Marvel: Video Game Templates!

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Pizzeroos

Bro my head hurts cos u keep on repeating stuffs 😭

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Chunale

Felt like AI was writing this. Too much unnecessary words explaining the same thing over and over again.

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ArcAng3l

Loving the book so far man!! Keep them chapters coming.

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i_like_catwoman

for the next template , here are some that i hope you will consider delsin rowe ( infamous second son ) dante ( devil may cry ) as they are strong but not too strong for marvel and for really strong characters kratos ( god of war ) sun wukong ( black myth wukong ) and you cannot forget elden ring and Hogwarts legacy for magic based powers and you should also add a shop where mc can buy the weapons of the template like Dante's rebellion and kratos blades of chaos

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DaoistXs9r4W

En lo personal creo que la idea era interesante pero tiene mucho por mejorar empezando desde el principio más que todo la forma en que de repente paso a decir que están asustado e impotente a convertirse en un asesino despiadado que podía escapar con facilidad, primero que hay que hacer en una historia es lograr cercanía o simpatía del lector por el personaje y luego volver más poderoso haciéndolo pasar por dificultades reales en un proceso de al menos algunos capítulos ya que de otra forma se siente forzado o como si el protagonista no se mereciera ese poder, también me parece que hay muchas lagunas como por ejemplo porque agentes de hidra que deberían haber pasado por entrenamiento militar, combate, espía, sicológico entre otros como de tortura y tener lavado de cerebro para morir por una causa se asustarían y entraran en pánico tan fácilmente, en esas condiciones no deberia haber salido ileso de su primera batalla, además de como logro averiguar toda estructura de la base secreta y horarios de los guardias si en teoría solo debería conocer el camino y las salas a las donde lo mantuvieron encerrado y entrenado, además de que los métodos de hidra tienden a ser extremadamente meticulosos y engañosos utilizando a su hermana como una amenaza y un seguro para mantenerlo obediente y leal.

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Project_Paladin

This is a really good story, we have a good balance between plot and action, the characters have meaningful interactions and the idea behind this is just great, on top of that the system is only there to give power through the struggles and growth of the Mc not to give missions or control him.

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Aayush_storms

This deserves 5 stars hope you complete this fic keep up the great work.

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Silas_Savitar_

I really like it so far, grammar is fine, MC is well constructed and not overpowered, new chapters regularly. One of the better Marvel fiction, hope it stays this good.

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LAMPSHAD3

The grammar is a little bad, but not terrible. Everything else is great. It's one of the better Marvel fics.

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Zeikfried

The SI is subsumed by the OC, but the problem is that there is zero character development. That means that when the main character goes out to do his thing, the motivation is 1 dimensional (revenge). There isn't a puddle of depth to what he's actually trying to accomplish or what he's going to do later on. I'm fairly certain the video game aspect of this story is interchangeable with any other power/system/cheat. It's probably not going to impact the narrative in any meaningful way aside from letting the MC stomp all his enemies.

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gutless

good writing and the themes done right so far. he doesn't progress too fast or too slow either.

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Mike_Davis

it's kept me interested and annoyance free up till chap 30 were I'm stuck now waiting for the author's next chap. REALLY the fans need better basement guards. find him and stick him back in.

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vihanga

is author going to drop the novel.author took too long to release chapters. In the beginning author posted at least two chapters a day. so i want to know when will be the next chapter be uploaded.

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vihanga

did the author drop the novel. a good marvel novel.powers,mc personality,hela as wife is just right for me. and if author still writing you can use league of legends as next game.It have a loft of characters for templates.

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AmericanNinja85

Awesome book! Need more chapters ASAP! Great MC!

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ashu_dhatrak

gud shit keep up the work my good sir .........................................................................................................................................................................................

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Arif_Y

Sangat menarik ,yah walaupun ada beberapa yang tidak ku mengerti seperti kenapa MC memiliki bekas luka dari pelatihan hydra walaupun dia punya faktor penyembuhan super

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RamenRonin

Great writing and hope you keep writing it's going good so far.

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SwordDomainGod1

This has to be written by AI cause the text is horrible beyond understanding, constantly repetitions and illogical paragraphs that stretches scenes for literally no reason other than word-count in a very unnatural way.

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DaoistEUzTf1

Bro, what would you think about writing a fanfic in which the protagonist is reincarnated in MHA with a quirk based on Nox's abilities from the wakfu series, that is, he can use wakfu and can use his spells to stop time and control his sword? needle with the wakfu, that would be very epic