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An amazing story I love this book keep it up Author ,your work is amazing please update more chapters soon can't wait to read them all.[img=update][img=update]
Great work author, interesting plot and amazing introduction, even though the book is still in its early stage I can already tell that it has great potential, just need a little bit of spice and you are good to go. And I cannot wait to find out what's going to happen to Emma( I feel so sorry for her 😩) I've been trying to guess but I just can't. Any ways, i'm sending you my best wishes. keep up the good work.
I'm going to give you the bad first. You could afford to use more active words and think more about word efficiency. Less words and better verb choices equals clarity. That being said, you've effectively captured the break up feeling. We do feel like it wont get better, we do cry, we don't want to be around people. I have no doubt this story will end up brilliant
Okay so how amazing this book could be.. The book cover is the 1st thing that caught my site.. Then the synopsis and the cool names used... What a marvellous work surely a great treat to read
Writing Quality- 6/10 Update Stability- 10/10 Story Development- too early, default is 8/10 Chara Design- some promise, 9/10 World BG- Solid 10, it's Earth. What more do I have to say? Solid 4.4, I don't normally read these types of books but it's promising with a good upload schedule.
Great character design, love the plot and love the descriptions, I saved this book in my book shelf because I'm pretty sure it is going to be a good one, Work on a few grammar mistakes then this will be perfect and all the best I love your work.
Love, I love your work, love, I love your work 💋 ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
An amazing story I love this book keep it up Author ,your work is amazing please update more chapters soon can't wait to read them all.[img=update][img=update]
Great work author, interesting plot and amazing introduction, even though the book is still in its early stage I can already tell that it has great potential, just need a little bit of spice and you are good to go. And I cannot wait to find out what's going to happen to Emma( I feel so sorry for her 😩) I've been trying to guess but I just can't. Any ways, i'm sending you my best wishes. keep up the good work.
I'm going to give you the bad first. You could afford to use more active words and think more about word efficiency. Less words and better verb choices equals clarity. That being said, you've effectively captured the break up feeling. We do feel like it wont get better, we do cry, we don't want to be around people. I have no doubt this story will end up brilliant
Okay so how amazing this book could be.. The book cover is the 1st thing that caught my site.. Then the synopsis and the cool names used... What a marvellous work surely a great treat to read
Writing Quality- 6/10 Update Stability- 10/10 Story Development- too early, default is 8/10 Chara Design- some promise, 9/10 World BG- Solid 10, it's Earth. What more do I have to say? Solid 4.4, I don't normally read these types of books but it's promising with a good upload schedule.
Great character design, love the plot and love the descriptions, I saved this book in my book shelf because I'm pretty sure it is going to be a good one, Work on a few grammar mistakes then this will be perfect and all the best I love your work.
Love, I love your work, love, I love your work 💋 ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️