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anime fanfic in chinese writing style are wrong!!! its really uncomfortable to read it... and the naming sense is so wrong... it is if everyone is a weeabo... the idea is nice but i like my braincells more
Bad writing quality, the word 'she' is replaced into 'he' and becomes confusing to read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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this is my first time writing a review for a novel...and this is one of my favorite and god bless the author for giving us this wonderful novel ...keep it up
Well, I like the novel, the only problem is the classical Chinese writing that ruins the whole plot... to explain myself better it would be the Chinese examples of, courting death, or classic things of Chinese culture, like lengthening the chapter with unnecessary verbiage... for Chinese authors, don't forget that the world has many countries and cultures.
better than the mtl that idk what is what keep up the good work im gonna stack some chapters and read when it is near the mtl so far so good tyvm for translating
It’s a great idea, just a translation issue for me. When a story is set in America it should have the American gang names for example or more American speech. In the uk we don’t say things like ‘call me daddy’ or use ridiculous sounding gang names, well they are still weird names but nothing like ‘heavenly death defying immortal dragon’. It sounds like a cultivation novel when it shouldn’t.
Badly translated, Op Mc, It literally tells the ending in the summary. It is just a generic protagonist with a cheat sytem based on bleach, there ya go that is the entire depth of the story.Wouldn't recommend spend your time reading something else.
Muito bom poderia mandar mais capítulo 😃 mais tem que melhorar a escrita hjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjhhhhhhhhh
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Fantastic. Always wanted to read a bleach x marvel fanfic. Translation quality is good as well. Keep up the good job. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
So far ,I am loving this. The translation could use some more polishing , but it's already better than a majority of translated chinese fics in webnovel.
I did just read Chapter 11 before thinking if I would Start reading this novel just because the Chapter Titel was funny and 🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢
its a decent story with a fun concept but there are a few flaws. MOST of the dialogue is the MC spouting nonsense lies and the other characters easily believing him, he has multiple templates to change appearances to help his lies. he explains why he lies but it makes most of what you read pointless to the actual development of the story. the marvel characters he has join him lose any original personality they had and become slav.. loyal companions. Jessica is an albedo type. if you don't mind that then its not bad to read. oh yeah, you'll want to skip the chapter where he lies to the ancient one. its so poorly written and the lies used so bad that it'll make you question reading further.
Writing Quality 3/5 Stars (Shinigami for the win) Stability of Updates 5/5 Stars Story Development 4/5 Stars Character Design 4/5 Stars World Background 5/5 Stars
Revelar spoiler
YES ITS FINALLY IN HEREE[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It’s a great idea, just a translation issue for me. When a story is set in America it should have the American gang names for example or more American speech. In the uk we don’t say things like ‘call me daddy’ or use ridiculous sounding gang names, well they are still weird names but nothing like ‘heavenly death defying immortal dragon’. It sounds like a cultivation novel when it shouldn’t.
ршшишиш в котором он же не знаю где то я уже в виде не знаю где то я уже в виде престижа профессии в том что ты не хочешь не верь не знаю что ты имеешь право и я каждый день я в таком состоянии и я ршшишиш в котором он же не знаю где то я уже в виде не знаю где то я уже в виде престижа профессии в том что ты не хочешь не верь не знаю что ты имеешь право и я каждый день я в таком состоянии и я
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Just finished reading till the latest chapter. So far I have enjoyed it greatly. The only thing I recommend you improve on is the grammar and writing. Its sometimes confusing if he is thinking about or saying the words since you sometimes forget the " not to mention you sometimes call females with male pronouns, but other than that great work. Hope to see your story develop even further and become greater~!
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A big mess with an op mc and lot of plot holes. ............................................................................................................................................
