Morgan or the other lady that also uses darkness
Also had a review talking about the female lead. Have a guess. But you will know when you know.
Book&Literature · Lahi
Can see English is not your first language and that’s fine. Remove the “once upon a time beginning” it’s a bit juvenile and no Japanese names “unless you yourselves are Japanese or is a setting for the story” it’s a bit cliche and not very creative. Work on the conjugation too, you started the story in the past and yet you went to say “are” somewhere. All of that is just from me skimming over it. Good luck on your writing journey you’ll get better.
When’s the next update?
I also apologize
"Past life experiences." I shrugged.
Anime & Comics · superman1265789
Get off my meat friend
"Past life experiences." I shrugged.
Anime & Comics · superman1265789
'Leap of faith!'
Anime & Comics · FanFictionPremium
No need to be so cringe bro. Ik this is wn but come on
That’s related to his story cause? The guy was fighting for his life throughout the whole story and that’s your issue?
And so while the two walked towards their destination, Arthur told her the story of AOT, one of his personal favourites, sure the ending was lacklustre but he thought it was a fine ending overall, people were just Mad because Eren wasn't the edgelord they wanted
Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational
Honestly think the Philippines would work best for the land of water as Australia is nothing like the land of water. Its a dry place. Too dry.
The Land of Water, as per the Naruto world, was an island nation with a strong maritime culture. My mind immediately went to Australia. Surrounded by water and isolated, it was a perfect match.
DXD: Naruto Recreation System
Anime & Comics · King_001FN