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Can You Trust Me?
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"Urgghhh…" Francis suddenly fell on his knees and vomiting blood. His face turned really pale and he look so weak.
I, who had just entered his office, hurriedly took a handkerchief and approached him. "What happened? This is not your first time vomiting blood!" I asked, pretending to panic. I knew the reason why he was in this state, it was because I poisoned him.
"Cough… cough…" he coughed as he was vomiting blood. "I'm fine. As you said this is not my first time vomiting blood so I can handle it." He said after he stopped vomiting blood.
"But I guess you have to stop pretending." He paused and moved his body closer to me. "Charlize," he whispered right to my ears. He still looked so weak due to the poison but he seemed like already used to it. "I know it is you who make me in this state."
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Hi everyone!!!
Thank you for supporting me this far, and sorry for not continuing this work. Somehow I lost my pace and mood regarding this work, so I just can't continue.
This story actually ended with Francis and Olivia living happily ever after as the crown prince and princess, with their supporter still working with them.
Once again, I'm sorry about this, and thank you for your support.
I will be back with a new and fresh story
see you
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Can you trust me? Wow! The plot is great and I'm sure there will be superb twists along the journey of Olivia that the author is preparing for the readers! [img=recommend]
Read it and read it and read it and read it... and read it. Intense storyline? Check. Stable story development? Check. Writing quality? Neglectable mistakes. Character development? Check. Overall? Astounding.
A great story, but need a little bit for the grammar and the explanation needs a bit more wide so people would know where you are and where are they. But overall is good. As an author, I would like to have a chat with you, but your discord link somehow already expired. I was hoping to discuss about some ideas if you would like to. Sorry if I'm being rude like this.
Nice opening! You can improve your grammar a bit and be sure to edit it in the future. I really like the story by the way. I can say that potential is there and it cuddles my heart. Loved it ❤️ Grammarly will solve some of your problems but I suggest reading poetic books to see the fluency in them. I Gotta say your story will have a chance when it reached 100k words! Good luck and see you in December! If you know what I mean hehe 👍
It's really great!! I just started reading so I can't tell about the whole, but the starting is really good and interesting. I look forward to reading more chapters!. Keep it up author! :D
5/5 stars right away The story line is mind blowing. Not gonna lie, I was hooked on this novel right away from the first chapter. Besides that, the synopsis quite attention grasping. This novel is just perfect !! Must read itttt. keep up !!
First of all this is my review based on my reading of first few chapters. initially I had different thoughts about the book guessing from its name. I'm utterly surprised by the story. the female lead Olivia is clever vicious and sharp in her work. the male lead Francis has a lot of potential to grow and the author had done a great job in describing and writing out both the lead characters. I am sure that layer in the story the fl might regret her wrongdoings and will make an attempt at redemption. I'm so excited and will in to read more
So far, I love this book. There are a lot of plot twists and Olivia keeps surprising me. One moment she's on Francis side, the other, one her family's side. It really keeps me on my toes to find out who's side Olivia is truly on. Great story, I totally recommend it.
I'm biased when it comes to genres like this but this one I can say is really a good read even if you don't like this kind of stories. keep it up author
When I read the first chapter it gives me interest to read more! after all this novel seems to be promising and interesting to read! keep it up and goodluck!
it was a superb story. It is very interested. keep it up, author! you had made an amazing plot. this webnovel is marvellous. 👍👍👍. . . . .
The story is great a little confusing on who the main Character of the story or is there multiple characters. anyway good Job on what you doing and keep up the work.
I liked how I got a certain British feel from the characters and the setting. Also, the fact that the story is told from different POVs is another interesting aspect. It helps one immerse in the characters' mind. I also liked how we find out very quickly about the MC's task. I wouldn't have minded a surprise along the way, but it was enjoyable like that as well. Makes their interactions all the more entertaining since we already know about her. Hope to see what happens next with the two protagonists. 😄
Kudos to the author for writing this novel. The plot is mind blowing and the character development too. You can't resist yourself from reading more. Keep it up, author.
The story is interesting, your plot is great, yes it has a few grammatical problem but that is normal, your characters are great and your pacing is good, over all an amazing read. Keep up the good work and good luck author your book has a lot of potential.
hmm, the story is having a new turn here I really like how she helps the prince, there are some mistakes while writing but those will diminish with updates as the author seems to improve. And the plot is interesting would love to read forward
The story plot line is very intriguing. I like the characters a lot. The pacing is also on par. Keep up the good work author! Looking forward to more chapters.
I have to admit that the storyline is my favourite part about this book, I immediately was hooked and couldn't stop reading each chapter. I can't want for more 🤗
5/5 (*≧ω≦*) Interesting plot ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ Creative way of storytelling ヽ(o＾▽＾o)ノ I think the pacing is just right! (＠＾◡＾) Good job and pls continue~ (o´▽`o)
This is an awesome story! I love Olivia soooo much. It's so cool to slowly find out more about her backstory and about Roosevelt as well. I like how the plot gets more intense as you keep reading. Good job author!