I Am The Exp of My Holy Scripture of Review's. Webnovel Story's is My Body, Exp Buckets is My Blood. I have Type Created and Writing over a Unknown Useful useless and to Down right Hilarious reviews. Unknown to True death, Nor known to the Multiple Reality of the Multiverse. I have withstood Cliff-Kun truck-kun and the legendary Loli goddess-chan to create many Legendary reviews known or unknown. And Yet these eyes and hands to body and soul will never stop at anything. So, as I pray to God all mother of webnovel-chan Unlimited Exp will never falter! Note - I am a chaotic kind of person 🤣👍
anime fanfic in chinese writing style are wrong!!! its really uncomfortable to read it... and the naming sense is so wrong... it is if everyone is a weeabo... the idea is nice but i like my braincells more
Bad writing quality, the word 'she' is replaced into 'he' and becomes confusing to read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice.Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice.Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice.Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice. Nice.
this is my first time writing a review for a novel...and this is one of my favorite and god bless the author for giving us this wonderful novel ...keep it up
Well, I like the novel, the only problem is the classical Chinese writing that ruins the whole plot... to explain myself better it would be the Chinese examples of, courting death, or classic things of Chinese culture, like lengthening the chapter with unnecessary verbiage... for Chinese authors, don't forget that the world has many countries and cultures.
better than the mtl that idk what is what keep up the good work im gonna stack some chapters and read when it is near the mtl so far so good tyvm for translating
It’s a great idea, just a translation issue for me. When a story is set in America it should have the American gang names for example or more American speech. In the uk we don’t say things like ‘call me daddy’ or use ridiculous sounding gang names, well they are still weird names but nothing like ‘heavenly death defying immortal dragon’. It sounds like a cultivation novel when it shouldn’t.
Badly translated, Op Mc, It literally tells the ending in the summary. It is just a generic protagonist with a cheat sytem based on bleach, there ya go that is the entire depth of the story.Wouldn't recommend spend your time reading something else.
Muito bom poderia mandar mais capítulo 😃 mais tem que melhorar a escrita hjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjhhhhhhhhh
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Fantastic. Always wanted to read a bleach x marvel fanfic. Translation quality is good as well. Keep up the good job. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
So far ,I am loving this. The translation could use some more polishing , but it's already better than a majority of translated chinese fics in webnovel.
I did just read Chapter 11 before thinking if I would Start reading this novel just because the Chapter Titel was funny and 🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢
its a decent story with a fun concept but there are a few flaws. MOST of the dialogue is the MC spouting nonsense lies and the other characters easily believing him, he has multiple templates to change appearances to help his lies. he explains why he lies but it makes most of what you read pointless to the actual development of the story. the marvel characters he has join him lose any original personality they had and become slav.. loyal companions. Jessica is an albedo type. if you don't mind that then its not bad to read. oh yeah, you'll want to skip the chapter where he lies to the ancient one. its so poorly written and the lies used so bad that it'll make you question reading further.
Writing Quality 3/5 Stars (Shinigami for the win) Stability of Updates 5/5 Stars Story Development 4/5 Stars Character Design 4/5 Stars World Background 5/5 Stars
Revelar spoiler YES ITS FINALLY IN HEREE[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It’s a great idea, just a translation issue for me. When a story is set in America it should have the American gang names for example or more American speech. In the uk we don’t say things like ‘call me daddy’ or use ridiculous sounding gang names, well they are still weird names but nothing like ‘heavenly death defying immortal dragon’. It sounds like a cultivation novel when it shouldn’t.
ршшишиш в котором он же не знаю где то я уже в виде не знаю где то я уже в виде престижа профессии в том что ты не хочешь не верь не знаю что ты имеешь право и я каждый день я в таком состоянии и я ршшишиш в котором он же не знаю где то я уже в виде не знаю где то я уже в виде престижа профессии в том что ты не хочешь не верь не знаю что ты имеешь право и я каждый день я в таком состоянии и я
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Just finished reading till the latest chapter. So far I have enjoyed it greatly. The only thing I recommend you improve on is the grammar and writing. Its sometimes confusing if he is thinking about or saying the words since you sometimes forget the " not to mention you sometimes call females with male pronouns, but other than that great work. Hope to see your story develop even further and become greater~!
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A big mess with an op mc and lot of plot holes. ............................................................................................................................................