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Ngl, every one of the chapters is extremely interesting and the storyline is quite captivating to read ^^ Ace is a pretty cool MC and I can't wait to read on further and see what happens in the next chapters! The writing quality is simply awesome >.<
I love the plot and how unintentionally poetic the character is, you’re very talented and the character truly has a voice! Keep going!!! Waiting for another chapter <3
Guys, I will take a break for a week or two , to prepare for a exam.Wish me luck ! I will come like a wave after I will pass the exam .Be prepare cause I will erase your boredom ! Love you guys !
The characters are very interesting as well as the plot and background of the story,but there are several grammar errors that the author will improve.Overall I would recommend his book to readers that enjoy an adventurous yet calm setting. Keep up the great work.
This is honestly really really good, I highly recommend to everyone looking for a good novel
This is really an interesting story i highly recommend it to others I I'm about to finish chapter three i hope your story will continue thank you.
So far, I already mentioned what I had in mind in the chapter review I made. But overall, your work has a lot of potential, just edit the parts that need editing! Please keep up the good work!
the plot is great. This novel has a good line line telling about two youths madness. The writing style is easy flowing plus, it is good and understanding. KEEP IT UP AUTHOR.
Its a interesting novel and different from what I usually read but is for sure good. The author's writing style is also amazing, looking forward to read more!!
The story kicks off with an intriguing and enchanting journey through a world of reincarnation, romance, and unexpected connections. The author's attention to detail and character development adds depth. Overall, a great story...
Beautiful and interesting storyline. I really enjoyed it. The author did a good job on the characters and the story, I really enjoyed it. I hope the author continues in the same vein
What do you think about the new cover ? I tried using AI to create it .From my perspective it looks good but the writing is my worse handwriting on using the pad of the laptop, Hahahaha ! Love you guys !
Your novel is very lovely. It is beautifully crafted, the characters are richly developed, and the story unfolds with breathtaking twists and turns. A literary masterpiece that will leave you awestruck and longing for another chapter. It is a must-read for all book lovers!"
I just finished reading the latest chapter of this novel and I am amazed by the quality of the writing. keep going!!!! I highly recommend this novel to anyone looking for a well-written and engaging story that will leave you wanting more. Keep up the amazing work, author!
Intense start to this story that keeps building on the plot. Great world-building with no info dumping and descriptions are generally good. Grammar is also good, with just a few mistakes. Otherwise, great work author.
I am so excited to know what your thoughts are on the new chapters that I posted !The novel is getting more fierce and the love making is in process ! Love you my readers !
Great start. Dialogue flows more naturally than most novels I’ve read on here. First chapter is captivating too, good job
This book is action packed!! Starting from the first chapter it already has me gripped at my seat. And the chapters are long! I just love it! Keep up the good work author-nim!
Step into a mesmerizing world of intrigue and adventure with this captivating webnovel. As a reader, you'll be instantly drawn into the richly detailed storytelling and immersive plot. The characters are vibrant and relatable, each with their own unique journey that will keep you turning the pages. Get ready for a rollercoaster of emotions as you uncover secrets, face challenges, and discover unexpected twists. This webnovel is a must-read for anyone seeking an unforgettable reading experience. #Webnovel #Adventure #Intrigue
This novel really has improved even more than last time its so good i had ti read it twice just to get the full impact of the story
Thanks for the reviews !To pat myself on the back for working hard I will give myself a 5 star .Authors should understand what I mean. I need encouragement !
your work showcases the potential and demonstrates a skillful command of storytelling. However, to fully captivate readers and create a more immersive experience, it is crucial to put more effort into crafting an attractive narrative that elicits a stronger emotional response. Elevating the level of suspense will allow your audience to feel more engrossed and enthralled throughout the tale. Keep up the good work, and with a bit more attention to these aspects, I do not doubt that your future endeavors will grip readers with an irresistible sense of dread and fascination. ✨💙
The author really has a way with words, very lovely and nice dynamic the MC has with his friends and family. The front few chapters are extremely comedy loaded, so please make sure you are not drinking water as you read (rip screen)! The dramatic irony and comedy elements mixed together with more serious things also keep the pace nice. Keep up the good work!
I liked the introduction of the story and the character Ace. The characteristics of space and the development of the plot are interesting.
Very visual characters, and nice world background. What I will say is that the chapters are quite long, and if they were shortened down it would be easier to take in, otherwise, nicely done.
so far... am highly impressed... color me yellow... an excellent plot, and nice world description, and most of them are characters that are easy to visualize. I hope your book gets picked
Normally i did not read this type of novel but still i like this novel ,story is good and once you start reading you will be hooked.
I've read only a few of the chapters and even if they are too long I still like to read it this is a great book [img=recommend]
The story is a very enjoyable read! I'm only a few chapters in but you got me hooked :D The pacing is perfect and each chapter was made with the thoughts of readers in mind, I love that their lengthy. Please continue on with your great work beloved author!
