Accidental rebirth in Naruto World.

LV 5

potatodaoist

Well this story is ****.the grammar is **** as well. Don't even get me started on the author that pos thinks he can write a story. Anyway third class writing. Total zero star but I can't give zero star so 1 star will have to do.....

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

If I were the protagonist, I make both my wives: -Kushina - mikoto ------------------------------- the letter, hopefully I send it, it would be a turnaround, it may no longer come Kushina and the protagonist, you can focus on conquering Mikoto, after having a good relationship, you can go on a trip, where by chance you He finds ,Kushina being kidnapped, he saves her, accompanies him to his village, where his father thanks him with a meal and gives him a pass so he can enter the town, and so he can conquer Kushina before they decide to send her to the academy. -------------------- Then it would be to do missions, where the protagonist is with Kushina and Mikoto as a team, so they can strengthen their relationship more. ----------------------- That would be my opinion xD. -------------------------------------------------- It would be interesting that if you sent that letter, you would change several things. and I hope you take the two you mention, minato and fukagu ​​do not deserve it, one instead of leaving the kyubi in another, the inside of his son, the other fukagu ​​with his delusions of superiority, where he achieved extinction of his "clan", among other things. --------------------------------------------------------- You can also have funjutsu taught in the city of Kushina.

LV 6

66623988932

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LV 4

amaturewriter

I was originally going to give 4 stars cause its interesting but had no pazzaz so far... but 5 stars cause of the authors review and the fact that it has potential cause its precannon,,,, Suggestion: no offense but comedy is ****..so reduce it....OP MC...give MC OP eye abilities for his EMS..like maybe multiple abilities like madara..ex: ability to create chakra creatures like in solo leveling? ryujin jakka?...kamui....Also make MC a sage..like snake like mitsuki..And pls dont make him some idiot that trains other...screw team work..go madara style,,,,.keep MC smart and cool not some perverted idiot and pls build the romance..no BS **** like love at first sight **** or wife stealing...if harem keep it small. Anyway goodluck and goodshow...dont **** it up😜😜😜😜

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

kushina and mikoto = wife. ....................................................................................................

LV 12

Shadow_Kil

The Mc hides his abilities if u like that kind of story go ahead and read but this annoyed me so I gave it a one I’m sorry to the author but some people are diks like this

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

interesing. ............................................................................................................................................................

LV 3

Luky_shark

This is a very interesting idea. And I'm thinking that at the moment it is well implemented. I really want the author to continue in the same vein. I really liked his work. P.s. I don’t know English and I write through a translator

LV 6

Feebling

Heya Author.....you dead or something? If you got bored of writing then at least make an addition to the name "(hiatus / dropped or something )" please.

LV 6

Nebi

Nice fan fic there Its make me always 😊 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 5

Darkujuj

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LV 11

benjamin_plaisance

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LV 6

66623988932

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LV 6

66623988932

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LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

more chapters. ....................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

PandaWanKenobi

The story is interesting to read so far......I hope to see more chapters @-@................................................................

LV 5

RenWoKuang1

has potential keep it up ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 5

Farmy

Its another Uchiha fanfic------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 6

Shameless_Buddha

5 stars just because of the authors review on his own novel. I think that it is interesting so far with how the author has written the story.