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Found the mtl. It’s called I! Heaven's Will, Let Teyvat Become The Supreme World on mtlnation or 我！天理，让提瓦特成为至高世界 on faloo. Always seems super scummy when a translator doesn’t credit the original author. The translation is okay, definitely much more readable than the mtl but it’s not super high quality either.

Wait this was chatGPT? All of it?

You mean my review? Also, why are you still here lmao. It’s been 3 months.

Makes my head hurt. Seems like this author has a tendency to over explain, which also causes a lot of repetitiveness. In the first chapter alone, there’s a mind reading ROB that keeps repeating the same things over and over. For example, some girl chose to reincarnate as Frieren, and the ROB a paragraph later goes “she’s the first person to choose a different race” like bruh we got that already you don’t have to say that again. Happens again when mc picks his class as well, the ROB goes “the outcast is a weak class but it’s good if they know how to use it” and the mc parrots that a paragraph later. Even if you don’t know how to show not tell, at least stop repeating what you told over and over again. Also please stop using italics. The more you bold or italicize something the less impact it has. There’s no need for the fancy stuff, it only makes it worse if you don’t know how to use it. If normal words are good enough for real authors, it’s probably good enough for you.

“It feels like”? If you can’t come up with an actual counterpoint for why this fic is good, I’m gonna stop arguing. You can keep riding the author if u want. Still bad fic.

Character development? Usually you learn something about the character and the plot progresses a bit. This is 26 chapters, a lot can happen. He’s still the same generic character as he is in chapter one, and we learn nothing about him except his personality is cardboard

He set nothing up. All he does is info dumps the system and tells us how the company was founded. There’s no showing, only telling. Also tell me what else is good about the fic besides the plot if it’s so good.

Or you can try searching marvel in the search bar and half of those that come up will be better or as good as this

No spacing between paragraphs at all. Every chapter is legit a word wall. Also there’s tons of spelling mistakes and the font changed in the middle of a chapter for some reason. Pretty much unreadable

If it’s so good, how come the top reviews are all one stars? I think you’re the one exaggerating how good it is.

What plot? All he did is set up his company. From the 26 chapters I’ve read, barely anything happened. If you want a good marvel fic, I liked A Silent Mad Dog, but it’s also not that hard to find a marvel fic that has readable grammar.

There are also a whole lot better.

It’s not, especially if you’re comparing to other mcu fics unless you’re comparing it to mtl. The grammar is abominable but I know the author edited it so it might be actually readable now compared to when I read it. Still bad tho.

Ay but at least a few more people probably didn’t have to suffer like I did. You’re welcome

A retard would be someone who’s still reading this book, cause my braincells almost died from reading the first 26 chaptera