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Escribe una reseña8/10 could have a better ending in my opinion, but overall it's pretty decent, it has some funny and embarrassing moments. It also has risque parts that I liked and it depends on your taste if you like it or not
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Este fanfic lo recomiendo para personas que solo quieran pasar el rato, aunque no es muy buena en mi opinión me gusta ya deben de saber porque, lo único malo es el final, aparte de que no hay una escena con Hinata y me hubiera gustado que hubiera.
The MC starts dumb and gets dumber. If you have the fantasy to f*** yourself thats the novel for you. Personal i dislike the MC from the first sentence in the first chapter
A really unique story If I have to say, but the problem is imagine u are riding a bike and enjoying the scenery but suddenly ur bike turned into a rocket and u reached ur destination in mere seconds. Just *** was that??? at least make it a 100 chps bro I believe it was wayyyy to haste to end it like that. and the real, REAL problem? My fav girl didn't get enough screen time!!!!!
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Is it weird that I find more wrong with this story than tapping your own clones, because lets be frank it's nothing more than plessuring yourself... with yourself.
One of my all-time favorite fan-fics!! I would like to put a disclaimer that there is one r*** scene in this fan-fic. I was caught off guard by it but other then that there not much to be put off by. Also I would like to thank the author for the last chapter with Haku that was really funny!😭
Revelar spoilerSome next level of stuff is what this is. D**N ... just d***ed... All I wanna say is I did not sign up for this!
It started out as a story with a lot of potential... But after the addition of the "system" everything went downhill. I'm not saying that the very concept of the system is bad. It's just that most writers can't handle it. Unfortunately...
this was good... a very interesting story, then chapter 6 came and depravity was unleashed. why the heck did you decide to use deprive system. welp i wont dare read this, literally lost his cherry to his own clone.
Selfcest to the max AYOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Nevermind, how does it feel to bang yourself/being banged by a genderbend of youself? Luka from MGQ experienced being banged by a doppelganger. :V
J'avais hésité à lire avec toute ses mauvaise critique, mais en fait, c'est pas mal, rien à voir avec ce que certains rageux disent, juste dommage que ce soit si court.
what the f**k, he fu**ed his own clones. sorry i wont read it and also the chapters are really short. chapters end before it get interested to read
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try if you want found it pretty average after the author discontinued the updates for it some time In starting as was bored so started and when i ended don't know but read it
man did it with his clones 😂 ........................................................................................................................
So writing quality is about average, didn’t really see to many typos or grammatical errors. Updating stability is average, about one or two chapters a week. World building and character design uses a well known preexisting world. Story development is where it tanked. It takes place with canon Naruto right after the academy, MC takes over the body after he dies in real world. Then the system initiated, normally I like these however this one is a depraved version. For those whom have seen one of the comments above regarding MC banging his own clones, this is true. However they failed to mention why. When MC gets his system, it tells him the first mission he has 30 minutes to bang Sakura when she has zero feelings for him. Reward is a skill to help with Shadow clones, failure is death. So his choice is to either trick/r@pe Sakura, figure a way around it or die. This is also not the only time something like this happens (with penalty being death/horrific). As nasty as it is to think of someone banging their own henged clones, that is still 10,000% more acceptable then MC going r@pist route. Chapter 45 actually has the system punish him by forcing dumb penalties on him while increasing his libido to the point it’s causing him insane pain (he literally starts smashing his face on the ground to distract the pain). He blacks out and then r@pes one of his classmates due to system removing his control. The penalty lasts for a week, at which point he has to abuse his date (again, forced to r@pe her the first time after the other classmate due to the system causing another blackout). Magic umbrella happens in chapter 47 to remove his r@pe actions from everyone’s knowledge except his own (all the previous other problems still persist) system gets an update to remove the psychotic aspect and we are left with a nasty taste in our mouths from the previous system’s actions. This is why we as readers should be able to add tags with justifications versus just having to leave very lengthy notes.
Revelar spoilerI will say everything that is in this ff so far .. there's forceful slave system with slave mc ..mc use clones to have segs with himself and also his harem .. mc r*pe female characters because system force him to but that makes it more worse .. slave system uses impossible mission ... so far Im disappointed author it starts good but you ruined it
Somehow it got me interested, I'm not one of those hypocrites saying it's weird or the author is sick fxxk. I myself once actually already think about it when I'm young so in not that disturbed. I also like how it's a very "unique one of a kind I may say. All in all my opinion is It's not for everyone but for someone who has an open mind. As for doing it with your clone, I think a water clone is better for that so you won't get its memories. And my opinion for the clones doing it with your girls I don't really mind it for the reason in my opinion that thing is like getting jealous of a d**do with your name on it. So that is my heartfelt review.
