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Naruto Uzumaki died on the battlefield, but now he finds himself in another body that isn't his own. "His name shall be Obito Uchiha." A voice said, and Naruto knew that he is Naruto no longer.
May be... a bit AU.
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I love this auther for his writing quality and is ability to write good dialogue. I also respect the fact that he’s pretty good with us update stability. My issues with this book has to do with the story. It starts with a great concept of naruto going back into time as obito. Great idea!!! But then Naruto is ‘unconsciously’ catching girls like he has a Pokédex to fill. His own mother kushina, is implied at this point to have feelings for obito, who is also naruto. Its also implied that mikoto and kaguya (yes that kaguya) is also also apart of his herem. And as bs and cringe I find all that, as a fan fic reader I have come to learn that every fan fic, as a wish fulfillment book will have something you don’t like that you will need to power though to continue reading. But, my biggest issue is the author demonizing every male character that would usually end up with that girl who will now eventually end up in obitos herem. Minato for some reason has become a manipulative a** that would let kushina be kidnapped so he could save the day and win her heart just so he can be closer to his goal of becoming hokage. Fugaku has become the clan head who wants to marry mikoto because she has deep pockets of cash and it would stabilize his position as head of the uchiha. And I am pretty sure thats how asuma will be portayed since kurenai seems to also be interested in obito. And that bothers me. Good characters with potential are just demonized for the sake of plot convenience so he can have a big herem. And this is all done before hes even 5. Character design is alright since its naruto, apart from the dudes that are demonized and the girls who for some reason get a ‘special feeling’ in there heart the moment they meet with obito. They do seem to act like they would in the show. And the world background is naruto. Its hard to mess up a world like naruto since some information we get in manga and anime conflict with each other and the dates make no sence. So as long as you don’t forget major events, any minor changes to the story or timeline can be shrugged off since the whole show is filled with plot wholes. My final thoughts on this book is that its a great story for those who love herems and hate on previous romantic intrestes of herem members. For those who dont, I recommend giving it a chance since I’ve read this authors starwars book and found that even with all the bs(talking about many times he adds a crossover jusy to boost the character) in that novel he can write a interactive and intriguing story.
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The book is very well written. I'm highly looking forward to the future of the book. There isn't much I can write about since there is only one chapter but there is one thing to note is that I have nothing bad to say which is an achievement since I can usually find something bad for the author to improve his book. Definitely want more!
For starters the mc awakens sharigan at 4 which everyone knows but decides to hide his abilities in the academy like all these lowkey mc's do. On top of this, the author is making a villian out of every girls original partner. for example: Minato, Fugaku, asuma. On top of this hes twisting narutos personality to much. both him and obito were pretty much the same person until rin died, but hes making him think like a calculating mc. And of course he's villainizing hirzuen so naruto who idolized the man doesn't trust him. this story will be a lot of nonsense so i'm not even going bother anymore. DONT WASTE YOUR TIME OR GET YOUR HOPES UP
I just don't like that it's going the harem route and the Minato is secretly a second danzo route. not going to lie I saw this coming the moment The only characters being introduced were girls.
Advice from a brother to his brothers, do not read this nonsense ................ Contains love at first sight for every girl........................... .................................................. Silly events
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its an interesting concept, especially with the magic systems being centred around science and technology. they are a good match. I'm looking forward to how this story progresses!
R serious?? it was good at first but...seriously?? Kushina?? HIS OWN MOTHER?? Well this is too much, I can't take it anymore. Naruto...reincarnated as obito....my fav character... to degrade it to this level...such a shame...no....shame on you ....naruto would have never acted like that...I'm so disappointed. Then again IT'S an AU...but still... you didn't say anything abt naruto character change and abt him dating "his own mother", no to mention the age difference as he was now reincarnated as 'Obito'. (The only good think is the grammar and the world back ground)
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The plot is all over the place man, it's too dumb at times and the way some things are just does not make any sense but still a good Idea for fic👍
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great writing but very bad plot, naruro x kushina really?? and then he demonizes every other male character just so his harem is somehow able to come true... also has a lot of info thats simply not correct but i can give that a pass but the romance is trash.
