Legendary Multiversal Cafe

LV 1

EvilBlueCrystal

The protagonist dies and reincarnates into the Naruto world, to join a loving family that insists he abandons being a ninja and becomes a civilian, He is born with wings and purple star eyes but he refuses to use any of them, Instead he believes in only doing good and not getting into any conflicts, then his dad dies, everyone starts crying so he opens a bookstore, Then he is 16 his mother dies so he awakens a multiverse system that hands him coffee chakra seeds and starts selling coffee even though he said he doesn't care about money he starts calculating how much money he can make. In reality no ninja would touch coffee when they could have tea instead, they would think is poison, throw it away and then proceed to kill him. It would take centuries for anyone to accept this and someone learns about its potential Chakra-enhancing and healing properties he becomes a target. And the Hokage discovers the coffee shop and sends anbu to investigate, but the protagonist starts lecturing them that fighting is bad but obviously it doesn't work, he is too weak to do anything and doesn't want to fight so he gets saved, then they come back at night so he tells them to go away but realizes they don't care and that he will die, so they take out his shirt? his wings he never used before kill one of them, the other tries to escape but the protagonist flies up and spits coffee drowning him, so he receives rewards form the system like coffee bloodline and gender-bend potions, he cries and so Kakashi becomes his friend and decides to train him. Theres nothing related to Naruto or ninjas, no interactions outside the cafe, no development, no worldbuilding, and the wish fulfilment power system is not well made.

LV 4

tt_g

There’s no driving factor behind the story at all. The mc just wants to run a coffee shop. There’s no twist like in IRNTDGL were the mc gives sagely advice. Nothing. Even in romcom story story the mc eventually gets a goal, which usually to fall in love. Also the mc has two character traits. Being kind and being a germaphobe. This is one of the most cookie cutter carboard characters I have read in a long time. I think this story is just kind of a nothing burger. It doesn’t function well as a slice of life or action story. The writing quality is pretty good but honestly it’s wasted by the fact that the story has no direction.

LV 4

trueidiocy_577

Author keeps making bangers after bangers, keep up the good work.

LV 11

hero4hire

Its nauseatingly wholesome...or atleast it tries to be. The whole disney mc level of being naively good with the stupidity to match it doesnt sit well with me. It also feel very forced, like mc want to be good so he can be liked by others and be praised for being such a good boy instead of trying to do things that actually help people.

LV 14

ArgonautLifeLine

well definitely not my cup of coffee, writing quality and grammar is quite ok. story development is boring it's not a character driven plot but also not a plot driven character and made think what is this story trying to do, and I still has no clue. author attempt at "character development" is cliche and poorly executed. the way the mc act before and after "the event" is pretty much the same that makes the event quite useless and not needed and the way things are going makes the plot progression feel forced and not natural. world background is poorly represented. this review is probably biased since I don't like hows the story progressing but I wish the author develop the character in other way since it's easily predictable. I wish the author the best in their future endeavors

LV 13

Omori101

i haven't started reading but I don't have to to know it is gonna be an amazing read 🤩 im just here to say I love your ideas and story's agentmonke and I'm gonna read it later in the day when I don't have to work😭

LV 1

GodOfLight

well definitely not my cup of coffee, writing quality and grammar is quite ok. story development is boring it's not a character driven plot but also not a plot driven character and made think what is this story trying to do, and I still has no clue. author attempt at "character development" is cliche and poorly executed. the way the mc act before and after "the event" is pretty much the same that makes the event quite useless and not needed and the way things are going makes the plot progression feel forced and not natural. world background is poorly represented. this review is probably biased since I don't like hows the story progressing but I wish the author develop the character in other way since it's easily predictable. I wish the author the best in their future endeavors

LV 4

DaoistKoOyIc

I tried but had to give up. Maybe it gets better later on but it just seems like nothing relevant happens or when they do, no change occurs afterwards. Maybe I just don’t resonate with this kind of MC that seems to just live in his own little bubble. I feel like the story is trying to make the MC as pitiful as possible so that we can be moved? But the execution just doesn’t quite deliver.

LV 2

Tigre_Negro008

A ideia em si não e ruim, mais o autor exagou ao ridículo na gentileza do protagonista, ninguém chega a ser gentil nesse nível tão retardado que parece que o protagonista tem problema cerebral. O cara tá sofrendo uma tentativa de assassinato e não sente um pingo de raiva ? So tristeza por que teve de mandar, se o protagonista tivesse reações mais realista e mantendo a própria gentileza essa seria um história legal pra acompanhar.

LV 4

Deimesu

No harem, mc is gay. —————————————————————— But I like it.

LV 2

Cocoerloko

The story is going to be good regardless of the criticism so here I will do my bit to gain more popularity. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp]

LV 13

LazyTanaka

Wowowow, finally a book I liek... -LazyTanaka

LV 4

ReactionAddiction

Author best yoi this is no real review cuz i suck at making one! okay happy reading bye

LV 2

Miracle_invoker_

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LV 4

Nob7

I just know this fanfic will be good (:...

LV 4

Edgelord69

This ultra super fast writing author books are really recomended

LV 3

Dreamk

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LV 1

esperomejorar

el prota es un mehhhhh, tiene algunos agujeros en el cerebro. .

LV 14

WTV_IDC

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LV 4

Wachdog

This is the best fanfic I've read in recent years, there's not much to say, everything is perfect, the world, the details, the characters, everything is very funny and the truth fills me with happiness to read this.