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Broken Tower Saga : The First Swordsman

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The Maha Tower or The Broken Tower of Omega—some call it. It is a place of Dream, a place of myth, and a place of Chaos. Only a thousand among many get the chance to climb it each year.
Wrik spent years to find this tower, ignoring his studies, University, but to no avail. Until a day when a letter came to his door with a pair of tickets to the tower.
But before that, he had to appear in gruesome trials to enter the cruel Tower.

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[The novel is a bit slow compared to other webnovel. It picks up the pace from the 10th chapter or so.]

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silent_walker

Hello, Author here, giving his book a biased review. I'll say again, the book is slow at the start and takes time to tension build. And the side character outshines the main character in the beginning (trust me, I planned that), though the mc starts showing his colour after the first arc. PS: the RPG elements do not appear until chapter 7 (and it's not a RPG element heavy book either. Give it a try. Thank you.

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Enjoyable read, seems like a tower climbing at first but so far doesn't seem like the case. After reading the first 3 arcs, I felt the story so far was a prologue. A large chunk was dedicated to the trial/entry to the tower per se. The overall story felt like it progressed slowly overall but the pace and action within the trial made it seem fast paced. The fighting scenes were well done and didn't feel repetitive. I liked how the MC was not always the strongest nor smartest one within the group. Other members are capable of making their own actions and pulling their own weight helping each other. Not being always dependent on the MC is rare. Though the 3rd arc MC took the reins. The characters are nice and they have their own quirks. They mesh well together. Though you still have some of your stereotypical characters. Some thing I disliked is that it felt repetitive that someone is knocked unconscious or captured and needed someone to save them. Characters got separated a lot in the trial so there was a lot of pov changes not bad at all. Additionally, there are a lot of named characters most might not get enough development. Lastly, a lack of deaths. There was always danger lurking around but nobody ever dies.

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Edel_Li

Well well ...! It was actually very interesting! I'm not really used to reading Litrpg but the Diablo-like tower ... I'm sold (as a gamer, that spoke to me)! The writing is concise, precise and suits very well to the universe. I truly recommend to people to give it a try! I have to add one thing: author, you have the reverse problem of me. Sometimes, you cut the sentences too much where it should be a comma instead of a point. I think some sentences will be more impactful or meaningful. I'll keep it in my library and will definitively continue reading it! PS: I'm so sorry, I add so many comments while reading as I was reacting just in the hot of the moment :joy:

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Falling0Star

The main character should be the blond boy. That's how I remember it, Alex, right? The book is beautiful and flowing. I haven't read much, but it looks like quality jewellery Well, take it, easy man. Good luck. But right now! The main character must be changed.I felt like commenting today. 4 stars!

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HarsShiba

it was soo amazing!! now i'm left wanting for more :(( I suddenly feel empty..well thank you author-san for your work and hope you keep us updated !!

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DaoistQxTMqz

The story had a lot of potential but unfortunately its been ruined. The author tried making the conversations smart, sassy, funny and mature but he totally overdid it. Many conversations are stretched out for no reason as well.

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Aidan_7862

Nice Będę padał na was ogniem piekielnym, poznacie mój gniew i poczujecie ból tysiąca śmierci, nieistotne śmieci uhhhh

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Blue_Pizza

The whole concept of the story is interesting. Hidden mysteries amd secrets that have the potential to explode into an amzing storyline in the future? Count me in. The 50 floor tower did remind of a part of the comic Player Reborn, though. I like the dialogs and character interactions—they're immersive, real and flow quite well. The world building is coming together nicely, and using names that look like they belong in a fantasy-like civilization helps a lot. I look forward to reading more about Maha and getting answers to the prologue.

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Protagonist_M

Oh, this is pretty cool! I didn't know what to expect going in, but your writing style resembles a merging of more traditional Western fantasy interactions and newer Light Novel-type storytelling. Very interested to see where this will go.

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ihatepower_45

it reminds me of the beginning of tower of The Tower of Druaga and a little of tower of God. I'm going to keep a eye on it to see it's growth.

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Volumen 1 : The First Swordsman: Origin

