Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

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ArchmageOfTerror

i have read upto chapter 22 so maybe I'm qualified to review this gotta say this fanfic of danmachi is pretty amazing..i like the char and it's battles i hope there's some more conversations it has alot of potential already and author can make more events as the timeline is before canon i.e 2 years so we will get more unpredictable and unexpected things to see.

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Inaho04

Best Danmachi fan-fic I've read so far. It has good character development and it puts time into developing and understanding the current Bell Cranel. It has a slow start, but it is necessary to understand Bell and it follows the kind of story it wants to transmit without deviating like others fan-fics do. I'm enjoying it a lot and would've wish i had started it much later so that I don't need to suffer waiting for more chapters. Keep it up author, in my opinion your doing a great job writing your story. I hope it stays that way and goodluck with future chapters. (If possible I would like to know approximately how long [chapters] do you expect this novel to be if it gets to finish)

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please_be_gentle_

this ff would have been good if not for Freya as a love interest. I don't get why people love Freya so much no matter how good she might be she is a sl ut with a body count more than millions. Sometimes even meeting your girlfriend's ex-boyfriends things get awkward but here you want to be a relationship with Freya who has slept with more than half of orario and almost all of the male gods. I also don't get her concept of love if your soul is pure then she loves you if not you're nothing and this doesn't depend on your personality but rather in your talent so I can guess from here that is a mindset of common gold diggers. Are you completely sure in her mind you're not just one of the millions of men she slept with just more talent??? Habits\Addiction don't die easily especially not for someone who is practicing it for millions of years and it won't miraculously change in a single day after meeting you.

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Dame_ningen1

This MC sucks. He has some cool abilities but the character sucks. Its pretty boring to read and way too trope heavy. The author even went with the dense protagonist cliche.

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Reddsaint

I assumed since this was a Bell insert with a cheat from a different world, The book wouldn't be anything special. I was wrong. This is competing for the best Danmachi fanfic I've ever read, comparative to Elementalist. if it continues at the same level and finishes off strong, it will most certainly take that spot for me. After getting over what many would consider an overly emotional beginning that I ended up surprisingly being fond of, the story hits no snags from there. Despite going a little off the beaten path, there isn't a single time where I would consider any chapter to be part of a filler. TLDR, please don't drop...

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xEidolon

Is this harem or polyamory? I know it has the harem tag, but people throw it on and go with polyamory lol. Will there be yuri without the MC, or any yuri at all? I dislike polyamory and yuri really, so I try to figure out this stuff before reading.

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koss01

Probably my favourite danmachi fic by far, it has everything from comedy to action to epicness(?) i actually find myself anticipating every next chapter. so far 10/10

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Donquixote_Doffi

Chapter (Raid under Moonlight) 15 as of writing this review. Amazing work. The haters say it's too much drama or things like that because they are used to garbage writing that is abundant on webnovel. Okay, maybe the part where Zeus and Bell talk about Bell killing "Bell" for taking over "Bell's" body was too much for some of you but please continue reading. It's all part of the process.

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Primordial_Mind

I am the bone of my sword Steel is my body and fire is my blood I have created over a thousand blades Unknown to death nor known to life Have withstood pain to create many weapons Yet this hands will never hold anyting So as i Pray UNLIMITED BLADE WORKS!!

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Abyssal_Ram123

this story is great each chapter ends with me wanting more and I have to put this here but I think if there was like a doctor who (when a good man goes to war) Moment where he collects all his favors for one big fight (like against dionysius) that would be awesome .

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BONGUS

Tbh, I know the author wants us to point out the mistakes in his story. So he can increase his writing skills. Altho, there are some mistakes here and there. Everyone makes mistakes, and that is what makes us human. The essential part that makes me stay and read would probably be how engaging the story is. Like no one wants to read an ff that is so boring you’d think doing chores and homework are way more fun. Just keep up the great work!

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IOnlyEatDinner

I have nothing to say about the grammar, author's knowledge about the world, and the update stability. But if anyone is ever reading this review. Push through the first few angsty chapters. It may not be a fun few chapters but everything that comes after and even as a result of it was done/executed very well that I could only do a chef's kiss. Those chapters resulted in him a shoulder to lean on and a person to trust without hiding anything, while also reassuring us readers that it's the right person to know those knowledge about him. How many isekai had something like that where it doesn't make you pull your hair because it's usually executed badly? Then there's also the fact that the author made some of the characters more richer in personality. Where it is still close to accurate representation of their canon counterpart but still feels fresh. I just hope that level of quality extends to the hostiles and villains that haven't appeared yet as of making this review. Please keep up the good work, author. This is a great holiday gift at this moment of time which significantly lack fanfics that are actually worth people's time.

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ArgonautLifeLine

it's quite an amazing read. nicely paced story development. character that has a solid background and written amazingly. good job author I hope you can uphold the quality of the story and the writing

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ShodaiKokyu

The premise is great, really really great. I know some people doesn't like angsty story, but the character development is the best part of the premise, and there is no cliche "some random evil people slaughter my family, i must take this reincarnation thing seriously" kind of plot, which is great. Sometimes you just need someone to talk about it.

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Bosu_san

Overall this story really have potential, start with good character development even though at the beginning I judging it to fast about protagonist personalities but you really pull it off, just once thing I wish from you make him a dense sigma male protagonist, he will never be dense like bell I understand that, but he will dense because his because he have low self-esteem, and it will fit the story perfectly, Dense protagonist is the best!!!!!!! make dense protagonist!!!!!!!!! and don't forget about Sigma, yes he should be Sigma!!!!!!!

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Psan

Absolutely Amazing. Author seems to have read all the novels, played all the games and watched the anime. Plus he puts effort to investigate things to make the world background and info amazing. He puts together the events extremely well and its very fun to read. The grammar is short perfect and i was so given in to read that i did not notice any mistake. I really liked that mc powered up Lili so much =P. To bad that poor lili will be left alone for a long while, Hopefully she reaches level 3 by the time mc returns at least. Also Welf needs to level up too.... Now... Onto the goddesses mc managed to Woo totally. Freya, followed by Hephaestus, followed by Artemis... The cat fight that will happen when these 3 meets will be LEGENDARY!. If mc can create a third arm, he can headpat all 3 and fix the issue.

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tim_badii

nice and amazing I feel like I'm reading the original work now!!good job🥳🥳🥳🥳

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heh_

there's one word that describe this novel for me "P E R F E C T"

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Nightwolf98

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Justafanlost

This fanfic has a lot of potential, for me it's better than the anime, where Bell looks like a 3 year old with super powers, the part about reincarnations (emiya) and reincarnations (Lily/Fianna) that I've always looked for in Danmachi fics, man I really can't stop reading this! Hooked me like a fish on a hook! SÉRIO FOR REAL!