No problem and congratulations, I still haven't start reading the fanfic but I will
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ch 46 Chapter 46 the second golem, Devastator
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wow what a mistake
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Thanks for the chapter
ch 0 3 Chapter 3): Anything in Gacha!
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yes, character development, MC doesn't even realise himself until later he's not upset that he tortured envy, she is nothing to him, but he's upset because he saw no problem with It. i could write a MC who who can resist corruption but that way he isn't a normal person anymore. anyway he doesn't really need a lot of character development but i saw a opportunity and use it to make a little character development
ch 44 Chapter 44 corrupted by power and cure for corruption
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i know and he also understand this in the next chapter, and as I said in the next chapter, it's corruption from power, he thought he can easily heal her mentally later with system or just make her forget or make up for her so he didn't have problem torturing her and he is also a amateur in changing people mind anyway later he see he could do something better than torture and us something else. in the chapter 44 he understands that he's changing, after all he's a normal man so obviously power can get in his head and and change him and when he understood that he will try everything to not let something like this happen again. anyway I'm glad my story was just ok for you, I'm new and just write something I think. thanks for your support till now
ch 43 Chapter 43 torturing Envy Adams
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no this one is right, Wallace in the movie and comic is gay
"He is my boyfriend and he's Wallace, Scott roommate who Is gay"Stacey said
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in the movie it's for Roxie and in the comic it's for Envy
"Now there was something that I have wondered since we met"he said:"will you really have an orgasm if I poke the back of your knee"oh no, how in earth he knows that? Scott? I don't think he go around and tell everyone my weak spot
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Neil Nordegraf
ch 44 Chapter 44 corrupted by power and cure for corruption
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Envy Adam
ch 44 Chapter 44 corrupted by power and cure for corruption
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Stephen stills
ch 44 Chapter 44 corrupted by power and cure for corruption
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Kim pine
ch 44 Chapter 44 corrupted by power and cure for corruption
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Ramona flowers
ch 44 Chapter 44 corrupted by power and cure for corruption
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Knives Chau
ch 44 Chapter 44 corrupted by power and cure for corruption
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Wallace Wells
ch 44 Chapter 44 corrupted by power and cure for corruption
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Scott pilgrim
ch 44 Chapter 44 corrupted by power and cure for corruption
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Todd Ingram
ch 44 Chapter 44 corrupted by power and cure for corruption
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your too late, no body really cared so i picked her name myself
ch 34 Chapter 34 running Hawkites and arriving at Arcanletia
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well I never written something dark so it's obvious I'm not good at it.
"Natalie, see you later and I leave some paper towels and a bottle of water, and I believe you already know what to do when you need to use the toilet"Edward said her real name and teleport to his home and leave the naked envy alone
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believe me Todd is strong, Edward is also really strong but remember Todd punched two big holes in the moon.Punched two giant holes in the moon that subsequently caused tons of explosions and tidal waves back on earth. he's a tier 6-A ( Continent level+ with vegan powers) character. but true power is not about who Is the strongest or fastest or the strongest. you will see how Edward will fight against todd.
ch 48 Chapter 48 some of the Klein morettie memories
In scott pilgrim vs the world and more worlds with a system
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