MIMI24

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Hi, I am the author who participated with you in the summer sprinting. Four days have passed but you never updated, please kindly update the work you participated in. We are a team so to help each other. I have no other way to contact you but this, so I hope my message will be seen.

I don't think so because the scene about their childhood was described from the perspective of a six-year-old, not a teen in his 13 yo. Perhaps changing the scene would be better because the flashbacks, in my opinion, didn't show the source of their odd behaviour, it was just a glimpse of their past together with no useful information (Sorry for my speech) If the scene will not change much then perhaps the Fl will be eight and the ml will be 12 or 13. Having their parent engaged means they still have to meet so the scene will not change much apart from their reactions. I wrote a lot!

Hhh, I was just reading then, you know, I became a math freak. LOL.

Just a note: Author said Elise's mother married her stepdad 8 years ago, so Elise was 10 years old. Later on, you mentioned the flashback when Elise was 6 years old. Though her mother was not married to Dietrich's dad so why is she calling him brother? Just a small question perhaps other readers will have the same question.