UndeadProgenitor

UndeadProgenitor

male LV 14

M’pi cho pase piman pou ghede.

2019-06-26 Se unió Haiti
Actividad
Obras originales
Insignias 17

Moments 3261
UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitor
6 days ago
Commented

Honestly think the Philippines would work best for the land of water as Australia is nothing like the land of water. Its a dry place. Too dry.

The Land of Water, as per the Naruto world, was an island nation with a strong maritime culture. My mind immediately went to Australia. Surrounded by water and isolated, it was a perfect match.

DXD: Naruto Recreation System

DXD: Naruto Recreation System

Anime & Comics · King_001FN

UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitor
9 days ago
Commented

Morgan or the other lady that also uses darkness

Also had a review talking about the female lead. Have a guess. But you will know when you know. 

Shadow Slave: Possibilities Without Meaning

Shadow Slave: Possibilities Without Meaning

Book&Literature · Lahi

UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitor
16 days ago
Commented

img
UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitor
25 days ago
Commented

Can see English is not your first language and that’s fine. Remove the “once upon a time beginning” it’s a bit juvenile and no Japanese names “unless you yourselves are Japanese or is a setting for the story” it’s a bit cliche and not very creative. Work on the conjugation too, you started the story in the past and yet you went to say “are” somewhere. All of that is just from me skimming over it. Good luck on your writing journey you’ll get better.

UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitor
29 days ago
Commented

When’s the next update?

UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitor
1 months ago
Replied to Blueslime

I also apologize

"Past life experiences." I shrugged.

Marvel Mutant in DC

Marvel Mutant in DC

Anime & Comics · superman1265789

UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitor
2 months ago
Replied to Blueslime

Get off my meat friend

"Past life experiences." I shrugged.

Marvel Mutant in DC

Marvel Mutant in DC

Anime & Comics · superman1265789

UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitor
3 months ago
Commented

img
UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitor
3 months ago
Replied to Der_Schnitter

No need to be so cringe bro. Ik this is wn but come on

UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitor
4 months ago
Replied to Sean_Kelaotswe

That’s related to his story cause? The guy was fighting for his life throughout the whole story and that’s your issue?

And so while the two walked towards their destination, Arthur told her the story of AOT, one of his personal favourites, sure the ending was lacklustre but he thought it was a fine ending overall, people were just Mad because Eren wasn't the edgelord they wanted

Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)

Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)

Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational

  • Water for the dried well (ideas of mine for possible ffs) original

    Water for the dried well (ideas of mine for possible ffs)

    Anime & Comics

    This will be a list ideas that I thought of but not skilled enough to execute

    5 Chs 1 Colecciones

  • The adventures of truck kun original

    The adventures of truck kun

    Fantasy

    I welcome you into the life of truck Kun, basically whatever I imagine, please have patience with me and this story is just for fun, in other words, a pass time do not expect much from this. I am seriously lacking in writing skills, but I welcome constructive criticism, thank you for your time and patience. I also do not own the cover picture. Undead_progenitor out!!! I dropped it but I thought i might as well give it another try but I might drop it again

    3 Chs 6 Colecciones

  • Writing to murder the eyes original

    Writing to murder the eyes

    Fantasy ADVENTURE REINCARNATION R18 SYSTEM VILLAIN

    This novel is written by me (obviously). I wrote this because my friend recommended that I do so and I’ll be giving it a try. This novel is about a guy that get reincarnated in another world with no gifts and no it was not an accident I’ll try to make this stray as good as I can but I am not at this. We got to start somewhere right? In this writing you will witness a murderous writing. Enough to make you feel victimized. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED. Any recommendations are welcomed as alway. Critics are welcomed good or bad. Have fun I guess (meh) Update schedule: when I actually have something to write and if I take forever to update another chapter just wait “ I’m thinking ? .......or relaxing ?”

    2 Chs 2 Colecciones