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Escribe una reseñastill not read it yet but i shamlessly wrote review. "avoiding most cliches, as possible as he can" only make another kind of new cliche. so please think twice, there's no cliche things on novel but only generalization of human imagination. dont hear people said "boring cliche" coz they just cant enjoy the imagination of author while they feel depress bcoz cant write a good plot
Its kinda refreshing not seeing another golden finger fanfic mc. thats all good thing i can take from this novel tho expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp exp exp
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One of the most amazing stories I have read sadly it seems like it has been dropped.......................................................................................
Thanks Author for the good novel Keep up the good work 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍..........................................................................
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A nice straight forward story on a inseki idea with a good mix of action and surprising romance 😉 between the charters in the later chapters. The main I find is balanced and smart though I would personally like a more cold hearthed character that is willing to be more brutal be caring to those that they care for . One main thing I hope is not done in the future is to make it a harem in my general opinion a harem is a crutch for many writers and brings down the general quality of the piece by having the character spend a large amount of time trying to get the girls to all agree and/or to get a fleshed out character for each of the girls instead of having them each be an anime trop like tsundere momodere yandere and so on and so forth.
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Revelar spoilerhave yet to fine a fanfic where the mc had gura gura no mi powera. is this dropped? if not keep going I want maor. filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
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this is a good story. however, the stability of updates is not good which may result for the readers to eventually dropped the novel and look for more stable story. i like the concept of fruit ability from OP mixed with cultivation. i don't know what hapoened to the author of the novel but i hope he is still okay not having emotional or financial depression.
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First time saw this thought another cliche one piece fan-fic but I miss read the title so didn't know he was in a cultivation world glad I thought of checking it out again Hope author won't drop this and keep a stable release Keep up the good work NO HAREM PLEASE
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Excellent plot and well taught out into the future keep up the good work author. a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a. A a a. A a. A a a. A a. A a a. A. A a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a. A a a. A a. A a a. A a. A a a. A. A a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a. A a a. A a. A a a. A a. A a a. A. A a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a. A a a. A a. A a a. A a. A a a. A. A a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a. A a a. A a. A a a. A a. A a a. A. A a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a. A a a. A a. A a a. A a. A a a. A. A a a. A a
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This is one of the best light novels, I ever seen and I hope you can keep doing novels because for me you’ve have a gift. I hope the main protagonists can become more powerful than Jiang Chen.
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im just like it ......................................................................................................................................................................................
still not read it yet but i shamlessly wrote review. "avoiding most cliches, as possible as he can" only make another kind of new cliche. so please think twice, there's no cliche things on novel but only generalization of human imagination. dont hear people said "boring cliche" coz they just cant enjoy the imagination of author while they feel depress bcoz cant write a good plot
Its kinda refreshing not seeing another golden finger fanfic mc. thats all good thing i can take from this novel tho expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp expexp exp exp
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One of the most amazing stories I have read sadly it seems like it has been dropped.......................................................................................
Thanks Author for the good novel Keep up the good work 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍..........................................................................
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A nice straight forward story on a inseki idea with a good mix of action and surprising romance 😉 between the charters in the later chapters. The main I find is balanced and smart though I would personally like a more cold hearthed character that is willing to be more brutal be caring to those that they care for . One main thing I hope is not done in the future is to make it a harem in my general opinion a harem is a crutch for many writers and brings down the general quality of the piece by having the character spend a large amount of time trying to get the girls to all agree and/or to get a fleshed out character for each of the girls instead of having them each be an anime trop like tsundere momodere yandere and so on and so forth.
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Revelar spoilerhave yet to fine a fanfic where the mc had gura gura no mi powera. is this dropped? if not keep going I want maor. filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
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this is a good story. however, the stability of updates is not good which may result for the readers to eventually dropped the novel and look for more stable story. i like the concept of fruit ability from OP mixed with cultivation. i don't know what hapoened to the author of the novel but i hope he is still okay not having emotional or financial depression.
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First time saw this thought another cliche one piece fan-fic but I miss read the title so didn't know he was in a cultivation world glad I thought of checking it out again Hope author won't drop this and keep a stable release Keep up the good work NO HAREM PLEASE
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Its one of the best novel Im happy to recommend to those readers out there O(≧▽≦)OO(≧▽≦)OO(≧▽≦)Oヾ(≧▽≦*)oO(≧▽≦)Oヾ(≧▽≦*)oO(≧▽≦)Oヾ(≧▽≦*)oO(≧▽≦)Oヾ(≧▽≦*)oO(≧▽≦)Oヾ(≧▽≦*)oO(≧▽≦)Oヾ(≧▽≦*)oO(≧▽≦)Oヾ(≧▽≦*)oO(≧▽≦)Oヾ(≧▽≦*)oO(≧▽≦)Oヾ
One of my favorite stories for now :) ..................................................... ............................................................... ...........................................................
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This is one of the best light novels, I ever seen and I hope you can keep doing novels because for me you’ve have a gift. I hope the main protagonists can become more powerful than Jiang Chen.
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