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Read this if you want fanfiction ruined for you. Don't believe me. go ahead, read about the man screwing his own shadow clones🤣🤣🤣. it was so bad it's hilarious
first 5 chapters are Meh and gets worse after that.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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This is good and to all the people who think it is disgusting, you are just afraid to admit that you would have done the same thing and I am man enough to admit that I would do the exact same . I also think that from a logical perspective this is a way better opt then getting into a relationship
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It's a great story for those who likes to watch themselves getting plowed by himself. Asides from that, I couldn't bring myself to like where things happening too, I mean way too fast. A week or a month interaction might be okay but a sentence. I'm sorry. And top of that this story is pure copy paste from the original with little changes.
The Beginning After the End of the year and then I will be able to pull through the rest of the story and I will be able to pull through the rest of the story and I will be able to pull through the rest of the story and I will be able to make the best decision for you to do what you want to do
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The story is a boring mess. The system is complete garbage with forced Quests and punishments and without the system the story is the most generic Naruto Isekai ever, little changes but nothing creative. The bland MC dosent do the story any favors.
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It's not a masterpiece, but also quite a good story - something to read at weekend. Events aren't following fanatically canon - in fact, some changes are mind-boggling (fight with Zabuza, Orochimaru), even if they don't influence the rest of the story. Lemons and, generally speaking, hot stuff are a mixed bag of things. You can hate it or love it. To put it simply - Naruto uses clones in bed. Both for G@ng Bang no Jutsu, when he is with other people, as well as for alone games with his female clone. Some people hate it, but I personally find it honest and hot. The worst part of the story is grammar - it's not that bad, everything is understandable, but I have a feeling that the quality of language is falling with the chapter's progress. The most common and annoying thing is changing point of view between 'I' and Naruto.
Anjir............... 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Initially, it looked like a story with great potential and a desire to register a character who achieves everything on his own, but....I've lost potential since the sixth chapter. You made a stupid surprise author.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
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Buena fic!! Uno de los mejores fics de naruto en la actualidad ¡¡Buen desarrollo y diseño de personajes!! Y muy divertido!! (Casi me muero de la risa con el primer comentario de Kurama sobre mc) ¡¡No os preocupéis por los sombrereros!!
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u know what ? fking clone is gross but u need to bear it a little story will be an okay-ish since no fking clone again (up to chap 24) 🤔🤔🤔🤔
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Where did you get the cover picture? It looks good. By the way, when are you going to update the story? It's a good story so please continue writing. Thanks for a good story and keep up the good work!
Many people were angry about the clone issue, but it was a very logical decision. It was impossible to reach sakura within 10 minutes, even if it did, it was an impossible topic.
I will say everything that is in this ff so far .. there's forceful slave system with slave mc ..mc use clones to have segs with himself and also his harem .. mc r*pe female characters because system force him to but that makes it more worse .. slave system uses impossible mission ... so far Im disappointed author it starts good but you ruined it
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Read this if you want fanfiction ruined for you. Don't believe me. go ahead, read about the man screwing his own shadow clones🤣🤣🤣. it was so bad it's hilarious
first 5 chapters are Meh and gets worse after that.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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This is good and to all the people who think it is disgusting, you are just afraid to admit that you would have done the same thing and I am man enough to admit that I would do the exact same . I also think that from a logical perspective this is a way better opt then getting into a relationship
Don't stop don't stop don't stop don't stop don't stop don't stop don't stop don't stop Don't stop don't stop don't stop don't stop don't stop don't stop don't stop don't stop
It's a great story for those who likes to watch themselves getting plowed by himself. Asides from that, I couldn't bring myself to like where things happening too, I mean way too fast. A week or a month interaction might be okay but a sentence. I'm sorry. And top of that this story is pure copy paste from the original with little changes.
The Beginning After the End of the year and then I will be able to pull through the rest of the story and I will be able to pull through the rest of the story and I will be able to pull through the rest of the story and I will be able to make the best decision for you to do what you want to do
Revelar spoiler The story is a boring mess. The system is complete garbage with forced Quests and punishments and without the system the story is the most generic Naruto Isekai ever, little changes but nothing creative. The bland MC dosent do the story any favors.
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It's not a masterpiece, but also quite a good story - something to read at weekend. Events aren't following fanatically canon - in fact, some changes are mind-boggling (fight with Zabuza, Orochimaru), even if they don't influence the rest of the story. Lemons and, generally speaking, hot stuff are a mixed bag of things. You can hate it or love it. To put it simply - Naruto uses clones in bed. Both for G@ng Bang no Jutsu, when he is with other people, as well as for alone games with his female clone. Some people hate it, but I personally find it honest and hot. The worst part of the story is grammar - it's not that bad, everything is understandable, but I have a feeling that the quality of language is falling with the chapter's progress. The most common and annoying thing is changing point of view between 'I' and Naruto.
Anjir............... 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Initially, it looked like a story with great potential and a desire to register a character who achieves everything on his own, but....I've lost potential since the sixth chapter. You made a stupid surprise author.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
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Buena fic!! Uno de los mejores fics de naruto en la actualidad ¡¡Buen desarrollo y diseño de personajes!! Y muy divertido!! (Casi me muero de la risa con el primer comentario de Kurama sobre mc) ¡¡No os preocupéis por los sombrereros!!
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u know what ? fking clone is gross but u need to bear it a little story will be an okay-ish since no fking clone again (up to chap 24) 🤔🤔🤔🤔
Revelar spoiler Where did you get the cover picture? It looks good. By the way, when are you going to update the story? It's a good story so please continue writing. Thanks for a good story and keep up the good work!
Many people were angry about the clone issue, but it was a very logical decision. It was impossible to reach sakura within 10 minutes, even if it did, it was an impossible topic.
I will say everything that is in this ff so far .. there's forceful slave system with slave mc ..mc use clones to have segs with himself and also his harem .. mc r*pe female characters because system force him to but that makes it more worse .. slave system uses impossible mission ... so far Im disappointed author it starts good but you ruined it