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In Naruto WOrld
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This is a story about a boy who gets transmigrated into Naruto's body right at the point where the story began. Filled with excitement and hesitation he takes his step forward in order to not get killed without enjoying this unconventional life to the fullest.
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8/10 could have a better ending in my opinion, but overall it's pretty decent, it has some funny and embarrassing moments. It also has risque parts that I liked and it depends on your taste if you like it or not
If you enjoy the idea of plowing and getting plowed by yourself, this is the story for you. Not for me though thanks. This is yet another reason to hate shadow clones.
Guy kept banging his clones ayooo .................................................................................................
Interesting indeed. Though he fu**ed his own clone. Let that sink in... It's wrong in so many levels. smh. and shouldn't even work. But interesting nonetheless.
Initially, it looked like a story with great potential and a desire to register a character who achieves everything on his own, but....I've lost potential since the sixth chapter. You made a stupid surprise author.
No me gusto mucho la redacción de los capítulo. Menos que se follara a su clon. Ademas las cosas pasan demasiado rápido si quieres a hacer un R 18 por lo menos dale alto de sentido. A los capitulos de falta trama en interacción de personajes. Cada capitulo se siente como un Resumen de una historia.
I will say everything that is in this ff so far .. there's forceful slave system with slave mc ..mc use clones to have segs with himself and also his harem .. mc r*pe female characters because system force him to but that makes it more worse .. slave system uses impossible mission ... so far Im disappointed author it starts good but you ruined it
The story is a boring mess. The system is complete garbage with forced Quests and punishments and without the system the story is the most generic Naruto Isekai ever, little changes but nothing creative. The bland MC dosent do the story any favors.
So writing quality is about average, didn’t really see to many typos or grammatical errors. Updating stability is average, about one or two chapters a week. World building and character design uses a well known preexisting world. Story development is where it tanked. It takes place with canon Naruto right after the academy, MC takes over the body after he dies in real world. Then the system initiated, normally I like these however this one is a depraved version. For those whom have seen one of the comments above regarding MC banging his own clones, this is true. However they failed to mention why. When MC gets his system, it tells him the first mission he has 30 minutes to bang Sakura when she has zero feelings for him. Reward is a skill to help with Shadow clones, failure is death. So his choice is to either trick/r@pe Sakura, figure a way around it or die. This is also not the only time something like this happens (with penalty being death/horrific). As nasty as it is to think of someone banging their own henged clones, that is still 10,000% more acceptable then MC going r@pist route. Chapter 45 actually has the system punish him by forcing dumb penalties on him while increasing his libido to the point it’s causing him insane pain (he literally starts smashing his face on the ground to distract the pain). He blacks out and then r@pes one of his classmates due to system removing his control. The penalty lasts for a week, at which point he has to abuse his date (again, forced to r@pe her the first time after the other classmate due to the system causing another blackout). Magic umbrella happens in chapter 47 to remove his r@pe actions from everyone’s knowledge except his own (all the previous other problems still persist) system gets an update to remove the psychotic aspect and we are left with a nasty taste in our mouths from the previous system’s actions. This is why we as readers should be able to add tags with justifications versus just having to leave very lengthy notes.
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what the f**k, he fu**ed his own clones. sorry i wont read it and also the chapters are really short. chapters end before it get interested to read
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Many people were angry about the clone issue, but it was a very logical decision. It was impossible to reach sakura within 10 minutes, even if it did, it was an impossible topic.
The MC starts dumb and gets dumber. If you have the fantasy to f*** yourself thats the novel for you. Personal i dislike the MC from the first sentence in the first chapter
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What can I say? I like the story and its concept. So thank you for bringing this story to us and keep it up................................................
One of my all-time favorite fan-fics!! I would like to put a disclaimer that there is one r*** scene in this fan-fic. I was caught off guard by it but other then that there not much to be put off by. Also I would like to thank the author for the last chapter with Haku that was really funny!😭
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It started out as a story with a lot of potential... But after the addition of the "system" everything went downhill. I'm not saying that the very concept of the system is bad. It's just that most writers can't handle it. Unfortunately...
This is good and to all the people who think it is disgusting, you are just afraid to admit that you would have done the same thing and I am man enough to admit that I would do the exact same . I also think that from a logical perspective this is a way better opt then getting into a relationship
Somehow it got me interested, I'm not one of those hypocrites saying it's weird or the author is sick fxxk. I myself once actually already think about it when I'm young so in not that disturbed. I also like how it's a very "unique one of a kind I may say. All in all my opinion is It's not for everyone but for someone who has an open mind. As for doing it with your clone, I think a water clone is better for that so you won't get its memories. And my opinion for the clones doing it with your girls I don't really mind it for the reason in my opinion that thing is like getting jealous of a d**do with your name on it. So that is my heartfelt review.