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Can you trust me? Wow! The plot is great and I'm sure there will be superb twists along the journey of Olivia that the author is preparing for the readers! [img=recommend]
Read it and read it and read it and read it... and read it. Intense storyline? Check. Stable story development? Check. Writing quality? Neglectable mistakes. Character development? Check. Overall? Astounding.
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I'm not a person that read more of historical, things like Duke but seriously author... your book caught my attention, the first chapter was a very nice start. Good job dear author. keep it up🙏
A great story, but need a little bit for the grammar and the explanation needs a bit more wide so people would know where you are and where are they. But overall is good. As an author, I would like to have a chat with you, but your discord link somehow already expired. I was hoping to discuss about some ideas if you would like to. Sorry if I'm being rude like this.
5/5 stars right away The story line is mind blowing. Not gonna lie, I was hooked on this novel right away from the first chapter. Besides that, the synopsis quite attention grasping. This novel is just perfect !! Must read itttt. keep up !!
Here are my thoughts based from what I read so far: World Building: The world building in this novel is quite simple, but yet have deeper things such as an interesting and possibility a complex politic vibes. Therefore, I believe the author will give more exploitation about the world itself, to make the world more intriguing to explore. Character: I do like the author give two point of view of the main character Olivia and Francis. They POV also spoke in somehow different demeanor with one another which is pretty interesting. But, I do believe the author will give a deeper exploitation and development about their dynamic and relationship between those two character. The side characters are also fines, I guess and I can see some development on them in later's chapter. Overall, the novel is pretty good read and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!
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First of all this is my review based on my reading of first few chapters. initially I had different thoughts about the book guessing from its name. I'm utterly surprised by the story. the female lead Olivia is clever vicious and sharp in her work. the male lead Francis has a lot of potential to grow and the author had done a great job in describing and writing out both the lead characters. I am sure that layer in the story the fl might regret her wrongdoings and will make an attempt at redemption. I'm so excited and will in to read more
So far, I love this book. There are a lot of plot twists and Olivia keeps surprising me. One moment she's on Francis side, the other, one her family's side. It really keeps me on my toes to find out who's side Olivia is truly on. Great story, I totally recommend it.
I'm biased when it comes to genres like this but this one I can say is really a good read even if you don't like this kind of stories. keep it up author
When I read the first chapter it gives me interest to read more! after all this novel seems to be promising and interesting to read! keep it up and goodluck!
it was a superb story. It is very interested. keep it up, author! you had made an amazing plot. this webnovel is marvellous. 👍👍👍. . . . .
The story is great a little confusing on who the main Character of the story or is there multiple characters. anyway good Job on what you doing and keep up the work.
I liked how I got a certain British feel from the characters and the setting. Also, the fact that the story is told from different POVs is another interesting aspect. It helps one immerse in the characters' mind. I also liked how we find out very quickly about the MC's task. I wouldn't have minded a surprise along the way, but it was enjoyable like that as well. Makes their interactions all the more entertaining since we already know about her. Hope to see what happens next with the two protagonists. 😄
Kudos to the author for writing this novel. The plot is mind blowing and the character development too. You can't resist yourself from reading more. Keep it up, author.
The story is interesting, your plot is great, yes it has a few grammatical problem but that is normal, your characters are great and your pacing is good, over all an amazing read. Keep up the good work and good luck author your book has a lot of potential.
hmm, the story is having a new turn here I really like how she helps the prince, there are some mistakes while writing but those will diminish with updates as the author seems to improve. And the plot is interesting would love to read forward
Nice opening! You can improve your grammar a bit and be sure to edit it in the future. I really like the story by the way. I can say that potential is there and it cuddles my heart. Loved it ❤️ Grammarly will solve some of your problems but I suggest reading poetic books to see the fluency in them. I Gotta say your story will have a chance when it reached 100k words! Good luck and see you in December! If you know what I mean hehe 👍
The story plot line is very intriguing. I like the characters a lot. The pacing is also on par. Keep up the good work author! Looking forward to more chapters.
I have to admit that the storyline is my favourite part about this book, I immediately was hooked and couldn't stop reading each chapter. I can't want for more 🤗
5/5 (*≧ω≦*) Interesting plot ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ Creative way of storytelling ヽ(o＾▽＾o)ノ I think the pacing is just right! (＠＾◡＾) Good job and pls continue~ (o´▽`o)
I really liked it! The dialogues and story line seems good. I was especially attracted towards the changing of POV's as it was done really well. Will be waiting for more chaps from this Author. Keep it up!
A British Historical Drama written like a Chinese one, in a way. Quite an intriguing blend, and I am surprised how long the story kept me onto itself.
The story is inetresting and it has a good plot. I think the characters needs more emotions and personality but I think it could be shown as the story goes on. There were few grammatical erros but nothing is too major that cannot be fixed through redditing and proof reading.
Excellent Work. The synopsis, the characters, the writing quality, and the story development... great. There are not many chapters but these chapters are more than enough to show the story potential. And it has great potential, especially in the author's hand. You're doing an excellent job, keep it up.
the story is interesting, that intro, Oof. I like how the chapters are from point of view of different characters. it's a whole new concept to me. I like this concept, it's something I did like to see more of.
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The story looks promising :) just minor details about the grammars and such. Overall its a balance story and every chapters move the plot. :) Keep up the good work
The story unfolds in a very nice way. The Point of View goes to and fro with Olivia and Francis. Although many this are still nebulous the story is alluring.
It's a very good story' and I'm so interested to read a new chapter . The background of this story' Is very good too . Your writing quality not bad too
This is an awesome story! I love Olivia soooo much. It's so cool to slowly find out more about her backstory and about Roosevelt as well. I like how the plot gets more intense as you keep reading. Good job author!
