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I’v read three chapters, and I’m hooked. One thing I love: the author promises to fix their mistakes. I love an author who knows they will need to edit. Another thing: I love how the story is developing. I am predicting the future already, which happens a lot when I read. But I have a really good feeling this book will exceed my expectations! Keep up the great work!
The story is amazing. It's idea of a girl fighting hard to forget her previous relationships and a guy obsessed with her is a hard plot and interesting at the same time. However, I didn't like a lot how emir behaved with her in the eleventh chapter. I wish Emma end up with Jason, and not Emir, but who knows what fate brought to those two. The story is great, but what needed to be improved, is the writing quality of an author, but we're all studying and noboby is perfect. Great job author. Looking out for more chapters!
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There's a lot going on but the different parts are separated in a way that makes it easy to keep track of. So far the plot is something most readers will be familiar with, which isn't a bad thing! I'm a sucker for plots like this. Sidenote: I'm glad to see the notes you have left after your chapters, promising to do touch-ups later on. Interested in reading more. [img=recommend]
It was a rollercoaster of emotions for me. I am hooked and I am waiting for the author to release more chapters. you should definitely give this a try. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Creation is really difficult 😖I myself can't even create one paragraph but this Author here managed to dish out 34 chapters and more to come,I thank Webnovel for having this kind of talent, I'm an editor and apart from reading this book this author here caught my attention with her novel,I would love to work with her in the future one thing I loved while reading some chapters of her book,the author had to apologize and she realized she made mistakes on her work, and she did promise to work on them, for this I will work on her book myself. Great job you deserve it and I highly recommend your works. Keep it up!!!!
A whirlwind of emotions!!! So, the story begins with Emma dealing with the loss of her two-year relationship with Emir, who apparently chose another girl over her. I really feel bad for the mail address, Emma, here. She had been doing her best to forget him, trying to make new friends, focusing on her work, but the memories of the past come back to her from time to time and she can't help but dive into the memories of the past.
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This is a masterpiece,I just started reading this book today and I'm more attached to it, the world background is so relatable,the character design was excellent,two lovers separated because of a misunderstanding ,the other leaves in the haunted memories of her love the other,stalks his love to make sure she's doing well,what a love story filled with emotions,lust and love, however I think this book was written from the real worl it's so relatable and inspiring,An award really awaits for this Author, great and amazing work,I will send my golden tickets soon and gifts too. keep it up Author ...
How do I put this? I find myself lost in this wonderful work of art. Finding a good story's not always so easy, but finding one with emotions you can feel as you read, getting swallowed inside till you mistaken the facet that you're not in the story...that's rare. This is a beautifully plotted work I hope gets the attention it deserves.
I've only read 5 chapters and I already loved the book. loved the characters and relatable cause it's not easy to get over a heartbreak. Hoping for more updates and let's see how the story progress
Hie Author has anyone told you they love you yet?if not and if maybe let be the first to say I love you more than anyone that loves you😂it's war for me and them,but hie going back to the book I saw it on the trending block and immediately after reading the first chapter I was shocked to it or should I say attached? You can put it that way. I LOVE YOUR WORK and nothing will stop me from loving it,you mentioned about fixing your mistakes so can be the one to point them out to help you release more chapters on a quicker pace I'm now your loyal reader miss Rayne take me as your loyal reader,I wish you the best cause you are the best keep trending and show the world what you are made of.........
This novel broke my heart, when I saw it on the trending block I wanted to give it a try and now I know why it's trending great work author you just earned yourself a loyal reader straight from the Latinos and now I have something to read for the holiday and I'm ready to share this novel with my friends, count me in Rayner's fan page cause I'm definitely coming great work author keep it up! I love you author well done.
First of all I will say when I looked at the trending novels this book caught my eye or should I say I fell inlove with synopsis? Well that's not the point this Author is talented and we should embrace that, great work Author let's call it more like stocking I first saw this authors work trending on ireader but it was different novel The Mafia Couple it was in the steamy genre and I immediatly fell inlove,I heard we ca now talk to our favourite authors privately so get ready to see my msgs .........I will vote a million times for this author keep it up Rayne keep it up I'm happy webnovel discovered you talent.
