how can you say its been edited when my dog can produce better grammar then this shit
come back to this book!!!! we need more of it!!!
ill give 3 stars as i made it a few chapters in its a good concept but you need to get a proofreader or something because its all over the place. but im dropping this fic good luck.
so far so good 2 chapters down i look forward to more just keep writing dont listen to haters and take criticism with a grain of salt. write the story you want to see.
out of curiosity did you steal this from another author or did you simply take parts from another fic and not give credit?
you have seen or at least heard of Supernatural right? i mean the show has legit god angels demons and more... how are a bunch of vampires werewolves and witches considered above gods?
Let me reiterate this is not a story where some kid comes into the TVD universe which is, in my opinion, the most dangerous supernatural world in fiction and runs ramshot over everyone.
Primordial Vampire Tvd/To
TV · Brogdawg32
Ten minutes later, and a few potions to make sure everything was fine down there, Thor and I made a blood agreement to never attack each other's nuts, and so the nut treaty of peace came into existance.
MARVEL: GAMER PATH
Movies · CORNBRINGER
you've never had real friends if you havent done nut tapping with friends. or maybe its a military thing come to think of it....[img=proud]
Ten minutes later, and a few potions to make sure everything was fine down there, Thor and I made a blood agreement to never attack each other's nuts, and so the nut treaty of peace came into existance.
MARVEL: GAMER PATH
Movies · CORNBRINGER
so..... you like stealing pther peoples works?? from fanfiction and not even giving them credit
so far so good. i enjoyed it better then the other few pjo fics on here keep it up
Percy Jackson - Stone Monkey
Anime & Comics · Mamon_Lucifer