8/10 could have a better ending in my opinion, but overall it's pretty decent, it has some funny and embarrassing moments. It also has risque parts that I liked and it depends on your taste if you like it or not
No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada No me gustó nada de nada
Este fanfic lo recomiendo para personas que solo quieran pasar el rato, aunque no es muy buena en mi opinión me gusta ya deben de saber porque, lo único malo es el final, aparte de que no hay una escena con Hinata y me hubiera gustado que hubiera.
The MC starts dumb and gets dumber. If you have the fantasy to f*** yourself thats the novel for you. Personal i dislike the MC from the first sentence in the first chapter
A really unique story If I have to say, but the problem is imagine u are riding a bike and enjoying the scenery but suddenly ur bike turned into a rocket and u reached ur destination in mere seconds. Just *** was that??? at least make it a 100 chps bro I believe it was wayyyy to haste to end it like that. and the real, REAL problem? My fav girl didn't get enough screen time!!!!!
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Is it weird that I find more wrong with this story than tapping your own clones, because lets be frank it's nothing more than plessuring yourself... with yourself.
One of my all-time favorite fan-fics!! I would like to put a disclaimer that there is one r*** scene in this fan-fic. I was caught off guard by it but other then that there not much to be put off by. Also I would like to thank the author for the last chapter with Haku that was really funny!😭
Revelar spoilerSome next level of stuff is what this is. D**N ... just d***ed... All I wanna say is I did not sign up for this!
It started out as a story with a lot of potential... But after the addition of the "system" everything went downhill. I'm not saying that the very concept of the system is bad. It's just that most writers can't handle it. Unfortunately...
this was good... a very interesting story, then chapter 6 came and depravity was unleashed. why the heck did you decide to use deprive system. welp i wont dare read this, literally lost his cherry to his own clone.
Selfcest to the max AYOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Nevermind, how does it feel to bang yourself/being banged by a genderbend of youself? Luka from MGQ experienced being banged by a doppelganger. :V
J'avais hésité à lire avec toute ses mauvaise critique, mais en fait, c'est pas mal, rien à voir avec ce que certains rageux disent, juste dommage que ce soit si court.
what the f**k, he fu**ed his own clones. sorry i wont read it and also the chapters are really short. chapters end before it get interested to read
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try if you want found it pretty average after the author discontinued the updates for it some time In starting as was bored so started and when i ended don't know but read it
man did it with his clones 😂 ........................................................................................................................
So writing quality is about average, didn’t really see to many typos or grammatical errors. Updating stability is average, about one or two chapters a week. World building and character design uses a well known preexisting world. Story development is where it tanked. It takes place with canon Naruto right after the academy, MC takes over the body after he dies in real world. Then the system initiated, normally I like these however this one is a depraved version. For those whom have seen one of the comments above regarding MC banging his own clones, this is true. However they failed to mention why. When MC gets his system, it tells him the first mission he has 30 minutes to bang Sakura when she has zero feelings for him. Reward is a skill to help with Shadow clones, failure is death. So his choice is to either trick/r@pe Sakura, figure a way around it or die. This is also not the only time something like this happens (with penalty being death/horrific). As nasty as it is to think of someone banging their own henged clones, that is still 10,000% more acceptable then MC going r@pist route. Chapter 45 actually has the system punish him by forcing dumb penalties on him while increasing his libido to the point it’s causing him insane pain (he literally starts smashing his face on the ground to distract the pain). He blacks out and then r@pes one of his classmates due to system removing his control. The penalty lasts for a week, at which point he has to abuse his date (again, forced to r@pe her the first time after the other classmate due to the system causing another blackout). Magic umbrella happens in chapter 47 to remove his r@pe actions from everyone’s knowledge except his own (all the previous other problems still persist) system gets an update to remove the psychotic aspect and we are left with a nasty taste in our mouths from the previous system’s actions. This is why we as readers should be able to add tags with justifications versus just having to leave very lengthy notes.
Revelar spoilerI will say everything that is in this ff so far .. there's forceful slave system with slave mc ..mc use clones to have segs with himself and also his harem .. mc r*pe female characters because system force him to but that makes it more worse .. slave system uses impossible mission ... so far Im disappointed author it starts good but you ruined it
Somehow it got me interested, I'm not one of those hypocrites saying it's weird or the author is sick fxxk. I myself once actually already think about it when I'm young so in not that disturbed. I also like how it's a very "unique one of a kind I may say. All in all my opinion is It's not for everyone but for someone who has an open mind. As for doing it with your clone, I think a water clone is better for that so you won't get its memories. And my opinion for the clones doing it with your girls I don't really mind it for the reason in my opinion that thing is like getting jealous of a d**do with your name on it. So that is my heartfelt review.