Mik_Ray

Mik_Ray

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2021-12-08 Se unió United States
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Mik_Ray
Mik_Ray
16 hours ago
Commented

Should be Ms. Or Miss for single women Mrs. Are married women.

"Oh. That's okay. But what are you doing in front of my house? Come inside with me." Then he used his senses, and he found out that his wives had already gone to Training space. Then he continued to say. "it seems my wives are already gone to practice. So the house is empty now. What are you going to do Mrs. Natasha and Mrs. Aya?"

My Celestial Harem

My Celestial Harem

Fantasy · Misumi_Go

Mik_Ray
Mik_Ray
16 hours ago
Commented

I thought this was supposed to be in English

"Alright, Mulai hari ini kalian berdua akan menjadi wanitaku. Namun sebelum kalian berdua menjadi istriku, aku ingin kalian menerima my Family Seal after our first sex."

My Celestial Harem

My Celestial Harem

Fantasy · Misumi_Go

Mik_Ray
Mik_Ray
22 hours ago
Commented

Seriously if your going to take such long breaks between chapters so often make privledge smaller or release chaps from priv till u get back to help keep us into the story!

Mik_Ray
Mik_Ray
1 days ago
Commented

Uh duh just gave a token for it lol

"How do you know?" Natasha asked with a curious face.

My Celestial Harem

My Celestial Harem

Fantasy · Misumi_Go

Mik_Ray
Mik_Ray
1 days ago
Commented

Funny how they are constantly taking a 💩 on things instead of just sitting down.

Inside the office room of Red Pleasure company. The three people are inside the room. Zero and Madam Red shit on the sofa while Aya stands behind Madam Red.

My Celestial Harem

My Celestial Harem

Fantasy · Misumi_Go

Mik_Ray
Mik_Ray
1 days ago
Commented

Eh?

Dan dia terus berlanjut, berganti posisi every 20 minutes.

My Celestial Harem

My Celestial Harem

Fantasy · Misumi_Go

Mik_Ray
Mik_Ray
Mik_Ray
Mik_Ray
1 days ago
Commented

Love the concept but need to work on the smut please read these they can help with the flow!

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Mik_Ray
Mik_Ray
1 days ago
Commented

This chapter and last would of been better as optional before the first chapter most of this info prob never see again unless this novel last to 1k chap mark or so since they are in the last realm. Oh well next novel better to put in auxiliary before your first chap so people can read if wanted and make easier to reference once it is practical. Along with any cultivation levels and other info stuff that way easier to go back to if needed!