The struggle between love and betrayal is really intriguing. Emma, once betrayed fights for the protection of her heart whilst Emir, realizing his mistake comes back begging for love. Very interesting book and I recommend it for your addictive romance list.
Emotions galore in this book, and it continues to keep me interested. The constant change of tone that really grabs you in the book just, absolutely amazing. But you might want to fix the grammar a bit.
Will Fate bring us together? I don't know, but my fate brought me here. Love this so much author. A perfect story line for my preference. Keep going author...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great story with greater premise. It can be executed better yet the author did his best on attracting the readers in the first few chapters. It was a good read.
The way the author writes the scenery is a little bad but still readable. I can see a lot of mistakes I mean a lot but the author says she will update them so let's just wait. I rarely read an FL novel but this one is good but due to grammar mistakes and poor writing it became a little bad. but that doesn't mean it was not readable. Try reading it you might like it, just like me. So I advise you to improve your writing and update again.
Awesome read. still reading this book but I can sat it's really interesting so far and I'll keep reading it. Great book Author nim!!!!!!!!!!
I read first few chapters and I am already hooked. The story is super captivating. The plot and characters both are interesting. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
Wow, like wow. This book is not just made up, am sure it was someone's real-life story because how is the author able to come down and think of a story that makes the reader so emotional I really need the authors advice because am so impressed by everything that has to do with the first chapter. The protagonist was able to share everything that has to do with her past lover and how he shattered her heart into a million pieces.
Grammar mistakes aside, the writer weaves a wonderful story in a modern day setting. Give this novel a chance if you're into love triangles, emotional and sappy hear breaking moments, an FL that can't seem to make up her mind or know when to call it quits, then this tear jerker may be the novel for you!
Wonderful skills portraid by thr Author. I really like the overall vibes of the story and it makes me want to continue reading... Well done Author! 👏🏼👏🏼
I know stories with a potential second lead always hurt, but I'd recommend reading this book anyways. The telling of the story is lovely, it hurts to see our FL in her situation often times. Hoping for fate to bring her together with someone who she loves and who loves her. Keep Going!!!!
I had the same impression as the first novel I reviewed with this author. It's the same tip I'll give to you since it's in first point of view, and to shift it to another story meant how confusing it will be for the readers. Make sure to improve the execution when writing past and present timelines. Good luck on your future endeavors!
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honestly I absolutely love this. after reading the mafia couple I wanted to check out the author's other works and I must say, This author doesn't disappoint. from a good storyline to characters to writing she gives it her all and that's superb
It is an amazing story, Good work author for coming up with a great plot😘😘. The story develops quickly, author's writing quality is top-notch.
A great book with great plot line. It felt so real while reading it. It's not easy to get over someone after the breakup. we remember their memories and think of them always. Author showed it naturally. it felt like this is happening for real. Nice Work, author.
I sincerely love this story already 🥺💋, just that the Fl brings me to tears whenever she recalls Emir💔. Emir is really a jerk and I hate him already😣. Love this book so much💯, I'm definitely rating 5 stars. thank you author for such a wonderful story 🌹.
The opening of the story and the pace of the novel was efficiently maintained. The only thing that I was a bit disappointed about were the punctuation errors. The majority of them were there in the first chapter, if you could edit them out. On a wider basis, the character's traits were realistic and the plot was an interesting one as well. Good job author!
A whirlwind of emotions!!! So the story stars with Emma coping up with the loss of her two year relationship with Emir, who apparently chose some other girl over her. I truly feel bad for the mail lead, Emma, here. She had been doing everything to get over him, trying to make new friends, focussing on her work but the flashbacks of the past comes back to her every now and then and she can't help but dive into the memories of the past. The place where the plot thickens is when she realizes someone had been stalking her for a long time, keeping track of everything she does and everywhere she goes. Emma can't help but be creeped out about this and I as a reader can't help but be extremely excited about this. I just hope author releases more chapters soon because I'm too impatient.
