of bad as if you put a Chinese novel through Google translate and you don't edit it
why I did this is because seriously The Mc should had learnt mystic art from ancient one because it helpful to him . .. .plus mirror dimension could be used in fight instead of fighting like some foolish minotaur who want he fight or battle to be seen he could had played it cautious that why I stopped at chapter 44 because he wanted to keep a low profile but blow it up I seriously regretted downloading it
Yea they kill gwen and turned her hallow yea plus it feels like am read Chinese novels again it had potential but the whole Chinese names is a turn off. Killing gwen was a stupid idea not gonna lie a lot of people love are character then you make it worse by turning are hallow but Frank Castle is alive that is more than enough evidence that is a failed project
A big mess with an op mc and lot of plot holes. ............................................................................................................................................
I gave a review last year and am going to do it again 🤣 so let's start off by saying all the bleach characters he becomes are so nerfed that they can still only influence 500 meters with their spiritual pressure that says the lot about what you're going to expect and let us not forget these are captain level death reapers. I am still made about Gwen being killed off and then turning her into a hallow it was stupid and it still is. I was expecting premium quality content from a Chinese author and it just showed me why they are so unreliable but the translator on web novel has done a pretty good job
Honestly it started out fine. I can make do with bad translations. However, reading the title, you would think oh its a bleach x marvel fic. But no, as soon as i read the stone mask i was out. Youre already messing with marvel by throwing in shinigami but then jojo as well? Not to mention shinigami are nerfed in this fic so adding more nonsensical worlds to marvel is just a mess
It’s a great idea, just a translation issue for me. When a story is set in America it should have the American gang names for example or more American speech. In the uk we don’t say things like ‘call me daddy’ or use ridiculous sounding gang names, well they are still weird names but nothing like ‘heavenly death defying immortal dragon’. It sounds like a cultivation novel when it shouldn’t.