The Eternal Emperor

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Danse_Macabre_

For this idea I can't give anything than 5.

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owen3242

What can I say this is a very good book the chapter is a well organised the writing is smooth there's not many mistakes if any in the spelling just give it a read and if you'd like this type of thing of a smart strong protagonist taking the reins then you're enjoy it if you don't like that don't read it because you won't enjoy it. Author you've done a great job here and hopefully you continue to.

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VonBritannia

sensational. lelouch in star wars is a match made in heavan.

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Dros_Sant

So far so good as of chapter 5 it’s a incredibley Intresting concept for a Star Wars story. While some of the writing seems to be ai generated most of the time the writing is solid the only complaints I have is the pacing the story is going so fast that we don’t get to see leoluche build up his relationships, reputation and power it’s just told to the reader in a few paragraphs. I hope it was only fast paced at the start to get to the clone wars and it’ll slow done if it does then this story has great potential.

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Mansey

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Leylin_Blackwood

Alright, I like this story, I really do. Lelouch is one of my favorite characters across the board, so I was already hooked when I found a fic that gave out relatively stable updates with him in it. Now for the good. The story is unique, and the author clearly knows the verse, and is capable of working around it to make something new. The characters are overall well made, and each possess a unique voice, so well done. My only real gripe with the story is that it is clear that you have been using ChatGPT to 'polish' your story. I can understand the alure of using it, but it drags your writing down a lot, or at least that is my opinion. I would recommend only asking it to check for spelling errors and have it tell you where they are. It would allow you to improve your writing while giving us all a better experience. But other than that, I really like the story, and give it a strong 4/5 overall.

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DaoistglM5nf

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amir_mohebbi

more please......................................

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N1ture

Nothing else but 5 is worthy of this novel

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Servan

awesome..,....,...........................

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Jarod_Lane_8547

THIS IS AN AWESOME FANFICTION. I would recommend this to anyone that’s a fan of Star Wars and Code Geass

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Bryson_Smith

Absolutely love the concept and the execution presents more than you could ask for from a fanfinc. Superb read!

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mmkmk

I like it!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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A_British_Person

The concept is rlly interesting and the execution is excellent!! I would definitely recommend this 2 anyone! 5 stars 🌟

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Jarod_Lane_8547

THIS IDEA IS AMAZING PLEASE DO NOT DROP I BEG OF YOU OH GREAT AUTHOR

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thegreat_beaver

I need some good SW fanfic recommendations. please enlighten me

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MIWMEUPFPOKOLMMRWA

By far the best Star Wars fan fic 😁🔥. Keep it up and please don’t drop this gem of a story .