I’v read three chapters, and I’m hooked. One thing I love: the author promises to fix their mistakes. I love an author who knows they will need to edit. Another thing: I love how the story is developing. I am predicting the future already, which happens a lot when I read. But I have a really good feeling this book will exceed my expectations! Keep up the great work!
The story is amazing. It's idea of a girl fighting hard to forget her previous relationships and a guy obsessed with her is a hard plot and interesting at the same time. However, I didn't like a lot how emir behaved with her in the eleventh chapter. I wish Emma end up with Jason, and not Emir, but who knows what fate brought to those two. The story is great, but what needed to be improved, is the writing quality of an author, but we're all studying and noboby is perfect. Great job author. Looking out for more chapters!
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There's a lot going on but the different parts are separated in a way that makes it easy to keep track of. So far the plot is something most readers will be familiar with, which isn't a bad thing! I'm a sucker for plots like this. Sidenote: I'm glad to see the notes you have left after your chapters, promising to do touch-ups later on. Interested in reading more. [img=recommend]
It was a rollercoaster of emotions for me. I am hooked and I am waiting for the author to release more chapters. you should definitely give this a try. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Creation is really difficult 😖I myself can't even create one paragraph but this Author here managed to dish out 34 chapters and more to come,I thank Webnovel for having this kind of talent, I'm an editor and apart from reading this book this author here caught my attention with her novel,I would love to work with her in the future one thing I loved while reading some chapters of her book,the author had to apologize and she realized she made mistakes on her work, and she did promise to work on them, for this I will work on her book myself. Great job you deserve it and I highly recommend your works. Keep it up!!!!
A whirlwind of emotions!!! So, the story begins with Emma dealing with the loss of her two-year relationship with Emir, who apparently chose another girl over her. I really feel bad for the mail address, Emma, here. She had been doing her best to forget him, trying to make new friends, focusing on her work, but the memories of the past come back to her from time to time and she can't help but dive into the memories of the past.
Revelar spoiler This is a masterpiece,I just started reading this book today and I'm more attached to it, the world background is so relatable,the character design was excellent,two lovers separated because of a misunderstanding ,the other leaves in the haunted memories of her love the other,stalks his love to make sure she's doing well,what a love story filled with emotions,lust and love, however I think this book was written from the real worl it's so relatable and inspiring,An award really awaits for this Author, great and amazing work,I will send my golden tickets soon and gifts too. keep it up Author ...
How do I put this? I find myself lost in this wonderful work of art. Finding a good story's not always so easy, but finding one with emotions you can feel as you read, getting swallowed inside till you mistaken the facet that you're not in the story...that's rare. This is a beautifully plotted work I hope gets the attention it deserves.
I've only read 5 chapters and I already loved the book. loved the characters and relatable cause it's not easy to get over a heartbreak. Hoping for more updates and let's see how the story progress
Hie Author has anyone told you they love you yet?if not and if maybe let be the first to say I love you more than anyone that loves you😂it's war for me and them,but hie going back to the book I saw it on the trending block and immediately after reading the first chapter I was shocked to it or should I say attached? You can put it that way. I LOVE YOUR WORK and nothing will stop me from loving it,you mentioned about fixing your mistakes so can be the one to point them out to help you release more chapters on a quicker pace I'm now your loyal reader miss Rayne take me as your loyal reader,I wish you the best cause you are the best keep trending and show the world what you are made of.........
This novel broke my heart, when I saw it on the trending block I wanted to give it a try and now I know why it's trending great work author you just earned yourself a loyal reader straight from the Latinos and now I have something to read for the holiday and I'm ready to share this novel with my friends, count me in Rayner's fan page cause I'm definitely coming great work author keep it up! I love you author well done.
First of all I will say when I looked at the trending novels this book caught my eye or should I say I fell inlove with synopsis? Well that's not the point this Author is talented and we should embrace that, great work Author let's call it more like stocking I first saw this authors work trending on ireader but it was different novel The Mafia Couple it was in the steamy genre and I immediatly fell inlove,I heard we ca now talk to our favourite authors privately so get ready to see my msgs .........I will vote a million times for this author keep it up Rayne keep it up I'm happy webnovel discovered you talent.
