The Deathless Ones

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FavourEkele_1969

This is a total nightmare fuel in the positive sense, what a good way to fictionalize the corona virus disease, it was 'not' nice at all. [img=faceslap] Let me say there were hardly any mistakes and the pace is quite infuriating and slow albeit the unexpected attacks in the successive chapters. This is not a light read at all, I recommend to readers of horror. Shocking!

LV 3

Eternal_bunny

Hello Author, I finally read it till 17 Chapters and honestly, it was great. The plot was fantastic and I like the concept of this story. The characters are interesting, especially their conversation between Ray and Momo (cute name) The pace is good and it's thrilling. The first chapter left a big impression making me want to read more and I would definitely recommend this to my friends. The way you wrote was really impressive not too high excessive language where I had to keep a dictionary beside me.😅😅😂😂 Not too many backgrounds detail which is to my liking and finally, overall, it was very good. Great job. keep up the good work👍👍👌👌

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pedro_corti

The author has a good writing skills... i hope growth for your book ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ the story is very captivating so the discription is.... wish u gr8 luck.

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Rayne_Rue

Great work, love the characters and the plot good story development, keep it up author there is a lot of potential. keep updating more chapters .[img=recommend]

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Brian_Hanes_117

Go ahead and add me to the hypetrain. I only read a bit of it, but I like what I see so far. The writing is good, the updates are steady, the characters are cool, the world-building is there, and the description is better than most stories. Feel free to see my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey".

Just Brilliant... Writing quality is astounding and Characterization, presentation, cant even point out everything . good work brother.....

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Marbleous

Really enjoying this read. I love how it took a real life issue and put a twisted spin on it. I really only came here to read this. I can’t write a harsh review. There’s no mistakes and the story and characters are fabulous. And I’m not surprised in the least. Keep updating frequently. It’s been great to come and read and get away from all the bs life has to bring. Great work.

LV 13

Ekwonna_Irene

Great Great story🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️

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nobu_general

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LV 14

Dehni_Olsen

Firstly, I want to say that the writing style and use of words was great! No mispelling or poorly written areas. This is extremely important for me. If I have to keep going through immersion because a mistake in the sentence messed up. Secondly, the characters and detail of the building and rooms was spot on. It wasn’t too much, leading to distraction. I was able to easily build the apartment and streets in my mind. Momo was irritating yet smart and funny. I didn’ think I would like her but her little idiosyncrasies grew on me, hard! I enjoyed the banter between everyone. My Critiques: There we’re a LOT of characters introduced all at once and it made it a bit hard to keep track of. I had a hard time in the beginning continuing because of how close to current events it was. I’m not your target audience so take this with a grain of salt haha losing someone to Covid and then pull that into my reading and it’s hard. Great great book! I obviously continued reading as it was excellent writing and I fell in love with the story and characters.

LV 1

Saher_Abidi

First of all your writing skills are great... Like really great..... I love the story and i hope the growth for your book!!!! And the description itself is very well explained ☺️

LV 11

Daoist1qnqr5

I read the first chapter, looks good, hope it continues Brasil aqui🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️✌️🇧🇷🇧🇷✌️✌️🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷✌️✌️✌️🇧🇷🇧🇷✌️✌️✌️

LV 10

Rody_

Amazing writing style, loved the characterisation in each character have been introduced and how they develop as the chapters progresses. Don't get me started on the story progression and how it avoids useless information giving the reader what is important and necessary .