Reincarnated in a Novel World

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Jat_The_King

it's a good novel with great potential but their are many grammatical errors which is not a bother but what ruins the story is use of heavy words like where you can explain in simple words why use three to four sentences or sometimes repeat same thing continually , it is understandable that author is a newbie and trying his best but he should take inspiration from other works and improve his story , author is trying to create a suspense but if you are gonna explain it in next line with a flashback what's the point of not explaining it in previous line ? Main character is young in age but If he awakened his past life memories he should be a little more mature , there are many conversations taking place but nothing makes sense at some point , it's a good story but i am a little dissatisfied with author's writing style ( not grammar ) Hope it gets better and we get more character development as in First 50 chapter there is no development in story nor in character.

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darkking496

"Read atleast till 50 chapters before you judge this novel and I'm sure that you will be hooked till that moment." Wrote the author. *Scrolls through chapters and see's chapters 45+ locked behind paywall* Huh, I see.

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Poisoncheaker

Anyone looking for an Op Mc story with a smooth story flow, this might be exactly what you enjoy.

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IamFallenAngel

Thanks for reader to give my novel a chance.And thank for all reader to pointing out my mistake or any error.I will try to improve myself as novel's chapter progess.

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Mickaelle09

Dropped at the end of the 4th chapter. Usually, when I write reviews , I try to at least talk about a book's pros. However for this one... i hadn't seen any.   So , let's get right down to the cons : - The writing style is very amateur. The first chapter and the majority of the second one were honestly , skippable.The author could have just opened up the book on the scene with the Mc measuring his talent before he revealed us he was a transmigrator and nothing would have changed.And it's all because it told us nothing useful .Plus the event that occured were explained and talked about later by the Mc . We only care about the Mc and the story when we start a book. So please focus on that rather than detailing how this character felt , which rank he got and what the instructor said. Moreover , the narration which switches to these uninteresting characters before we even know the Mc , and the writing style in itself ( structure of the sentences, words used, etc.) scream amateurism. - The writing quality is low. The author said he used ChatGPT, and it shows.The first chapter was not only badly written , the conjugation, which switches between tenses and use uncorrectly each one of them, makes the whole thing even harder to read.Add to this the many mistakes , and you  end up driven out of the story the more you read. -  The pace is slow. To give you an idea of the chapter 's length, the 4th one was 1223 words( according to the author himself). Yet it appeared to me to be more than this , because i was simply bored.Nothing exciting or intriguing happened.And the general ambiance reinforced this feeling of slowness too. - The general ambiance is like the Mc. The mc is the cold necromancer type , and so is the general vibe of the book. If only the Mc´s inner monologues contrasted his actions , or if the book jumbled with many ambiances , it would have been better. But it's all up to the author in the end. Still , for me , this book isn't the one. I pray for the author's improvement.    

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KanTakeAHint

This novel caught me by surprise, i prefer a novel where the mc is transmigrated into a novel like TAPOV(The plot twist is Crazy), which make me hooked up to this novel

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Lazy_Pen_Master

i read this book carefully. other than some grammatical errors book got good concept and has a good potential. will look forward to success of author.

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OklahomaWomb

Why are they handing out free passes to this novel if it is abandoned ???

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Piyush_Krsingh

it's such an amazing story.i loved it. [img=recommend] thanks to the author of this novel.

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Elvlin

The narrative is compelling, and the characters are well-developed. I'm eagerly anticipating the upcoming chapters. As I delved deep into the book, I noticed a few grammatical oversights, but overall, the concept is strong and holds immense potential. I'm rooting for the author's success!

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Ibee_

Honestly, the description from chapter 1-3 was well detailed. It makes readers understand the book and flows. I love this book, you've gotten a genuine reader.

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Dark_Knight_Spider

I like it and it shows how the character grows Keep on making good work Author

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young_master_ogway

haven't read the book yet but according to the reviews its going to be great so......yeah here I goo[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]

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Kanav

The beginning could have been better. And the grammar isn't all that great either. It's alright i suppose, not too bad but certainly not 'great'.

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Tazz_creativehands

The novel litty like yessss I’m loving it

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LoliCosmos

from the comments i can tell it was a great story, too bad

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Kaniu

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Dark_Knight_Spider

I am just here to review one of my favorite novels.[img=recommend]Like the work

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Kapia_Taba

so here's my review on this novel, story is good for me character are good our mc is overpowered from the start and story is little bit fast faced but it's fun to read this novel I kinda liked it, try if you like op mc from the start so try reading it 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

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Rahul_Kumar_5325

Nice story, I love it but ChatGPT ruined some enjoyment but still it is good.