Rise To The Zenith

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Lol1san

It's a bad novel. MC is in constant suffer. Even if he gets stronger, this 'growing' doesn't mean much as he continues to suffer and is dragged into situations he doesn't understand. The author forcefully throws the MC into the plot before introducing a plot twist and we start to understand the events while he soothes his masochism. Although he is initially portrayed as a determined and decisive person, Mc often becomes an idiot in order to advance the plot. His decisions and behavior make him look like a child. And I don't understand why he's always complaining and yelling about something. He's always angry, resentful or complaining about something, even though he's been through so much and even the author refers to him as someone with a calm mind. Doesn't anyone see the contradiction here? This book is not very good both in writing and literary terms. He wants to be immortal, but seriously, the desire behind it is ridiculous. Most people want it, he's no different, but the author makes it so cringe when he writes it... I'll kill millions, I'll destroy the world, and... and yeah after that I'll be immortal. Couldn't you be a little more specific? The logic behind your wishes and thoughts is so flat. He doesn't even feel like a human being to me. He's just a robot programmed with the goal of immortality. Honestly, I lasted 20 chapters. I don't know what it would really be like if this novel has a romance and a harem, but I'm sure it would be pretty bad. He's a ruthless psychopath, ready to sacrifice everything. To turn this man into a dog crawling after a woman...

Little to no errors, sensible pacing, characters with their own distinct personalities, very consistent uploads. There isn't enough chapters for this, but I'll still give five stars for world background seeing as I've enjoyed it so far

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Destructive_killer

Writing is simple and easy to understand whereas the mc is likeable (for those that like evil mc) so for me, this is a W... There is definitely great potential so don't drop author-san

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Alex_1880

Don't understand why this ain't getting much recorgnition but, this has everything I like. A smart and calculative mc... He is strong enough to not be some submitive horn dog. He isn't a simp, and he is ruthless, very much so...

Writing Quality: 5 stars - There isn't any errors... nine that I've seen Update Stability: 5 stars - Everyday there is a chapter Story Development: 5 stars - Great, as of now, the pacing has been to my liking. There isn't any of the usual cliches, and even the one cliche I've read had an unexpected twist to it... Character Designs: 5 stars - They feel like actual people, which is the main thing I look for. As for the mc, well it is obvious from the tags, he is 😈 World background: 5 stars - Constantly expanding... The locations are described well enough to visualize and the world itself is getting bigger and bigger... plus, we get a sneak peak to outside just the cultivation world...

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Shade_Finn

I'll give this five stars because I want to mate. There isn't a reason to not give it five stars anyway. I like it and that's enough for me. Knowing that this author is the creator of Saber, I don't even need to think and I know that the mc of this one would be getting his revenge. ... BTW, I see a harem tag, is it a big harem cuz I don't really like romance on the whole but since it's the creator of Saber, I'll give u a chance...

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diabolic_diablo

an amazing villain novel...the mc is ruthless and has mysterious origin...harem is there but just for their usefulness....thec character is truly evil...though I hope author u can at least make him have actual affection for some girl or people as reading an evil mc novel usually becomes boring after. awhile...update soon..

Really enjoying this novel and the other one you have written so far, so keep up the good work Author-san[img=update]

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DaoistksQsUO

The mc is evil with little to no morals. A very terrifying devil but can be little cringe at times. Thankfully, I've read so many crines book that I've read a fair resistance to them

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Shade_Finn

I have read all chapters so far and what can I say besides, this book is great. The characters introduce so far are described greatly and the best of all, the mc is ruthless

The quality of writing is good. The story develops quickly but not at a speed where I can't understand what takes place. The main characters are designed pretty in depth. The update stability is very consistent, and the world background is the best out of all, worthy of the 5 stars.