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    A Silent Road 3 years ago
  2. 2
    A Decision And A Meeting 3 years ago
  3. 3
    A Letter From A Lost Brother 3 years ago
  4. 4
    A Chance Meeting 3 years ago
  5. 5
    Home 3 years ago
  6. 6
    The Summoning Room 3 years ago
  7. 7
    The Awakening 3 years ago
  8. 8
    An Byul 3 years ago
  9. 9
    Eye of Insights 3 years ago
  10. 10
    The Trial Begins 3 years ago
  11. 11
    The Art Of Mahasaying 3 years ago
  12. 12
    Mahasayer 3 years ago
  13. 13
    Conflict 3 years ago
  14. 14
    The Four 3 years ago
  15. 15
    The Rescue (1) 3 years ago
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    The Rescue (2) 3 years ago
  17. 17
    The Goblin Hunter (1) 3 years ago
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    The Goblin Hunter (2) 3 years ago
  19. 19
    Tanya 3 years ago
  20. 20
    The Man Who Killed the King (1) 3 years ago
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    The Man Who Killed the King (2) 3 years ago
  22. 22
    Night Raid (1) 3 years ago
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    Night Raid (2) 3 years ago
  24. 24
    Rage of the Goblins (1) 3 years ago
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    Rage of the Goblins (2) 3 years ago
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    Rage of the Goblins (3) 3 years ago
  27. 27
    The Trial Salesman (1) 3 years ago
  28. 28
    The Trial Salesman (2) 3 years ago
  29. 29
    The Trial Salesman (3) 3 years ago
  30. 30
    Interlude: End Of Phase-I 3 years ago
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    The Infector Nest (1) 3 years ago
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    The Infector Nest (2) 3 years ago
  33. 33
    Emergency Quest (1) 3 years ago
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    Emergency Quest (2) 3 years ago
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    To The Infector Nest (1) 3 years ago
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    To The Infector Nest (2) 3 years ago
  37. 37
    To The Infector Nest (3) 3 years ago
  38. 38
    To The Infector Nest (4) 3 years ago
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    Grave Peril (1) 3 years ago
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    Grave Peril (2) 3 years ago
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    Grave Peril (3) 3 years ago
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    Grave Peril (4) 3 years ago
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    Grave Peril (5) 3 years ago
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    The Hungry Ghoul (3) 3 years ago
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    The Hungry Ghoul (4) 3 years ago
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    The Hungry Ghoul (5) 3 years ago
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    End of Phase-II 3 years ago
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    Evaluation and the Broken Myth 3 years ago
  51. 51
    The Trial Sanctuary 3 years ago
  52. 52
    A Meal with Two Sister 3 years ago
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    Lavish Staying 3 years ago
  54. 54
    The First Lesson (1) 3 years ago
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    The First Lesson (2) 3 years ago
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    The First Lesson (3) 3 years ago
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    Elemental Test (1) 3 years ago
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    Elemental Test (2) 3 years ago
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    Mana Training 3 years ago
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    Omega Store (1) 3 years ago
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    Omega Store (2) 3 years ago
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    Omega Store (3) 3 years ago
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    Omega Store (4) 3 years ago
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    Wheel of Fortune (1) 3 years ago
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    Wheel of Fortune (2) 3 years ago
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    Wheel of Fortune (3) 3 years ago
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    Assessment (1) 3 years ago
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    Assessment (2) 3 years ago
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    Armament Reinforcement (1) 3 years ago
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    Armament Reinforcement (2) 3 years ago
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    Class Advancement 3 years ago
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    A Brave New World Awaiting (1) 3 years ago
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    A Brave New World Awaiting (2) 3 years ago
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    A Brave New World Awaiting (3) 3 years ago
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    Interlude-II 3 years ago
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    Conflict at the Cafeteria (1) 3 years ago
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    Conflict at the Cafeteria (2) 3 years ago
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    Conflict at the Cafeteria (3) 3 years ago
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    Before the Test (1) 3 years ago
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    Before the Test (2) 3 years ago
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    Before the Test (3) 3 years ago
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    The Little War (1) 3 years ago
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    The Little War (2) 3 years ago
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    Crisis in the Grassland (1) 3 years ago
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    Crisis in the Grassland (2) 3 years ago
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    Divided (1) 3 years ago
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    Divided (2) 3 years ago
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    Divided (3) 3 years ago
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    Divided (4) 3 years ago
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    Seize the flag (1) 3 years ago
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    Seize the Flag (2) 3 years ago
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    Seize the Flag (3) 3 years ago
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    Bond (1) 3 years ago
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    Bond (2) 3 years ago
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    Warmth in the Cold Night 3 years ago
