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I love this the best novel I read so far the mc is smart powerful and knowledgeable about novel stories and what to avoid he’s not like those mc that say their smart but do something stupid thanks for the story please keep writing.
Only 10 chapters has been released, but it's good. So far. M.C got reincarnated into a cultivation world with gura gura no mi. As you can see, it's quite a unique concept and completely original. I just hope that author finishes it up. As a cultivation novel, it has to be a long story. Otherwise, it would just be a mediocre one.
I really liked your story, but since the start of the new arc it's all gone down... His personality had made a 180° and since the introduction of the female character all i see is the stupidity of the mc :( Sorry if i'm not expressing myself too well in english :( But i'm done with your story, i'll try to comeback in the future to see if the story had regained the feel of the early arc :)
Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. 😎😎
MY FIRST REVIEW!!! JUST WANT TO RATE!! FIVE STARS!! MY FIRST REVIEW!!! JUST WANT TO RATE!! FIVE STARS!! MY FIRST REVIEW!!! JUST WANT TO RATE!! FIVE STARS!! MY FIRST REVIEW!!! JUST WANT TO RATE!! FIVE STARS!! MY FIRST REVIEW!!! JUST WANT TO RATE!! FIVE STARS!! MY FIRST REVIEW!!! JUST WANT TO RATE!! FIVE STARS!!
Good...good...('_') GOOD!!!well... i like it... So keep GOING..!!! ehemm,,soryy bout that...(///) Eeehrrrr....(why the heck ..i need to writes 140 words...) (--__--)'''. Jeezxz......troublesome....haiiiizzzz.... Well this story got POTENTIAL.... That what i think...
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DONT FUXKING USE FANFIC!! WHY DONT YOU FUCKING CREATE ORIGINAL NOVEL IF YOU FUCKING WANT WEAK MC!!! YOU BASTARD.. AUTHOR FUCK YOU!! THIS IS JUST FUCKING ANNOYING. I CANT HELP BUT GET MAD EVERY CHAPTER BECAUSE OF THIS ANNOYING MC!!!! UGH. IM FUCKING TIRED READING ORIGINAL XIANXIA NOVELS COZ THEY ARE FUCKING WEAK! ALL THEY DO IS FUCKING IMPROVE AND BEAT THE PERSON WHO BEAT HIM!!!! AND THIS MC IS WORSE MC FROM XIANXIA IS SMART AND GENIUS.. BUT THIS MC IS FUCKING AVERAGE!! NO TALENT!!! WHITEBEARD POWER IS WEAK AS FUCK HERE!!! WHY DO HE FUCKING NEED SOME MARTIAL SKILLS IF HE CAN JUST FUCKING PUNCH PEOPLE HERE. AND MC IS JUST FUCKING CUNT.. GETTING SHY ON A VIXEN!! CANT HE JUST FUCKING PUNCH HER FACE???? THIS ABNORMAL AUTHOR JUST MAKING GURA2 NO MI POWER WEAK!! Why NOT JUST GIVE THIS IDIOTIC MC LUFFY FRUIT.?? IF YOU WANT USELESS MC THEN USE THAT!! FUCK YOU AUTHOR!!!
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Nice I like how the story is progressing so far I also like how the mc is not those mc that let bad guys go and let them come beck stronger I like how tryes to avoid something I love this thanks for the chapter
I love this story. I started reading it on royalroadl and have followed it avidly since chapter 5 it doesn't just dump information on us and the mc is quite strong but the fact that this is a cultivation world tells us he still isn't overpowered for the setting. Plus he uses his knowledge of tropes to avoid pitfalls. He's smart but doesn't give that feeling of it all being calculated beforehand.
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this story is a interesting expansion of the one piece lore even if its early stage and not much other then mc powers are shown plus haki for all one piece fans this should be a fun story to read
I see a lot of potential, i would recommended if your looking for something to read. will come back at ch.50 to renew my review. ................................................................................................................................................
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Shameless Author Review!! Ok so this is what would happened if a reader got bored waiting for chapters. Its my first time writing a story so domt expext ultra fast updates. And english is not my native language so sorry for the brad grammars. All I want to say is thanks for the good reviews and comments, thanks for also reading my work.. God bless to you all Peace out,,,,,