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I love this story it interesting This is the oganizing fanfic so far nnnnmkkkkkkkkkkknnnnnnjjjjjkkkucyuvjvjvjvkbibibi
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Volumen 1
- 1 V.1-C.1│Knucklehead I│ 2 years ago
- 2 V.1-C.2│Knucklehead II│ 2 years ago
- 3 V.1-C.3│Knucklehead III│ 2 years ago
- 4 V.1-C.4│Old and New I│ 2 years ago
- 5 V.1-C.5│Old and New II│ 2 years ago
- 6 V.1-C.6│Old and New III│ 2 years ago
- 7 V.1-C.7│Old and New IV│ 2 years ago
- 8 V.1-C.8│Old and New V│ 2 years ago
- 9 V.1-C.9│Old and New VI│ 2 years ago
- 10 V.1-C.10│Academy│ 2 years ago
- 11 V.1-C.11│Developments I│ 2 years ago
- 12 V.1-C.12│Developments II│ 2 years ago
- 13 V.1-C.13│Developments III│ 2 years ago
- 14 V.1-C.14│Developments IV│ 2 years ago
- 15 V.1-C.15│Developments V│ 2 years ago
- 16 V.1-C.16│Developments VI│ 2 years ago
- 17 V.1-C.17│Developments VII│ 2 years ago
- 18 V.1-C.18│Developments VIII│ 2 years ago
- 19 V.1-C.19│Developments IX│ 2 years ago
- 20 V.1-C.20│Graduation│ 2 years ago
- 21 V.1-C.21│Assigned I│ 2 years ago
- 22 V.1-C.22│Assigned II│ 2 years ago
- 23 V.1-C.23│Assigned III│ 2 years ago
- 24 V.1-C.24│Assigned IV│ 2 years ago
- 25 V.1-C.25│Assigned V│ 2 years ago
- 26 V.1-C.26│Assigned VI│ 2 years ago
- 27 V.1-C.27│Ruins of Uzushiogakure I│ 2 years ago
- 28 V.1-C.28│Ruins of Uzushiogakure II│ 2 years ago
- 29 V.1-C.29│Ruins of Uzushiogakure III│ 2 years ago
- 30 V.1-C.30│Jinchuriki│ 2 years ago
- 31 V.1-C.31│Return I│ 2 years ago
- 32 V.1-C.32│Return II│ 2 years ago
- 33 V.1-C.33│Return III│ 2 years ago
- 34 V.1-C.34│World War Begins I│ 2 years ago
- 35 V.1-C.35│World War Begins II│ 2 years ago
- 36 V.1-C.36│World War Begins III│ 2 years ago
- 37 V.1-C.37│World War Begins IV│ 2 years ago
- 38 V.1-C.38│World War Begins V│ 2 years ago
- 39 V.1-C.39│World War Begins VI│ 2 years ago
- 40 V.1-C.40│New Friends│ 2 years ago
- 41 V.1-C.41│Growth I│ 2 years ago
- 42 V.1-C.42│Growth II│ 2 years ago
- 43 V.1-C.43│Growth III│ 2 years ago
- 44 V.1-C.44│Growth IV│ 2 years ago
- 45 V.1-C.45│Growth V│ 2 years ago
- 46 V.1-C.46│Growth VI│ 2 years ago
- 47 V.1-C.47│Chunin Exams I│ 2 years ago
- 48 V.1-C.48│Chunin Exams II│ 2 years ago
- 49 V.1-C.49│Chunin Exams III│ 2 years ago
- 50 V.1-C.50│Intermission│ 2 years ago
- 51 V.1-C.51│Last of the Senju I│ 2 years ago
- 52 V.1-C.52│Last of the Senju II│ 2 years ago
- 53 V.1-C.53│Last of the Senju III│ 2 years ago
- 54 V.1-C.54│Last of the Senju IV│ 2 years ago
- 55 V.1-C.55│Last of the Senju V│ 2 years ago
- 56 V.1-C.56│Last of the Senju VI│ 2 years ago
- 57 V.1-C.57│The War Wages I│ 2 years ago
- 58 V.1-C.58│The War Wages II│ 2 years ago
- 59 V.1-C.59│The War Wages III│ 2 years ago