Can you trust me? Wow! The plot is great and I'm sure there will be superb twists along the journey of Olivia that the author is preparing for the readers! [img=recommend]
Read it and read it and read it and read it... and read it. Intense storyline? Check. Stable story development? Check. Writing quality? Neglectable mistakes. Character development? Check. Overall? Astounding.
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I'm not a person that read more of historical, things like Duke but seriously author... your book caught my attention, the first chapter was a very nice start. Good job dear author. keep it up🙏
A great story, but need a little bit for the grammar and the explanation needs a bit more wide so people would know where you are and where are they. But overall is good. As an author, I would like to have a chat with you, but your discord link somehow already expired. I was hoping to discuss about some ideas if you would like to. Sorry if I'm being rude like this.
5/5 stars right away The story line is mind blowing. Not gonna lie, I was hooked on this novel right away from the first chapter. Besides that, the synopsis quite attention grasping. This novel is just perfect !! Must read itttt. keep up !!
Here are my thoughts based from what I read so far: World Building: The world building in this novel is quite simple, but yet have deeper things such as an interesting and possibility a complex politic vibes. Therefore, I believe the author will give more exploitation about the world itself, to make the world more intriguing to explore. Character: I do like the author give two point of view of the main character Olivia and Francis. They POV also spoke in somehow different demeanor with one another which is pretty interesting. But, I do believe the author will give a deeper exploitation and development about their dynamic and relationship between those two character. The side characters are also fines, I guess and I can see some development on them in later's chapter. Overall, the novel is pretty good read and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!
Revelar spoiler First of all this is my review based on my reading of first few chapters. initially I had different thoughts about the book guessing from its name. I'm utterly surprised by the story. the female lead Olivia is clever vicious and sharp in her work. the male lead Francis has a lot of potential to grow and the author had done a great job in describing and writing out both the lead characters. I am sure that layer in the story the fl might regret her wrongdoings and will make an attempt at redemption. I'm so excited and will in to read more
So far, I love this book. There are a lot of plot twists and Olivia keeps surprising me. One moment she's on Francis side, the other, one her family's side. It really keeps me on my toes to find out who's side Olivia is truly on. Great story, I totally recommend it.
I'm biased when it comes to genres like this but this one I can say is really a good read even if you don't like this kind of stories. keep it up author
When I read the first chapter it gives me interest to read more! after all this novel seems to be promising and interesting to read! keep it up and goodluck!
it was a superb story. It is very interested. keep it up, author! you had made an amazing plot. this webnovel is marvellous. 👍👍👍. . . . .
The story is great a little confusing on who the main Character of the story or is there multiple characters. anyway good Job on what you doing and keep up the work.
I liked how I got a certain British feel from the characters and the setting. Also, the fact that the story is told from different POVs is another interesting aspect. It helps one immerse in the characters' mind. I also liked how we find out very quickly about the MC's task. I wouldn't have minded a surprise along the way, but it was enjoyable like that as well. Makes their interactions all the more entertaining since we already know about her. Hope to see what happens next with the two protagonists. 😄
Kudos to the author for writing this novel. The plot is mind blowing and the character development too. You can't resist yourself from reading more. Keep it up, author.
The story is interesting, your plot is great, yes it has a few grammatical problem but that is normal, your characters are great and your pacing is good, over all an amazing read. Keep up the good work and good luck author your book has a lot of potential.
hmm, the story is having a new turn here I really like how she helps the prince, there are some mistakes while writing but those will diminish with updates as the author seems to improve. And the plot is interesting would love to read forward
Nice opening! You can improve your grammar a bit and be sure to edit it in the future. I really like the story by the way. I can say that potential is there and it cuddles my heart. Loved it ❤️ Grammarly will solve some of your problems but I suggest reading poetic books to see the fluency in them. I Gotta say your story will have a chance when it reached 100k words! Good luck and see you in December! If you know what I mean hehe 👍
The story plot line is very intriguing. I like the characters a lot. The pacing is also on par. Keep up the good work author! Looking forward to more chapters.
I have to admit that the storyline is my favourite part about this book, I immediately was hooked and couldn't stop reading each chapter. I can't want for more 🤗
5/5 (*≧ω≦*) Interesting plot ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ Creative way of storytelling ヽ(o＾▽＾o)ノ I think the pacing is just right! (＠＾◡＾) Good job and pls continue~ (o´▽`o)
I really liked it! The dialogues and story line seems good. I was especially attracted towards the changing of POV's as it was done really well. Will be waiting for more chaps from this Author. Keep it up!
A British Historical Drama written like a Chinese one, in a way. Quite an intriguing blend, and I am surprised how long the story kept me onto itself.
The story is inetresting and it has a good plot. I think the characters needs more emotions and personality but I think it could be shown as the story goes on. There were few grammatical erros but nothing is too major that cannot be fixed through redditing and proof reading.
Excellent Work. The synopsis, the characters, the writing quality, and the story development... great. There are not many chapters but these chapters are more than enough to show the story potential. And it has great potential, especially in the author's hand. You're doing an excellent job, keep it up.
the story is interesting, that intro, Oof. I like how the chapters are from point of view of different characters. it's a whole new concept to me. I like this concept, it's something I did like to see more of.
Revelar spoiler The story looks promising :) just minor details about the grammars and such. Overall its a balance story and every chapters move the plot. :) Keep up the good work
The story unfolds in a very nice way. The Point of View goes to and fro with Olivia and Francis. Although many this are still nebulous the story is alluring.
It's a very good story' and I'm so interested to read a new chapter . The background of this story' Is very good too . Your writing quality not bad too
This is an awesome story! I love Olivia soooo much. It's so cool to slowly find out more about her backstory and about Roosevelt as well. I like how the plot gets more intense as you keep reading. Good job author!