The struggle between love and betrayal is really intriguing. Emma, once betrayed fights for the protection of her heart whilst Emir, realizing his mistake comes back begging for love. Very interesting book and I recommend it for your addictive romance list.
Emotions galore in this book, and it continues to keep me interested. The constant change of tone that really grabs you in the book just, absolutely amazing. But you might want to fix the grammar a bit.
Will Fate bring us together? I don't know, but my fate brought me here. Love this so much author. A perfect story line for my preference. Keep going author...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great story with greater premise. It can be executed better yet the author did his best on attracting the readers in the first few chapters. It was a good read.
The way the author writes the scenery is a little bad but still readable. I can see a lot of mistakes I mean a lot but the author says she will update them so let's just wait. I rarely read an FL novel but this one is good but due to grammar mistakes and poor writing it became a little bad. but that doesn't mean it was not readable. Try reading it you might like it, just like me. So I advise you to improve your writing and update again.
Awesome read. still reading this book but I can sat it's really interesting so far and I'll keep reading it. Great book Author nim!!!!!!!!!!
I read first few chapters and I am already hooked. The story is super captivating. The plot and characters both are interesting. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
Wow, like wow. This book is not just made up, am sure it was someone's real-life story because how is the author able to come down and think of a story that makes the reader so emotional I really need the authors advice because am so impressed by everything that has to do with the first chapter. The protagonist was able to share everything that has to do with her past lover and how he shattered her heart into a million pieces.
Grammar mistakes aside, the writer weaves a wonderful story in a modern day setting. Give this novel a chance if you're into love triangles, emotional and sappy hear breaking moments, an FL that can't seem to make up her mind or know when to call it quits, then this tear jerker may be the novel for you!
Wonderful skills portraid by thr Author. I really like the overall vibes of the story and it makes me want to continue reading... Well done Author! 👏🏼👏🏼
I know stories with a potential second lead always hurt, but I'd recommend reading this book anyways. The telling of the story is lovely, it hurts to see our FL in her situation often times. Hoping for fate to bring her together with someone who she loves and who loves her. Keep Going!!!!
I had the same impression as the first novel I reviewed with this author. It's the same tip I'll give to you since it's in first point of view, and to shift it to another story meant how confusing it will be for the readers. Make sure to improve the execution when writing past and present timelines. Good luck on your future endeavors!
Revelar spoiler honestly I absolutely love this. after reading the mafia couple I wanted to check out the author's other works and I must say, This author doesn't disappoint. from a good storyline to characters to writing she gives it her all and that's superb
It is an amazing story, Good work author for coming up with a great plot😘😘. The story develops quickly, author's writing quality is top-notch.
A great book with great plot line. It felt so real while reading it. It's not easy to get over someone after the breakup. we remember their memories and think of them always. Author showed it naturally. it felt like this is happening for real. Nice Work, author.
I sincerely love this story already 🥺💋, just that the Fl brings me to tears whenever she recalls Emir💔. Emir is really a jerk and I hate him already😣. Love this book so much💯, I'm definitely rating 5 stars. thank you author for such a wonderful story 🌹.
The opening of the story and the pace of the novel was efficiently maintained. The only thing that I was a bit disappointed about were the punctuation errors. The majority of them were there in the first chapter, if you could edit them out. On a wider basis, the character's traits were realistic and the plot was an interesting one as well. Good job author!
A whirlwind of emotions!!! So the story stars with Emma coping up with the loss of her two year relationship with Emir, who apparently chose some other girl over her. I truly feel bad for the mail lead, Emma, here. She had been doing everything to get over him, trying to make new friends, focussing on her work but the flashbacks of the past comes back to her every now and then and she can't help but dive into the memories of the past. The place where the plot thickens is when she realizes someone had been stalking her for a long time, keeping track of everything she does and everywhere she goes. Emma can't help but be creeped out about this and I as a reader can't help but be extremely excited about this. I just hope author releases more chapters soon because I'm too impatient.