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I gave a review last year and am going to do it again 🤣 so let's start off by saying all the bleach characters he becomes are so nerfed that they can still only influence 500 meters with their spiritual pressure that says the lot about what you're going to expect and let us not forget these are captain level death reapers. I am still made about Gwen being killed off and then turning her into a hallow it was stupid and it still is. I was expecting premium quality content from a Chinese author and it just showed me why they are so unreliable but the translator on web novel has done a pretty good job
Honestly it started out fine. I can make do with bad translations. However, reading the title, you would think oh its a bleach x marvel fic. But no, as soon as i read the stone mask i was out. Youre already messing with marvel by throwing in shinigami but then jojo as well? Not to mention shinigami are nerfed in this fic so adding more nonsensical worlds to marvel is just a mess
a hidden gem 💎 , worth of reading , the MC is cold mother**** that don't seem to understand he is the type of the guy that like to create clamity only to take a back seat an watch it while eating popcorn the story is fun ( thou I skipp some of the fights not because of boring but because some time a fight would span to more that 6 chapter ) recommend that give it a try
Easily my most favorite story I could come upon on webnovel, the story is well thought out, the characters are extremely likeable, and the power development is also fair and not to powerful it takes time for the main character to get stronger and it shows.
one of the worst mess up marvel fanfic out here, it starts good then the story development starts to goes anywhere that doesnt relate to anything about marvel or the bleach. the author just starts to add random elements that he feels its good yet ita'stotally bad
just one of best fanfiction I have read but iIdidn't like tony becoming a death god and changing shinigami name to death god it's just didn't suit my taste overall it was quite enjoyable not much Chinese bad inheritance that I had seen almost non existing well I'll fully recomend this novel
Hands down top 5 worst fanfics I've read on here. and I've read a lot. my earlier review points out its flaws but im shocked to see this fanfic being updated still. all that time wasted writing trash.
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The idea behind this is good , the execution and translation is what ruins it , if you translate it at least make sure to use the proper terms and NORMAL speech , not just copy paste it , i tried reading this and left after the first 2 chapters , that's how bad translation is.
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an excellent story, very good, I really love the development that the MC has had and it is very fluid, the truth is, it is very fun to read and recommend to my friends
Спасибо за работу, давно я не видел таких хороших работ. Обычно китайские работы после 10 глав склоняются в мега OP но тут все идёт хорошо. Так же мало китайских перегибов, хорошие шутки и забавная история.
O que devo dizer? O personagem é um bosta que quer incorporar uma personalidade fodona e não saabe nem por onde começar. Sai fazendo as coisas torto e direito. Não usa a cabeça nem por um momento, e imediatamente aparece para fazer inimigos. Santo arco da coceira, por que todos os autores tem o fetiche de 'enganar' a shield? Como se esta fosse importante! MC Tem a porra da jóia da realidade em mãos e fica de bla bla bla com sistema. DECEPCIONANTE! POR ISSO QUE ODEIO SISTEMAS! e além disso, o autor acabou com o mundo de sua escrita, envolvento elementos de outras obras. É um produto saído direto de um grande liquidificador, onde as idéias foram jogadas de qualquer jeito! Santa paciência! HUMPH!
i couldnt get past 5 chapters, the grammar is terrible, the kind of bad as if you put a Chinese novel through Google translate and you don't edit it
Definitely quite an interesting and intriguing character that Lod Carl is especially with how cunning and powerful he is way he thinks and plans things doing things from behind the scenes manipulating everyone about him and of all of the things he said to them , the facial expressions and everyone even fooled Shield and their only way to know is information through him that he deliberately told them about and way he had other people under him from The Quincy overall enjoyed reading all of this book look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book cant wait to read more and find out what will happen next
why I did this is because seriously The Mc should had learnt mystic art from ancient one because it helpful to him . .. .plus mirror dimension could be used in fight instead of fighting like some foolish minotaur who want he fight or battle to be seen he could had played it cautious that why I stopped at chapter 44 because he wanted to keep a low profile but blow it up I seriously regretted downloading it
Yea they kill gwen and turned her hallow yea plus it feels like am read Chinese novels again it had potential but the whole Chinese names is a turn off. Killing gwen was a stupid idea not gonna lie a lot of people love are character then you make it worse by turning are hallow but Frank Castle is alive that is more than enough evidence that is a failed project
There is a lot of good points and mostly it does adapt well with the actual world, really the merging so far is fabulous to me. sick concept, sick world so keep it up great work so far 👌💪.
It is impossible to read because the logic of what is happening eludes me. The style of writing "Chinese novels" I came to this site running away from them, but they even got here.
Make the MC Master of All Things- Magic(Rune, Wizardry, Cosmic energy and Sorcerer)-Already a sorcerer though, Martial Artist(Chi, force energies like pheonix force and Many more arts), Science(Scientist, Engineer or many more)- By making him every mastery beyond the level we can imagine step by step. Also make the appereance of Comic charaters more like Shang Chi and many more Asian Characters, Make mutants into meta-humans with story. Hope to see those soon.
I don't know but I like this story . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
machine translated + too many chinese elements. machine translated + too many chinese elements. machine translated + too many chinese elements.
Overall good story and translation. Although there are a few errors every now and then it's nothing too extreme. I just ask please put the Shinigami translation as Reaper or Shinigami, God of Death gets really weird.
Great read, just caught up and I recommend it to y’all. I’m just a bleach fan so I enjoy the concept a lot and I’m looking forward to more.
I need help there's a novel just like this just that it's about Naruto characters. does anyone have any idea what the name of the novel is ?
