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Este fanfic es muy aburrido y simple, es simplemente un 'doom sleyer' más humano con los poderes de Naruto. Lo único que hace es matar y gastar oro en la gente pequeña.
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Brilliant work and I love the fact he doesn't think with his dick and has common sense that is quite rare these days. The MC sometimes just stands to the side and let things play out and doesn't just stick his nose into other people's business without good reason and honestly that's what kills most stories for me. It's honestly a breath of fresh air hope to see more chapters soon. Looking forward to it keep up the great work
This story is a waste of time Our MC Naruto is Op as **** and does hate everyone as much as they him but does absolutely nothing. He "cares" for civilian lifes in a talk with Daenerys, but plans on helping her stage a bloody civil war. Our Mc is not Naruto in anything that defines Naruto except for a bit of backstory. He has no aspirations, doesn't care about peace at all and is a freaking murdering edgelord. The only thing he has in common is that he is dumb. With his powers and the powersystem in GoT he could just assassinate his parents and psychotic brother and then rule as a just king. Problem solved. But the author seems to like Daenerys and twisted the whole story to get her to attempt for the throne and have Naruto follow along instead of making some sort of original plot. All in all our mc is more or less a passive edgelord observer with the name Naruto, who sometimes legally murders irrelevant people to get his edge off. I dropped the story ch12 and wish everyone else and the author to have fun with this story. I still recommend everyone to at least try the story for themselves and see if they like it. As everyone reads through their own lens and there may be good points that others might enjoy in the story.
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An interesting fanfiction...Really enjoy with the different story background with other fanfiction. Really hope you continue this good story till the end. Thank you...
Bro you made Harry Potter and the tise of the spiral fanfic! Bro i made a whole section Because of that ff! An amazing job you did there-er anyway. this is a very good take of naruto reincarnating into GOT, must read if you want a good GOT Famfiction!
This is a really good story. I am really liking so far. This is a really good story. I am really liking so far. This is a really good story. I am really liking so far.
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WOW!! JUST WOW!! This is hidden gem! Really like OP MC, and the flow story is good. Uncovering what is hidden in valyria,..thats is new to me, realy interesting! Hope MC can use more magic and his ninjutsu&kinjutsu. Hopefully we got more chapter release! And thanks for writing this FF,.. O Mighty Author!
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Love the story. Happy you’re back. Hope you get everything in your personal life handled well. Everyone’s life is crazy right now with this pandemic going on. As cliche as it sounds, Just don’t give up, keep pushing, there’s always a light at the end of the tunnel. And if you ever need someone to talk to I’m available my G. In fact I’m sure a lot of your readers, not just myself would be helpful. Keep your head Brodie. Much love to you and yours. Hope you update soon. Peace.
I've read a couple of his books and they are FANTASTIC truly a great read would definitely recommend reading this. He's not updating right now because of personal problems but if or when he does he'll have at least one faithful reader and I'm sure many more.
It’s well written and quite easy to understand. Each chapter are long enough and gives enough details. I love the story so far, keep up the good work. Just hope for more frequent updates
I greatly enjoy this story I just hope that it is not dropped and the author finds motivation to keep writing this..........................
I get it and all it’s naruto and game of thrones do what the heck is alucard doing here? Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Great read as always... The newest chapter is a bit hateful for me... And a bit arrogant too I think? "Your gift to me is a chest filled with gold and my gift of you is your life.. "..LOL.. But it just my personal opinion about how I feel uncomfortable with it since this usually would lead to forever arrogant queen and the addictive feeling for the fear she inflic in others would make her turn back and stab Ed...
Review 13 Daenerys grow as a leader under Naruto guidance and even in essos the common folk of kingslanding recognize who is their saviour and his Charisma make joffrey run like a coward that he is.
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I've been waiting for this story to update since I started reading it. I like how he's taken a characters from stories that we know and use it as a skeletal base to shape his fanfic. It has turned out to be wonderfully imaginative. I never thought of taking the Naruto and putting them into a Game of Thrones fanfic. How the author built his character surprise me. I always thought Naruto was always a bit comical and you know sometimes flighty yet Naruto always had a strong resolve which has never changed. Taking Naruto's resolve into the story with a more mature Naruto is awesome.
The moment I read the first three chapters I knew what addicts felt like. Wanting more but not being able to. The start is amazing and the main character is so on point when it comes to likability. I hope this isn't a short book and that at least there would be 100 or above chapters.
Revelar spoiler Another great story from your hand my dear author... I just realised that I had this for a while, so when I read it, I regret to be late to read it and interact with the readers.... And also, great way of making your character as a judge and executor for the citizen... That world is so fck up that they may need a big target, even bigger than Drogon and daenerys army of unsullied, to scare them into not involving citizen to their madness....
hope you will add good romance just not the mad little dragon girl !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The writing quality could use a bit more experience but I'm sure author will get better as he goes on. I like this novel alot, MC (Naruto) is badass and changes the world slowly in his own way and the story development is steady and really enjoyable. I just hope Author doesnt drop this and gives us more chapters.
It would need greater updating stabilito. For the rest the are no other flaws. I hope you will continue the series in this day. Thanks for the hard work.