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    Scums 3 years ago
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    Negotiations (1) 3 years ago
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    Negotiations (2) 3 years ago
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    Wild Lily 3 years ago
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    Scouting 3 years ago
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    New Cave 3 years ago
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    Scythe (1) 3 years ago
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    Scythe (2) 3 years ago
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    Slave 3 years ago
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    Plans (1) 3 years ago
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    Plans (2) 3 years ago
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    Jake the Archer 3 years ago
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    Dairyl's Teaching 3 years ago
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    Scouting Plan 3 years ago
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    Attack Again? (1) 3 years ago
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    Attack Again? (2) 3 years ago
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    An Unexpected Bet (1) 3 years ago
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    An Unexpected Bet (2) 3 years ago
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    People of the Mah'shai D'borge Clan (1) 3 years ago
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    People of the Mah'shai D'borge Clan (2) 3 years ago
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    Enraged (1) 3 years ago
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    Enraged (3) 3 years ago
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    The Lie (1) 3 years ago
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    Rigged (1) 3 years ago
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    Rigged (2) 3 years ago
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    Rigged (3) 3 years ago
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    Undercurrents (1) 3 years ago
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    Scam (1) 3 years ago
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    Scam (3) 3 years ago
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    Power up (3) 3 years ago
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    The War (2) 3 years ago
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    The Blood of Mah'shai Clan 3 years ago
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    The Blood of Mah'shai Clan (2) 3 years ago
  136. 136
    A letter of Challenge 3 years ago
  137. 137
    The Duel (1) 3 years ago
  138. 138
    The Duel (2) 3 years ago
  139. 139
    The Duel (3) 3 years ago
  140. 140
    A Battle Without Maha Mana (1) 3 years ago
  141. 141
    A Battle without Maha Mana (2) 3 years ago
  142. 142
    Honour 3 years ago
  143. 143
    Checkmate 3 years ago
  144. 144
    Fury (1) 3 years ago
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    Fury (2) 3 years ago
  146. 146
    Trap (1) 3 years ago
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    Trap (2) 3 years ago
  148. 148
    Cheater (1) 3 years ago
  149. 149
    Cheater (2) 3 years ago
  150. 150
    Winter Queen 3 years ago
  151. 151
    Exchange 3 years ago
  152. 152
    Debt (1) 3 years ago
  153. 153
    Debt (2) 3 years ago
  154. 154
    End of the Little War 3 years ago
  155. 155
    Rewards 3 years ago
  156. 156
    Ryat's Offer (1) 3 years ago
  157. 157
    Ryat's Offer (2) 3 years ago
  158. 158
    Gala (1) 3 years ago
  159. 159
    Gala (2) 3 years ago
  160. 160
    Lost (1) 3 years ago
  161. 161
    Lost (2) 3 years ago
  162. 162
    Invitation 3 years ago
  163. 163
    Money Well-spent 3 years ago
  164. 164
    [Bonus chapter]The Ball (1) 3 years ago
  165. 165
    The Ball (2) 3 years ago
  166. 166
    Outside (1) 3 years ago
  167. 167
    Outside (2) 3 years ago
  168. 168
    Attack (1) 3 years ago
  169. 169
    Attack (2) 3 years ago
  170. 170
    Safety 3 years ago
  171. 171
    An Old Tale (1) 3 years ago
  172. 172
    An Old Tale (2) 3 years ago
  173. 173
    An Old Tale (3) 3 years ago
  174. 174
    Interlude to the Tragic Tale (1) 3 years ago
  175. 175
    Interlude to the Tragic Tale (2) 3 years ago
  176. 176
    Anastasia 3 years ago
  177. 177
    The Reason (1) 3 years ago
  178. 178
    The Reason (2) 3 years ago
  179. 179
    The Second Floor (1) 3 years ago
  180. 180
    The Second Floor (2) 3 years ago
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    Nobles 3 years ago
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    Rebellion and Ryat 3 years ago
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    Stray Clouds 3 years ago
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    Stray Clouds (2) 3 years ago
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    Old Fears (1) 3 years ago
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    Old Fears (2) 3 years ago
  187. 187
    The Plan (1) 3 years ago
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    The Plan (2) 3 years ago
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    The Plan (3) 3 years ago
  190. 190
    Arrival 3 years ago
  191. 191
    Indifference 3 years ago
  192. 192
    Indifference (2) 3 years ago
  193. 193
    Undercurrents (1) 3 years ago
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    Undercurrents (2) 3 years ago
  195. 195
    Before the Operation (1) 3 years ago
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    Before the Operation (2) 3 years ago
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    Operation Begins (1) 3 years ago
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    Operation Begins (2) 3 years ago
  199. 199
    Smooth (1) 3 years ago
  200. 200
    Cloud 3 years ago
  201. 201
    Breaking in 3 years ago
  202. 202
    Chaos (1) 3 years ago
  203. 203
    Chaos (2) 3 years ago
  204. 204
    Light 3 years ago
  205. 205
    Inside the Wall 3 years ago
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    Carfew 3 years ago
  207. 207
    Hiding 3 years ago
  208. 208
    Back on the Wall 3 years ago
  209. 209
    Back on the Wall (2) 3 years ago
  210. 210
    Back on the Wall (3) 3 years ago
  211. 211
    Back on the Wall (4) 3 years ago
  212. 212
    Lioness 3 years ago
  213. 213
    Sword Abode 3 years ago
  214. 214
    Sword Abode (2) 3 years ago
  215. 215
    One Move Kill 3 years ago
  216. 216
    Half Moon 3 years ago
  217. 217
    Crazy Training 3 years ago
  218. 218
    Crazy Training (2) 3 years ago
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