I gave a review last year and am going to do it again 🤣 so let's start off by saying all the bleach characters he becomes are so nerfed that they can still only influence 500 meters with their spiritual pressure that says the lot about what you're going to expect and let us not forget these are captain level death reapers. I am still made about Gwen being killed off and then turning her into a hallow it was stupid and it still is. I was expecting premium quality content from a Chinese author and it just showed me why they are so unreliable but the translator on web novel has done a pretty good job
Honestly it started out fine. I can make do with bad translations. However, reading the title, you would think oh its a bleach x marvel fic. But no, as soon as i read the stone mask i was out. Youre already messing with marvel by throwing in shinigami but then jojo as well? Not to mention shinigami are nerfed in this fic so adding more nonsensical worlds to marvel is just a mess
a hidden gem 💎 , worth of reading , the MC is cold mother**** that don't seem to understand he is the type of the guy that like to create clamity only to take a back seat an watch it while eating popcorn the story is fun ( thou I skipp some of the fights not because of boring but because some time a fight would span to more that 6 chapter ) recommend that give it a try
Easily my most favorite story I could come upon on webnovel, the story is well thought out, the characters are extremely likeable, and the power development is also fair and not to powerful it takes time for the main character to get stronger and it shows.
one of the worst mess up marvel fanfic out here, it starts good then the story development starts to goes anywhere that doesnt relate to anything about marvel or the bleach. the author just starts to add random elements that he feels its good yet ita'stotally bad
just one of best fanfiction I have read but iIdidn't like tony becoming a death god and changing shinigami name to death god it's just didn't suit my taste overall it was quite enjoyable not much Chinese bad inheritance that I had seen almost non existing well I'll fully recomend this novel
Hands down top 5 worst fanfics I've read on here. and I've read a lot. my earlier review points out its flaws but im shocked to see this fanfic being updated still. all that time wasted writing trash.
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The idea behind this is good , the execution and translation is what ruins it , if you translate it at least make sure to use the proper terms and NORMAL speech , not just copy paste it , i tried reading this and left after the first 2 chapters , that's how bad translation is.
Revelar spoiler an excellent story, very good, I really love the development that the MC has had and it is very fluid, the truth is, it is very fun to read and recommend to my friends
Спасибо за работу, давно я не видел таких хороших работ. Обычно китайские работы после 10 глав склоняются в мега OP но тут все идёт хорошо. Так же мало китайских перегибов, хорошие шутки и забавная история.
O que devo dizer? O personagem é um bosta que quer incorporar uma personalidade fodona e não saabe nem por onde começar. Sai fazendo as coisas torto e direito. Não usa a cabeça nem por um momento, e imediatamente aparece para fazer inimigos. Santo arco da coceira, por que todos os autores tem o fetiche de 'enganar' a shield? Como se esta fosse importante! MC Tem a porra da jóia da realidade em mãos e fica de bla bla bla com sistema. DECEPCIONANTE! POR ISSO QUE ODEIO SISTEMAS! e além disso, o autor acabou com o mundo de sua escrita, envolvento elementos de outras obras. É um produto saído direto de um grande liquidificador, onde as idéias foram jogadas de qualquer jeito! Santa paciência! HUMPH!
i couldnt get past 5 chapters, the grammar is terrible, the kind of bad as if you put a Chinese novel through Google translate and you don't edit it
Definitely quite an interesting and intriguing character that Lod Carl is especially with how cunning and powerful he is way he thinks and plans things doing things from behind the scenes manipulating everyone about him and of all of the things he said to them , the facial expressions and everyone even fooled Shield and their only way to know is information through him that he deliberately told them about and way he had other people under him from The Quincy overall enjoyed reading all of this book look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book cant wait to read more and find out what will happen next
why I did this is because seriously The Mc should had learnt mystic art from ancient one because it helpful to him . .. .plus mirror dimension could be used in fight instead of fighting like some foolish minotaur who want he fight or battle to be seen he could had played it cautious that why I stopped at chapter 44 because he wanted to keep a low profile but blow it up I seriously regretted downloading it
Yea they kill gwen and turned her hallow yea plus it feels like am read Chinese novels again it had potential but the whole Chinese names is a turn off. Killing gwen was a stupid idea not gonna lie a lot of people love are character then you make it worse by turning are hallow but Frank Castle is alive that is more than enough evidence that is a failed project
There is a lot of good points and mostly it does adapt well with the actual world, really the merging so far is fabulous to me. sick concept, sick world so keep it up great work so far 👌💪.
It is impossible to read because the logic of what is happening eludes me. The style of writing "Chinese novels" I came to this site running away from them, but they even got here.
Make the MC Master of All Things- Magic(Rune, Wizardry, Cosmic energy and Sorcerer)-Already a sorcerer though, Martial Artist(Chi, force energies like pheonix force and Many more arts), Science(Scientist, Engineer or many more)- By making him every mastery beyond the level we can imagine step by step. Also make the appereance of Comic charaters more like Shang Chi and many more Asian Characters, Make mutants into meta-humans with story. Hope to see those soon.
I don't know but I like this story . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
machine translated + too many chinese elements. machine translated + too many chinese elements. machine translated + too many chinese elements.
Overall good story and translation. Although there are a few errors every now and then it's nothing too extreme. I just ask please put the Shinigami translation as Reaper or Shinigami, God of Death gets really weird.
Great read, just caught up and I recommend it to y’all. I’m just a bleach fan so I enjoy the concept a lot and I’m looking forward to more.
I need help there's a novel just like this just that it's about Naruto characters. does anyone have any idea what the name of the novel is ?