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The potential of your story is good, but there are a few areas where you can improve. Firstly, you should work on improving your writing style. Additionally, it's important to pay attention to grammar and make necessary corrections. One suggestion is to have others read your work and provide feedback so that you can better understand what you're writing. Overall, focusing on these areas will help enhance your writing.
ESTA BUENISIMO 10 DE 10 ES HERMOSA ES EXQUISITO DEVO DECIRLO ESRESV UN GRAN GENIO...................................................................................... Y QUE ESTO SIGA MEJORANDO
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Usually I don't read Marvel and DC mashed up universe fics so much but this one is a hidden gem which is very fun to read. The only issues are typos and grammar. However, this story is pure entertainment
Это ппц . История очень вынужденая , бетмен тупой , не параноик , все тупые . Это больно читать. Мир супер дырявый. Гг странный. Я вообще хз как мыслил автор. Этот отзыв всё равно никто или почти никто не поймёт . В отзывах боты . Этот удалят Xd .
Me pareció muy entretenido, me gusta cómo haces tu versión de la historia, a diferencia de otros la tuya es la mejor. Muchas gracias por su trabajo eres el mejor
I love the story, but the writing is terrible; it feels like a bad translation. On one hand, you can tell the author did some research, but at the same time, it seems like he didn't do any. Please let me know when someone will edit or rewrite this fan fiction.
Is it mtl ? The writing style and word choices are extremely Chinese. First 4 chapters were good. But then mtl started showing. And some with Rick's intelligent & not drugged to gills being so blaze about his security is... idk.
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overall I like this fic. but is the Mc still his age or was he forced to age with the merge of ricks soul? so is he still young or now old?
I give it 5 stars because it doesn't deserve to have 3.59 stars at least it should have 4 stars
Unless they've gone back and fixed it people are being over dramatic about the grammar. It's fine. I enjoyed the story. It's at least worth a try imo.
I don't know what to say I saw Rick and Morty and this guy is nothing like rick I mean helping batman and fighting villains I don't know maybe you want rick be a hero and it's okay he is not completely rick so he can be hero but fighting a villain with batman and he is not even ready completely and someone as smart as him should know throwing villains is useless and development is so slow I know he shouldn't be op but he in 50 chapter if he really gives his best try he should be able to take down at least half of the justice league otherwise it's a insult to rick in rick and Morty well this my thoughts maybe some of you like it
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The writing quality seems to have gone up. So u can understand it. But the writing at the beginning still makes no sense and is written like a person who just took iowaska and acid at the same time. Then, if i could give a negative in the character design, i would. I dont want to read a story about an 21 year old that looks like an old man. This may be good for some people i just can't see it.
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English is not my native language so I translate it into Spanish and there are no dramatic problems. The story is quite good, it's just that the chapters are a little short.
Grammar has improved and is more readable compared to before, keep working on it Good Luck. .......................................................
some bad points. the story sometimes becomes unnecessarily complicated. like him explaining the components of the Laser weapon. it just needs to be believable that he can make a laser gun out of a car. The grammar has to improve and it has to be more interesting. Chapter 1 is very good grammatically and is interesting because it is not that complicated. Just remember that this is just my opinion. and this is more constructive criticism than anything else.
I've improved some starting chapters please read and give feedback on whether they are still readable or not if they are still bad then I'll try to improve them again just keep supporting and I'll try my best
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It's now a solid 4.7. But if you improve your grammar it will be a 4.8👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍It is also to improve the protagonist's charm. Make it stylish.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's a translation, but it's a good read in itself. 🤓☝️..................................... . ..... ........................ .......... ..........................
It's so good, I recommend everyone to read it I want more chapters.................😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is fun. I like all the science talk and how while a bit inflate most of it is true. Also the character is fun. My biggest problem is just a problem that most translations have which is that you can tell its a translation with how the english is being used. I wouldn't even call that a problem at all. Good luck author.
The potential of your story is good, but there are a few areas where you can improve. Firstly, you should work on improving your writing style. Additionally, it's important to pay attention to grammar and make necessary corrections. One suggestion is to have others read your work and provide feedback so that you can better understand what you're writing. Overall, focusing on these areas will help enhance your writing.
