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pretty slow novel but I liked it. Don't know why there are so many one star review without any actual criticism............................................................................................
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This is one of the greatest Naruto fan-fics I have ever read. The mc is great has a good brain. I like how used the white zetsus like that very creative and logical. I hope to see more of this story .
It's too boring. The characters don't feel real, the story events are mainly summarized instead of told, and a lot of focus is put into really mundane interactions. I find myself skipping over walls of text of literally nothing, just meaningless words present to fill up the word count. The comedy tag is a lie. This story also suffers from the age of the mc. Tagged with R18 and romance, one would think there would at least be a female interest. However, the story's mc starts at the age of 4 years old and everything progresses at a snails pace, 70+ chapters in and the only female he's talked to is his adoptive sister, who married another guy. The only good aspect of the story was the training, but that was often sidelined in favor of the MC's long internal monologues about the ninja world that he has no power to change. Newsflash, he definitely could, just doesn't bother to even try anything. Super boring salted fish character that does nothing except trying to nonsensically become stronger. Overall I would not recommend reading.
trash fanfic, good grammar, tl's not good picking bad stories like this, this fanfic prolonged shiet but nothing really changes with the story.
useless story. It is just mindlessly following the plot. no changes is made apart from the book being written in ov pov. only extra thing he did was making a medicine/drug to make uchihas look better but no result is observed in the view of uchiha. he meets tsunade and she learns the way to use lightning chakra to stimulate heart and then he's forgotten by her and she doesn't appear again. his sister is also forgotten and no mention of her after the initial war phase. not even if she is alive or not. he's completed many infiltration method but is still a relatively unknown guy among konoha and other villages with no huge bounty on his head. he has just killed some no name ninjas because the author comes up with bullshit reasons to avoid killing the named characters to prevent the dismissal of plot like not using his full powers. he even wonders if destiny is set. so wtf is even the reason for the story. plot is not gonna be followed which means uchihas are likely going to be massacred. after all the years he's still not heavily strong. the story is just running at snail's pace with no power to keep the readers involved if u search for some quality work. imo don't read the story.
Una historia bastante entretenida, el desarrollo de la trama está bien construido y su velocidad es fluido con bastantes detalles en el combate y la guerra, se va notando la evolución progresiva del MC tanto en poder como en carácter y tiene sus objetivos y metas bien claras 😄🤙🏻
Mc shit and apparently still doesn't have a love interest 130 chapters in. Also, no girls seem to like him despite him being strong and handsome. The Mc himself is boring and the story doesn't help, it's equally if not more boring. Don't waste your time on this obvious cash grab.
incredible story of incredible development, all that's missing now is to find a romantic partner for our protagonist
The story is very well written and the progress is more believable. I am not sure why it is rated below 4, but the story is written very well
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thanks for the fanfic it is my first fanfic and i really like it .................................................................................
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I really enjoy this fanfic first of all MC is not some op character young age like most fanfic were the MC is op at the age of 10 or 11 second is that most jutsu are from the original which is pretty good also they are divided correctly like jonin from land of earth are not using jutsu from land of lighting third it is slow pace but worth it
4.8 if you're not into a slow burn kind of novel, this ain't for you. MC ain't OP as in Super OP, "almost" OP is what I can say. hope this continues
I'd say semi-realistic SI/OC character development in a well known plot line. Good pacing with a nice view into operations of the 3rd ninja war.
I understand if you write a negative review because the novel isn't good... but giving it a bad rating solely because the plot is slow and 'boring'? There are times when I don't understand people. Although it is true that the grammar is poor at times. But for now, it's the only flaw I see...
A failed novel, as if it were a Chinese novel. Imagine he wants to enter a state of Senjutsu, and he hasn't even mastered chakra well? What is this stupidity? He hasn't even learned how to fight, hahaha. Brother, whoever reads this garbage and sees it as normal, congratulations on your backward mind. In addition to that, it's aimless, boring, and frankly negative.
This is an underapreciatted Great novel. The pacing problem go away after the 15~ cap. The MC is not op, but he is not unrealistic weak after years of training.
It's a complete copy of canon doesn't change anything, chapter 133. The MC character doesn't make an effort to change the story, everything happens the same until Minato dies! Surely the Uchiha massacre will also happen the same, the MC is just a spectator in the world of Naruto.
Whats the chiinese raw for this story? its an admittedly good translation but maybe you should provide the raw in the synopsis to give credit to the og
good if your bored out of your skull 25 ch in and i was ready to smash my phone just to end the monologue
I like the history, keep doing a good job, thanks for the updates. .............................. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::
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pretty slow novel but I liked it. Don't know why there are so many one star review without any actual criticism............................................................................................