- 60 V.1-C.60│Not Today, Thanks│ 2 years ago
- 61 V.1-C.61│Not Quite Over Yet I│ 2 years ago
- 62 V.1-C.62│Not Quite Over Yet II│ 2 years ago
- 63 V.1-C.63│Not Quite Over Yet III│ 2 years ago
- 64 V.1-C.64│Not Quite Over Yet IV│ 2 years ago
- 65 V.1-C.65│Not Quite Over Yet V│ 2 years ago
- 66 V.1-C.66│Not Quite Over Yet VI│ 2 years ago
- 67 V.1-C.67│Not Quite Over Yet VII│ 2 years ago
- 68 V.1-C.68│Not Quite Over Yet VIII│ 2 years ago
- 69 V.1-C.69│Not Quite Over Yet IX│ 2 years ago
- 70 V.1-C.70│Interlude│ 2 years ago
- 71 V.1-C.71│Ending War I│ 2 years ago
- 72 V.1-C.72│Ending War II│ 2 years ago
- 73 V.1-C.73│Ending War III│ 2 years ago
- 74 V.1-C.74│Original Akatsuki I│ 2 years ago
- 75 V.1-C.75│Original Akatsuki II│ 1 years ago
- 76 V.1-C.76│Original Akatsuki III│ 1 years ago
- 77 V.1-C.77│I Didn't Mean To Do That I│ 1 years ago
- 78 V.1-C.78│I Didn't Mean To Do That II│ 1 years ago
- 79 V.1-C.79│I Didn't Mean To Do That III│ 1 years ago
- 80 V.1-C.80│End of the Third War│ 1 years ago
- 81 V.1-C.81│Eternal I│ 1 years ago
- 82 V.1-C.82│Eternal II│ 1 years ago
- 83 V.1-C.83│Eternal III│ 1 years ago
- 84 V.1-C.84│Successor I│ 1 years ago
- 85 V.1-C.85│Successor II│ 1 years ago
- 86 V.1-C.86│Successor III│ 1 years ago
- 87 V.1-C.87│Successor IV│ 1 years ago
- 88 V.1-C.88│Successor V│ 1 years ago
- 89 V.1-C.89│Successor VI│ 1 years ago
- 90 V.1-C.90│Executive Order│ 1 years ago
- 91 V.1-C.91│Calm Before the Storm I│ 1 years ago
- 92 V.1-C.92│Calm Before the Storm II│ 1 years ago
- 93 V.1-C.93│Calm Before the Storm III│ 1 years ago
- 94 V.1-C.94│Calm Before the Storm IV│ 1 years ago
- 95 V.1-C.95│Calm Before the Storm V│ 1 years ago
- 96 V.1-C.96│Calm Before the Storm VI│ 1 years ago
- 97 V.1-C.97│Drizzle Before the Fall I│ 1 years ago
- 98 V.1-C.98│Drizzle Before the Fall II│ 1 years ago
- 99 V.1-C.99│Drizzle Before the Fall III│ 1 years ago
- 100 V.1-C.100│Accusation│ 1 years ago
Volumen 2
- 101 V.2-C.1│Into Exile I│ 1 years ago
- 102 V.2-C.2│Into Exile II│ 1 years ago
- 103 V.2-C.3│Into Exile III│ 1 years ago
- 104 V.2-C.4│Into Exile IV│ 1 years ago
- 105 V.2-C.5│Into Exile V│ 1 years ago
- 106 V.2-C.6│Into Exile VI│ 1 years ago
- 107 V.2-C.7│Into Exile VII│ 1 years ago
- 108 V.2-C.8│Into Exile VIII│ 1 years ago
- 109 V.2-C.9│Into Exile IX│ 1 years ago
- 110 V.2-C.10│Into Exile X│ 1 years ago
- 111 V.2-C.11│Getting Accustomed I│ 1 years ago
- 112 V.2-C.12│Getting Accustomed II│ 1 years ago
- 113 V.2-C.13│Getting Accustomed III│ 1 years ago
Good fic Didn’ like where you were heading with the pairing so I decided to drop. Kushina… Really? I honestly don’t get why you made Naruto get reborn as Obito when you could have had an OC reincarnate as him Would have made for a much better story