ESTA BUENISIMO 10 DE 10 ES HERMOSA ES EXQUISITO DEVO DECIRLO ESRESV UN GRAN GENIO...................................................................................... Y QUE ESTO SIGA MEJORANDO
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Usually I don't read Marvel and DC mashed up universe fics so much but this one is a hidden gem which is very fun to read. The only issues are typos and grammar. However, this story is pure entertainment
Это ппц . История очень вынужденая , бетмен тупой , не параноик , все тупые . Это больно читать. Мир супер дырявый. Гг странный. Я вообще хз как мыслил автор. Этот отзыв всё равно никто или почти никто не поймёт . В отзывах боты . Этот удалят Xd .
Me pareció muy entretenido, me gusta cómo haces tu versión de la historia, a diferencia de otros la tuya es la mejor. Muchas gracias por su trabajo eres el mejor
I love the story, but the writing is terrible; it feels like a bad translation. On one hand, you can tell the author did some research, but at the same time, it seems like he didn't do any. Please let me know when someone will edit or rewrite this fan fiction.
Is it mtl ? The writing style and word choices are extremely Chinese. First 4 chapters were good. But then mtl started showing. And some with Rick's intelligent & not drugged to gills being so blaze about his security is... idk.
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overall I like this fic. but is the Mc still his age or was he forced to age with the merge of ricks soul? so is he still young or now old?
I give it 5 stars because it doesn't deserve to have 3.59 stars at least it should have 4 stars
Unless they've gone back and fixed it people are being over dramatic about the grammar. It's fine. I enjoyed the story. It's at least worth a try imo.
I don't know what to say I saw Rick and Morty and this guy is nothing like rick I mean helping batman and fighting villains I don't know maybe you want rick be a hero and it's okay he is not completely rick so he can be hero but fighting a villain with batman and he is not even ready completely and someone as smart as him should know throwing villains is useless and development is so slow I know he shouldn't be op but he in 50 chapter if he really gives his best try he should be able to take down at least half of the justice league otherwise it's a insult to rick in rick and Morty well this my thoughts maybe some of you like it
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The writing quality seems to have gone up. So u can understand it. But the writing at the beginning still makes no sense and is written like a person who just took iowaska and acid at the same time. Then, if i could give a negative in the character design, i would. I dont want to read a story about an 21 year old that looks like an old man. This may be good for some people i just can't see it.
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English is not my native language so I translate it into Spanish and there are no dramatic problems. The story is quite good, it's just that the chapters are a little short.
Grammar has improved and is more readable compared to before, keep working on it Good Luck. .......................................................
some bad points. the story sometimes becomes unnecessarily complicated. like him explaining the components of the Laser weapon. it just needs to be believable that he can make a laser gun out of a car. The grammar has to improve and it has to be more interesting. Chapter 1 is very good grammatically and is interesting because it is not that complicated. Just remember that this is just my opinion. and this is more constructive criticism than anything else.
I've improved some starting chapters please read and give feedback on whether they are still readable or not if they are still bad then I'll try to improve them again just keep supporting and I'll try my best
Marvel: Fusion its on mtl novel fgrgdffhfhjjgjgyjgjghjhjdfsgnhmnhghnjmhgnjmk,kmjhgjmk,kmjhgfbhnjmjnhgbhnjmnjhgbhnjmnjhgfbhnmnhbgbhnjmnjhgfbnm nhbgbhnjm,jhghnjm,mjnhgbhnmnhgbhnmnjhgbhnjmnjhgbhnjm,jhgnjm,mjhghnjm, mnjhgbhnjm, mjnhnjm,mjhnjm,mjnhnjm,.kmjhygnjm,kmjhnjmk,.,kmjhnjmk,.kmjmk,.kmjhmk,.
can anyone tell the raw name of this novel 🌻💀🤣💀🎥🌟🎥🌟🤣🌟👍🌟🤣🌟🌻🌟👍🌟☕🌻🌟💀☕🌟🎂🌟💀🤣🌟🌻🌟☕🌟🌻😜☕😅🌻🌟🤣😜🎂🤣🌟🌻🌟☕😅🔜😏🤬🌟☕😴🎥🇳🇵🔜💀🧠🎥🌟🤣🇳🇵🧠🙄🔜🤪👍⭐🤬
It's now a solid 4.7. But if you improve your grammar it will be a 4.8👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍It is also to improve the protagonist's charm. Make it stylish.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's a translation, but it's a good read in itself. 🤓☝️..................................... . ..... ........................ .......... ..........................
It's so good, I recommend everyone to read it I want more chapters.................😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is fun. I like all the science talk and how while a bit inflate most of it is true. Also the character is fun. My biggest problem is just a problem that most translations have which is that you can tell its a translation with how the english is being used. I wouldn't even call that a problem at all. Good luck author.