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no matter how many times I reread this I still feel the same way...massive disappointment...you introduce thr mc as a half spirit i love that then you ruin it by siding with zuko...he should have chosen a neutral side but leaning towards aang...considering his mother was a spirit and his hate for the fire nation...I think you ruined something good and its a dann shame
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The writing is very good and the stability of updates was great until recently when the author took a break but now it seems he is back, (11/11/2021), The story is very good and well-thought-out and the character is amazing. the world background is very intensive because of the stability of basing it on a story already made but the author does include his own creations into the book to make it enjoyable and separate from the main plot of the normal story. This book does involve the characters of the Avatar: The Last Airbender series not the legend of the Korra series.
no stable ability to update chapters. the last full chapter really cemented who the MC was and thats "weak." now, he's attempted to murder innocent people trying to save the world so he can help his pathetic friend continue down the path of insanity by helping hunt the avatar. think of any character weaker than zuko in the beginning of his arc, who'd want to follow that? spare me the redemption and character growth, the MC had the chance to help but became worst than enabler for him. terrible writing. he just wants a sympathy reason to act evil. where has decent writing gone?
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MaAann.......He is too kind not my ideal Mc But Rest is fine.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is just FUNtastic! I love how you portrayed the OC and how he is interacting with the world! Simply brilliant! I hope to see more from you soon!
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This fanfiction is one of the best I’ve ever read. It is fantastically written and the story is immersive. The author must be both handsome and tall, that’s the only way this fic. could reach so high on the rankings! And while looking good at that!
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the story is very interesting in itself. we follow an OC with knowledge in fire manipulation. I love the creation of the universe and the character. the world context is respected and their is no scenaristic inconsistency. the author shows a slightly darker side of the universe I like this fanfiction ^^ beware of spoilers: . . . . . . . even if I find that the acceptance by the other tribes is a little pushed, I remember that they are still at war and not cease fire. (it can pass if it shows the logo of the order of the lotus) but if you go up a dark side of the universe you have to stay in the theme.
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Eu pessoalmente gostei muito da historia, o mc não é alguém particularmente do mal, mas também não é um mc bonzinho que não mata ou perdoa a todos, o que é a da minha preferencia. A historia também se desenvolve bem, (mesmo com alguns time skips) e o mc progride bem em questão de força. Só queria que atualizasse mais rápido -_-
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Overall rating is good. Good development, plot, ideas for power level, and it is absolutely recommended novel to read. I hope the author can finish the story and doesn't stop it in midway
I'm gonna leave a review that's mostly for me. The story started off great, I liked the potential the story had with the synopsis but you don't even get introduced to the character's background in the first few chapters. He's just thrown in the story with Iroh and it develops from there and you have an idea of where it's going but not really because the author doesn't do a lot of world building. You're left to mostly figure stuff out on your own, which was annoying on top of the poor grammar. I can understand if English isn't the author's first language but it looks like he didn't even read himself to make sure. The story develops in a good way at but quickly contradicts itself because you're not sure if the MC is a reincarnator or not. At some point the MC talks about his timeline until the attack on the Northern Water Tribe like he knows in what world he is but also doesn't know the main characters of the series like he's only an inhabitant of the world. It's messy but I liked the idea. I just didn't like the fact that it looks like the author doesn't care about the story. I don't care if a story takes time, quality over quantity and quantity is a big word because the chapters are very small. Well enough of me ranting. I think I was mostly fair with my rating except for the updating stability because I don't know the author and came upon this story while randomly searching for an ATLA fanfic. Anyway that's all.
Revelar spoiler no matter how many times I reread this I still feel the same way...massive disappointment...you introduce thr mc as a half spirit i love that then you ruin it by siding with zuko...he should have chosen a neutral side but leaning towards aang...considering his mother was a spirit and his hate for the fire nation...I think you ruined something good and its a dann shame
nice don't drop. . .. .. . . .. . .. . . .. . .. . .. . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . ... . . ... .. . . .. . .. .. . .. .
The writing is very good and the stability of updates was great until recently when the author took a break but now it seems he is back, (11/11/2021), The story is very good and well-thought-out and the character is amazing. the world background is very intensive because of the stability of basing it on a story already made but the author does include his own creations into the book to make it enjoyable and separate from the main plot of the normal story. This book does involve the characters of the Avatar: The Last Airbender series not the legend of the Korra series.
no stable ability to update chapters. the last full chapter really cemented who the MC was and thats "weak." now, he's attempted to murder innocent people trying to save the world so he can help his pathetic friend continue down the path of insanity by helping hunt the avatar. think of any character weaker than zuko in the beginning of his arc, who'd want to follow that? spare me the redemption and character growth, the MC had the chance to help but became worst than enabler for him. terrible writing. he just wants a sympathy reason to act evil. where has decent writing gone?
I need more ................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,..,.,,.,..,,..,,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,
Is this dropped???????????????????????????????????????😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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MaAann.......He is too kind not my ideal Mc But Rest is fine.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is just FUNtastic! I love how you portrayed the OC and how he is interacting with the world! Simply brilliant! I hope to see more from you soon!
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This fanfiction is one of the best I’ve ever read. It is fantastically written and the story is immersive. The author must be both handsome and tall, that’s the only way this fic. could reach so high on the rankings! And while looking good at that!
Good........................l..................................................l..................................................l..................................................l..........................
the story is very interesting in itself. we follow an OC with knowledge in fire manipulation. I love the creation of the universe and the character. the world context is respected and their is no scenaristic inconsistency. the author shows a slightly darker side of the universe I like this fanfiction ^^ beware of spoilers: . . . . . . . even if I find that the acceptance by the other tribes is a little pushed, I remember that they are still at war and not cease fire. (it can pass if it shows the logo of the order of the lotus) but if you go up a dark side of the universe you have to stay in the theme.
Revelar spoiler Eu pessoalmente gostei muito da historia, o mc não é alguém particularmente do mal, mas também não é um mc bonzinho que não mata ou perdoa a todos, o que é a da minha preferencia. A historia também se desenvolve bem, (mesmo com alguns time skips) e o mc progride bem em questão de força. Só queria que atualizasse mais rápido -_-
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Overall rating is good. Good development, plot, ideas for power level, and it is absolutely recommended novel to read. I hope the author can finish the story and doesn't stop it in midway
I'm gonna leave a review that's mostly for me. The story started off great, I liked the potential the story had with the synopsis but you don't even get introduced to the character's background in the first few chapters. He's just thrown in the story with Iroh and it develops from there and you have an idea of where it's going but not really because the author doesn't do a lot of world building. You're left to mostly figure stuff out on your own, which was annoying on top of the poor grammar. I can understand if English isn't the author's first language but it looks like he didn't even read himself to make sure. The story develops in a good way at but quickly contradicts itself because you're not sure if the MC is a reincarnator or not. At some point the MC talks about his timeline until the attack on the Northern Water Tribe like he knows in what world he is but also doesn't know the main characters of the series like he's only an inhabitant of the world. It's messy but I liked the idea. I just didn't like the fact that it looks like the author doesn't care about the story. I don't care if a story takes time, quality over quantity and quantity is a big word because the chapters are very small. Well enough of me ranting. I think I was mostly fair with my rating except for the updating stability because I don't know the author and came upon this story while randomly searching for an ATLA fanfic. Anyway that's all.
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