I just didn't quite understand what this competition is about.
I really liked the beginning of the story and the change in the outside environment also caught my attention. When she leaves the ball and sees a mysterious group, an impactful scene transformation occurs.
looks like the romance starts now
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The Mockery of Fate
Fantasy · Narashie
thanks for your review.
I liked the introduction of the story and the character Ace. The characteristics of space and the development of the plot are interesting.
I liked this chapter. The main character, ace, when making dialogues with the gods, right after being reborn in another world, seems to be the beginning of the leverage of the character's power.
thanks! and truth. The cover doesn't reflect the characteristic of ML now. But at the climax of the story, it will reflect a lot.
Sorry buddy, I thought I had reviewed your story before. I remembered that I reviewed other works, but I had forgotten about yours. I'm reading the first few chapters. Thank you for understanding
the story of LiNa's rebirth is very interesting. At first, it seems that she has become poor because of her parents' abandonment. Her relationship with her family was not worthy of well-being. I hope that in the next few chapters, she becomes a stronger person.
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original A life outside the city
In a chaotic city caused by urban violence and the decline in people's quality of life, a man came to witness the transformative change of society in Aracity, a city located in the center of an important region of Bradler's country. His family sought a better life, to conquer all his desires. Although he didn't imagine what it would take to start changing his reality, he manages to find a way out of that city, ending up on an island, where his family took refuge.16 Chs 8 Colecciones
I found the story quite interesting at first. I liked the character and his characteristics. I hope that when I read the next chapters, I can better understand the relationships made by the character.
The Mockery of Fate
Fantasy · Narashie