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This is one of the greatest Naruto fan-fics I have ever read. The mc is great has a good brain. I like how used the white zetsus like that very creative and logical. I hope to see more of this story .
It's too boring. The characters don't feel real, the story events are mainly summarized instead of told, and a lot of focus is put into really mundane interactions. I find myself skipping over walls of text of literally nothing, just meaningless words present to fill up the word count. The comedy tag is a lie. This story also suffers from the age of the mc. Tagged with R18 and romance, one would think there would at least be a female interest. However, the story's mc starts at the age of 4 years old and everything progresses at a snails pace, 70+ chapters in and the only female he's talked to is his adoptive sister, who married another guy. The only good aspect of the story was the training, but that was often sidelined in favor of the MC's long internal monologues about the ninja world that he has no power to change. Newsflash, he definitely could, just doesn't bother to even try anything. Super boring salted fish character that does nothing except trying to nonsensically become stronger. Overall I would not recommend reading.
trash fanfic, good grammar, tl's not good picking bad stories like this, this fanfic prolonged shiet but nothing really changes with the story.
useless story. It is just mindlessly following the plot. no changes is made apart from the book being written in ov pov. only extra thing he did was making a medicine/drug to make uchihas look better but no result is observed in the view of uchiha. he meets tsunade and she learns the way to use lightning chakra to stimulate heart and then he's forgotten by her and she doesn't appear again. his sister is also forgotten and no mention of her after the initial war phase. not even if she is alive or not. he's completed many infiltration method but is still a relatively unknown guy among konoha and other villages with no huge bounty on his head. he has just killed some no name ninjas because the author comes up with bullshit reasons to avoid killing the named characters to prevent the dismissal of plot like not using his full powers. he even wonders if destiny is set. so wtf is even the reason for the story. plot is not gonna be followed which means uchihas are likely going to be massacred. after all the years he's still not heavily strong. the story is just running at snail's pace with no power to keep the readers involved if u search for some quality work. imo don't read the story.
Una historia bastante entretenida, el desarrollo de la trama está bien construido y su velocidad es fluido con bastantes detalles en el combate y la guerra, se va notando la evolución progresiva del MC tanto en poder como en carácter y tiene sus objetivos y metas bien claras 😄🤙🏻
Mc shit and apparently still doesn't have a love interest 130 chapters in. Also, no girls seem to like him despite him being strong and handsome. The Mc himself is boring and the story doesn't help, it's equally if not more boring. Don't waste your time on this obvious cash grab.
incredible story of incredible development, all that's missing now is to find a romantic partner for our protagonist
The story is very well written and the progress is more believable. I am not sure why it is rated below 4, but the story is written very well
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thanks for the fanfic it is my first fanfic and i really like it .................................................................................
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I really enjoy this fanfic first of all MC is not some op character young age like most fanfic were the MC is op at the age of 10 or 11 second is that most jutsu are from the original which is pretty good also they are divided correctly like jonin from land of earth are not using jutsu from land of lighting third it is slow pace but worth it
4.8 if you're not into a slow burn kind of novel, this ain't for you. MC ain't OP as in Super OP, "almost" OP is what I can say. hope this continues
I'd say semi-realistic SI/OC character development in a well known plot line. Good pacing with a nice view into operations of the 3rd ninja war.
I understand if you write a negative review because the novel isn't good... but giving it a bad rating solely because the plot is slow and 'boring'? There are times when I don't understand people. Although it is true that the grammar is poor at times. But for now, it's the only flaw I see...
A failed novel, as if it were a Chinese novel. Imagine he wants to enter a state of Senjutsu, and he hasn't even mastered chakra well? What is this stupidity? He hasn't even learned how to fight, hahaha. Brother, whoever reads this garbage and sees it as normal, congratulations on your backward mind. In addition to that, it's aimless, boring, and frankly negative.
This is an underapreciatted Great novel. The pacing problem go away after the 15~ cap. The MC is not op, but he is not unrealistic weak after years of training.
It's a complete copy of canon doesn't change anything, chapter 133. The MC character doesn't make an effort to change the story, everything happens the same until Minato dies! Surely the Uchiha massacre will also happen the same, the MC is just a spectator in the world of Naruto.
Whats the chiinese raw for this story? its an admittedly good translation but maybe you should provide the raw in the synopsis to give credit to the og
good if your bored out of your skull 25 ch in and i was ready to smash my phone just to end the monologue
I like the history, keep doing a good job, thanks for the updates. .............................. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::
Entertaining keep the chapters coming. .