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Este fanfic es muy aburrido y simple, es simplemente un 'doom sleyer' más humano con los poderes de Naruto. Lo único que hace es matar y gastar oro en la gente pequeña.
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Brilliant work and I love the fact he doesn't think with his dick and has common sense that is quite rare these days. The MC sometimes just stands to the side and let things play out and doesn't just stick his nose into other people's business without good reason and honestly that's what kills most stories for me. It's honestly a breath of fresh air hope to see more chapters soon. Looking forward to it keep up the great work
This story is a waste of time Our MC Naruto is Op as **** and does hate everyone as much as they him but does absolutely nothing. He "cares" for civilian lifes in a talk with Daenerys, but plans on helping her stage a bloody civil war. Our Mc is not Naruto in anything that defines Naruto except for a bit of backstory. He has no aspirations, doesn't care about peace at all and is a freaking murdering edgelord. The only thing he has in common is that he is dumb. With his powers and the powersystem in GoT he could just assassinate his parents and psychotic brother and then rule as a just king. Problem solved. But the author seems to like Daenerys and twisted the whole story to get her to attempt for the throne and have Naruto follow along instead of making some sort of original plot. All in all our mc is more or less a passive edgelord observer with the name Naruto, who sometimes legally murders irrelevant people to get his edge off. I dropped the story ch12 and wish everyone else and the author to have fun with this story. I still recommend everyone to at least try the story for themselves and see if they like it. As everyone reads through their own lens and there may be good points that others might enjoy in the story.
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mass bro write more....pls don't drop it.......👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⚔️⚔️⚔️
An interesting fanfiction...Really enjoy with the different story background with other fanfiction. Really hope you continue this good story till the end. Thank you...
Bro you made Harry Potter and the tise of the spiral fanfic! Bro i made a whole section Because of that ff! An amazing job you did there-er anyway. this is a very good take of naruto reincarnating into GOT, must read if you want a good GOT Famfiction!
This is a really good story. I am really liking so far. This is a really good story. I am really liking so far. This is a really good story. I am really liking so far.
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Revelar spoiler WOW!! JUST WOW!! This is hidden gem! Really like OP MC, and the flow story is good. Uncovering what is hidden in valyria,..thats is new to me, realy interesting! Hope MC can use more magic and his ninjutsu&kinjutsu. Hopefully we got more chapter release! And thanks for writing this FF,.. O Mighty Author!
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Love the story. Happy you’re back. Hope you get everything in your personal life handled well. Everyone’s life is crazy right now with this pandemic going on. As cliche as it sounds, Just don’t give up, keep pushing, there’s always a light at the end of the tunnel. And if you ever need someone to talk to I’m available my G. In fact I’m sure a lot of your readers, not just myself would be helpful. Keep your head Brodie. Much love to you and yours. Hope you update soon. Peace.
I've read a couple of his books and they are FANTASTIC truly a great read would definitely recommend reading this. He's not updating right now because of personal problems but if or when he does he'll have at least one faithful reader and I'm sure many more.
It’s well written and quite easy to understand. Each chapter are long enough and gives enough details. I love the story so far, keep up the good work. Just hope for more frequent updates
I greatly enjoy this story I just hope that it is not dropped and the author finds motivation to keep writing this..........................
I get it and all it’s naruto and game of thrones do what the heck is alucard doing here? Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Great read as always... The newest chapter is a bit hateful for me... And a bit arrogant too I think? "Your gift to me is a chest filled with gold and my gift of you is your life.. "..LOL.. But it just my personal opinion about how I feel uncomfortable with it since this usually would lead to forever arrogant queen and the addictive feeling for the fear she inflic in others would make her turn back and stab Ed...
Review 13 Daenerys grow as a leader under Naruto guidance and even in essos the common folk of kingslanding recognize who is their saviour and his Charisma make joffrey run like a coward that he is.
Revelar spoiler I've been waiting for this story to update since I started reading it. I like how he's taken a characters from stories that we know and use it as a skeletal base to shape his fanfic. It has turned out to be wonderfully imaginative. I never thought of taking the Naruto and putting them into a Game of Thrones fanfic. How the author built his character surprise me. I always thought Naruto was always a bit comical and you know sometimes flighty yet Naruto always had a strong resolve which has never changed. Taking Naruto's resolve into the story with a more mature Naruto is awesome.
The moment I read the first three chapters I knew what addicts felt like. Wanting more but not being able to. The start is amazing and the main character is so on point when it comes to likability. I hope this isn't a short book and that at least there would be 100 or above chapters.
Revelar spoiler Another great story from your hand my dear author... I just realised that I had this for a while, so when I read it, I regret to be late to read it and interact with the readers.... And also, great way of making your character as a judge and executor for the citizen... That world is so fck up that they may need a big target, even bigger than Drogon and daenerys army of unsullied, to scare them into not involving citizen to their madness....
hope you will add good romance just not the mad little dragon girl !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The writing quality could use a bit more experience but I'm sure author will get better as he goes on. I like this novel alot, MC (Naruto) is badass and changes the world slowly in his own way and the story development is steady and really enjoyable. I just hope Author doesnt drop this and gives us more chapters.
It would need greater updating stabilito. For the rest the are no other flaws. I hope you will continue the series in this day. Thanks for the hard work.
Revelar spoiler
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