Ngl, every one of the chapters is extremely interesting and the storyline is quite captivating to read ^^ Ace is a pretty cool MC and I can't wait to read on further and see what happens in the next chapters! The writing quality is simply awesome >.<
I love the plot and how unintentionally poetic the character is, you’re very talented and the character truly has a voice! Keep going!!! Waiting for another chapter <3
Guys, I will take a break for a week or two , to prepare for a exam.Wish me luck ! I will come like a wave after I will pass the exam .Be prepare cause I will erase your boredom ! Love you guys !
The characters are very interesting as well as the plot and background of the story,but there are several grammar errors that the author will improve.Overall I would recommend his book to readers that enjoy an adventurous yet calm setting. Keep up the great work.
This is honestly really really good, I highly recommend to everyone looking for a good novel
This is really an interesting story i highly recommend it to others I I'm about to finish chapter three i hope your story will continue thank you.
So far, I already mentioned what I had in mind in the chapter review I made. But overall, your work has a lot of potential, just edit the parts that need editing! Please keep up the good work!
the plot is great. This novel has a good line line telling about two youths madness. The writing style is easy flowing plus, it is good and understanding. KEEP IT UP AUTHOR.
Its a interesting novel and different from what I usually read but is for sure good. The author's writing style is also amazing, looking forward to read more!!
The story kicks off with an intriguing and enchanting journey through a world of reincarnation, romance, and unexpected connections. The author's attention to detail and character development adds depth. Overall, a great story...
Beautiful and interesting storyline. I really enjoyed it. The author did a good job on the characters and the story, I really enjoyed it. I hope the author continues in the same vein
What do you think about the new cover ? I tried using AI to create it .From my perspective it looks good but the writing is my worse handwriting on using the pad of the laptop, Hahahaha ! Love you guys !
Your novel is very lovely. It is beautifully crafted, the characters are richly developed, and the story unfolds with breathtaking twists and turns. A literary masterpiece that will leave you awestruck and longing for another chapter. It is a must-read for all book lovers!"
I just finished reading the latest chapter of this novel and I am amazed by the quality of the writing. keep going!!!! I highly recommend this novel to anyone looking for a well-written and engaging story that will leave you wanting more. Keep up the amazing work, author!
Intense start to this story that keeps building on the plot. Great world-building with no info dumping and descriptions are generally good. Grammar is also good, with just a few mistakes. Otherwise, great work author.
I am so excited to know what your thoughts are on the new chapters that I posted !The novel is getting more fierce and the love making is in process ! Love you my readers !
Great start. Dialogue flows more naturally than most novels I’ve read on here. First chapter is captivating too, good job
This book is action packed!! Starting from the first chapter it already has me gripped at my seat. And the chapters are long! I just love it! Keep up the good work author-nim!
Step into a mesmerizing world of intrigue and adventure with this captivating webnovel. As a reader, you'll be instantly drawn into the richly detailed storytelling and immersive plot. The characters are vibrant and relatable, each with their own unique journey that will keep you turning the pages. Get ready for a rollercoaster of emotions as you uncover secrets, face challenges, and discover unexpected twists. This webnovel is a must-read for anyone seeking an unforgettable reading experience. #Webnovel #Adventure #Intrigue
This novel really has improved even more than last time its so good i had ti read it twice just to get the full impact of the story
Thanks for the reviews !To pat myself on the back for working hard I will give myself a 5 star .Authors should understand what I mean. I need encouragement !
your work showcases the potential and demonstrates a skillful command of storytelling. However, to fully captivate readers and create a more immersive experience, it is crucial to put more effort into crafting an attractive narrative that elicits a stronger emotional response. Elevating the level of suspense will allow your audience to feel more engrossed and enthralled throughout the tale. Keep up the good work, and with a bit more attention to these aspects, I do not doubt that your future endeavors will grip readers with an irresistible sense of dread and fascination. ✨💙
The author really has a way with words, very lovely and nice dynamic the MC has with his friends and family. The front few chapters are extremely comedy loaded, so please make sure you are not drinking water as you read (rip screen)! The dramatic irony and comedy elements mixed together with more serious things also keep the pace nice. Keep up the good work!
I liked the introduction of the story and the character Ace. The characteristics of space and the development of the plot are interesting.
Very visual characters, and nice world background. What I will say is that the chapters are quite long, and if they were shortened down it would be easier to take in, otherwise, nicely done.
so far... am highly impressed... color me yellow... an excellent plot, and nice world description, and most of them are characters that are easy to visualize. I hope your book gets picked
Normally i did not read this type of novel but still i like this novel ,story is good and once you start reading you will be hooked.
I've read only a few of the chapters and even if they are too long I still like to read it this is a great book [img=recommend]
The story is a very enjoyable read! I'm only a few chapters in but you got me hooked :D The pacing is perfect and each chapter was made with the thoughts of readers in mind, I love that their lengthy. Please continue on with your great work beloved author!