From what I saw from a different response to another reviewer, you are using a translator in which you forget to use the grammatical mark or something mentioning that. So forgive me for my lack of understanding, but I would still suggest fixing those errors.
Well. . . every book needs the right grammar, doesn't matter what type of book it is. While I could be wrong, from what I see, English isn't your first language (based on the lack of commas in your response), so I would say to maybe use Grammarly. From my experience, it does really well in using correct grammar.
This is just a shameless review from me here. I believe this book is going to be really enjoyable for you. For me, the soon-coming 2nd volume is much better than the first. This first volume is meant to set the scene for the things going forward, so if you wanna join the ride me with me, I'd be eternally grateful.
The one thing about this book that it does astoundingly well is its lack of information-dumping. For me personally, I can't stand when a character just rambles a bunch of information to you, but does it in a clever way.
The book has several grammatical errors that confuse you a lot on who's exactly speaking or whether it's the author commentating. The myth concept is intriguing, but if you could fix these errors, the quality would heighten substantially.
The characters are really engaging, which should prove to be a win for romance fans. I would say probably make the cover in like an anime style, that way you attract more readers.
An engaging storyline, a nicely done background, and slick character design make this book one to read. The plot is balanced and fun to read.
The personalities of the main characters are done really, really well, and I can't help but to be invested because of the dynamicness of the characters.
There are certain aspects of repetitiveness in the series, but its nonetheless an absolute joy to read. The way everything just flows is immaculate.
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original Spy Mage Academy.
Connor, a little lad living in his depressing reality, completely unaware of his surroundings... However... what lies ahead is a mystery to him... He is unaware that there exist secret organizations staffed by spies endowed with extraordinary abilities.... Unbeknownst to him, the MSTO is an alliance of espionage mage organizations that plans to impose its will on the world by causing widespread panic and terror He doesn't know, that he possesses a Perk that does not depend on a wand or other external device, but rather is natural and passed down through a certain blood line. The opponents he will face are unknown to him... However, he will, in Spy Mage Academy, soon. Also for the art for this cover came from this site: https://animanga.fandom.com/f/p/4400000000000004517/r/4400000000000037841 As well as this cover: https://wallpapers.com/wallpapers/gojo-sataru-k0ug6jgabsaxbcns.html16 Chs 5 Colecciones
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Spy Mage System
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Connor was just an average guy... until he suddenly discovered the power of magic. He was thrown into a system of secret organizations. Spies that held special powers, tasked with protecting the world from evil corporations with plans to dominate the world. With each mission, Connor faces the dangers of death, ruin, and betrayal. He must learn to trust his fellow spy mages while constantly watching his back for double-crossers. But as he gets deeper into the world of magic and espionage, he realizes that the stakes are higher than he ever imagined and he must use every ounce of his abilities and cunning to prevent the corporations from destroying everything he holds dear. As the danger intensifies and the lines between friend and foe blur, he begins to question whether he can truly trust anyone.444 Chs 1.8k Colecciones
New Rebooted Series
I've decided to reboot this series: Spy Mage Academy. Enjoy!
Slow pace, but absolutely great pickup. The excitement in this story is reallly enjoyable and keeps you at the edge of your seat.
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