Aliya's Shoes

LV 13

StylesP

My fav author brought another one out!OMG! I love this. The FL draws my heartstrings so much. I don't know what is wrong with her mother because ignorance is no excuse for certain behaviours. The step-dad? He is another handful that I don't want to get into and ML? i don't even know what to feel about him.I look forward to see how these characters develop! Author-San Jiayo!

LV 15

Loctovia

« Shameless promotion » I love doing this for myself for morale boost lol 😝 . As you may have probably read from some of my other books, « who else would support me first but me? I am always my first fun 🤩 » So, I give this a solid 5 stars 🌟, not just based on nothing. It is because I know it deserves it. The book is about the trials of a young woman in both love and family. She has to face and try to win the man she has been contracted to marry. Shelby will not even try to win his heart because that will be too high of a bridge for her to climb considering that spot is already occupied. All Shelby wanted to do was her ‘duty’ and nothing else but will it ever be that easy? Join me in reading and you will love it 🥰.

LV 4

Shairree_Paladin

Thank you for another great novel !!! You are fast becoming my favourite author 🫶🏻⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Looking forward to what’s next :-)

LV 2

Aidan_Grey

While the writing style is elegant and evocative, effortlessly transporting readers into the vividly described world of the story. but it often comes across as overly descriptive and bloated. The excessive use of unnecessary details slows down the pacing and interrupts the flow of your story. but also storytelling and well-crafted characters ensure a memorable reading experience for fans of the genre. I highly recommend

LV 3

LordShivaStories

Interesting. I like the descriptive language and world building. First chapters were slightly boring for me since I don't read these kind of novels but those who do will find it good. Overall nice

LV 3

Theothegiant

going head first into the story, the characters already started off to be a "joy". The mother is basically the living definition of a snake and the father is a good-for-nothing that doesn't care about the child! What else is new- Though the female lead just takes it and goes along with everything! The drama is good in this book but there was some things that seemed off to me, like everytime shelby stutters it would be so random, almost like no thought was put into it at all, though its a small detail so i can't blame you. ((apparently wn blocks out reviews with swears and other words, please tell me if you can see this and sorry again))

LV 1

Knightofthedead

great novel fantastic, super, The story is extremely interesting release more please! I want to know what happens next please the story is very interesting

LV 2

Pixxie_Mysteria999

This is a great story and I would highly recommend others to read this book, despite its grammar issues at play here.

This story is amazing. The characters are well developed. The plot is so interesting, I even finished reading in one night 😭😭😭. I want to read more!!! Please add more🙏. I love the story.

LV 2

TakaTaka

1st chap was lil boring, but it's getting good and starting to develop well. not my kind of novel but i would love to read it, and know more about the story

LV 4

UelUel

I don't usually read romance books but with how intense the first chapter is, this book really caught my interest. Keep working to upload more chapters and keep showing how strong, proud, and beautiful the MC can be.

LV 1

rcard2go

This seems super interesting so far. I absolutely love (well love isn't the right word because I dislike most of them but this is good) the characters. There are some grammar and punctuation mistakes, but nothing major. Also, I think it would really benefit this story if the first chapter was a little more suspense-filled, but everything else about this story is awesome. Amazing novel!!

LV 1

alyyyahhh

This is super good so far! I do feel like for the genre it starts out a little slow, but after that, it gets much better. I love the detail put into character design and the writing quality is fantastic! Great work, author!!

LV 3

nekrom1

umm with the things I read so far I could say it is really good, first adds the suspense in the story from start which makes it more interesting and transition between one chapter to another was just a little rough but I Don't think that will be a problem so far it is really good, and if you keep this it will become big, best of luck.

LV 3

Jadeite_Green

I've just finished reading your story and so far, so good! I'm enjoying the way you've setting up the plot. I suggest you add more chapters to keep the momentum going. I'm looking forward to see where the story take😊.

LV 3

MIMI24

The writing is smooth and intriguing. The pacing is slow but in the first and the second chapter will feel confused what's happening, but you will understand as you read more. Name the chapters without adding the number of the chapter. It's bothersome seeing Chapter 8: chapter 7 as a title. The characters are well fleshed, The weak FL, the ignorant mother, the tyrant stepfather and the last we get to see the ML's sadness. It's a great story. I wish you luck in the competition.

LV 10

TonyaRMoore

I like what I've read so far. There are few areas where the syntax seems a bit off/unnatural but that, I think is a minor issue. For the time being, our girl seem to be the perfect victim but I hope that over time, this character will be developed to the point where she has some agency and can gather the gumption to to what it takes to save herself!

LV 2

B_l_a_n_k_2167

As a romance genre, it has quality. But the blurb could surely use some work there. Setting up the world background could use some work and overall it has lots of potential. And once again sorry for reaching out late i was kind of busy!! Gomenne!