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I think you should start a patreon like most other authors do.

very good chapter.

It might be interesting to leave Hogwarts and return for the Triwizard Tournament as a competitor from another school.

TFTC, Freeing up time is a good idea, I wonder if it's possible to free up other subjects like History with Professor Binns and take his OWLs in this lesson. Access to the Restricted Section could also be interesting. It could be interesting if the MC manages to start a trend in Ravenclaw and the best end up leaving Potions lesson instead.

she's deputy headmistress, Talion leaves after his duel results, her academic background coupled with Skeeter's article would cause a scandal at Hogwarts. I'm sure Albus and Hogwarts would want to do without it.

Its in the scan of boruto

The arc bothers me more in form than in substance. It's the way it's brought about that bothers me.

TFTC, I fully appreciate Helena Ravenclaw's entry, she is rarely mentioned in fanfic, but as Luna's friend and daughter of Rowena Ravenclaw, one of the founders, she carries with her many secrets that would be interesting to explore. However I agree with Helena on one fact "if you stare long into an abyss, the abyss stares back at you too."

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I give little chance of following the Pyke union after this. The return will be brutal.

The ideology of the assassins goes far beyond that, it advocates free will above all, the primary ideology is to guide civilization towards peace not by blind obedience via the objects of Eden like the Templars but by reflection. They push the people to reach their own reflection and try to guide them by progressing so that they find their own conclusion. What differentiates the assassins from the Templars is not the final objective, it is the path to get there. Altaïr says it very well in the sense that it is quite paradoxical because for that the assassins agree to get their hands dirty.

abandoned ?

The MC must also hire former Aurors or wizards of Muggle origin sorry for the current magical world to protect the newspaper and editorial staff because he will quickly attack from the opposition.

TFTC, for the moment I'm enjoying the story even if I would like to see the FL arrive quickly. For an immortal to have the image of love at first sight for an MC who is almost over 10,000 years old would be pretty weird, I'd rather see a romance develop.

TFTC, I think this is a good opportunity for the MC to invest in the Quibbler, Luna's father's newspaper, it is the only opposition magazine that displays a neutral point of view on the magical world and the truth of what is happening there. Having a real newspaper not influenced by politicians could be interesting and it's not like the MC lacks money to pay journalists.

I find it hard to believe that the MC who has Mandalorian armor capable of blocking blasters manages to be neutralized without a fight.

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nothing stops Patrick from going into the cupboards.

Since the Slytherins describe him as a dark lord and he is already half ostracized as much as he becomes to the snake, at worst everything can be placed under the evil guardianship of Dumbledore, on the basilisk, or the evil guardianship of the Board of Governors. which in any case is beneficial for the MC.

the elves can apparate anywhere and are not directly impacted by the protections, I can see Patrick starting an elf liberation operation by teleporting into the house and freeing the mistreated elves by offering them clothing, that would be funny to see how the malfoy and the others houses would manage without a house elf to cook and clean.