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The rise of the pervert primordial
4.61 (106 Bewertungen)
Zusammenfassung
What do humans want most, money, fame, power?
Born an orphan, Aster saw all the other children be adopted and get into caring family, as for him, he grew in the orphanage, studied and found a job, a simple yet fulfilling life as he decided to help raise funds for the home in which he grew.
Unfortunately fate seemed to play him a bad taste joke, a crazy robber, a gunshot and a bomb, why did I have to step in, when I have never cared about other people business, he wondered as his life faded away.
The next thing he knew was that he was being held in the arms of the most beutiful woman he has ever seen, did he died and went to heaven, did he finally gained what he desired so much, or is he being a victim to some kind of scheme.
The asnwer came to him as he was gazed by the tender eyes of that woman, the warmth of a family he longed for, during 18 years of his life, he finally got to experience it, so what could go wrong.
If you were given a second chance, will you follow your desires even if they were against common sense?
Follow Aster on his travel trough the multiple planets and realms as he gains the title "The Perverted Primordial"
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800 power stones= 1 extra chapters
(The reward chapters will be posted on the week, on a random day)
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Copyright the cover image is not mine if you are the author contact me and I will take it down.
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English is not my main language so there might be some grammar mistakes.
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Finnaly if you don't like harem and R-18 chapters this novel is not for you. (No NTR btw).
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If you like my novels please do support me by voting with your power stones, and reviewing them, also please give it a try to my other novel "Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System".
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For all those who are still reading this lets start our long journey.
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too cool mam too cool best primordial book......hats off to you the great author of this magnificent book.....your suck shall thrive on...you have my heartfelt blessings
I would like to have given this story a better rating but the author writes something that could be really fun and very enjoyable and instead it turns out to feel really, really drawn and dragged out. Don't get me wrong it has some solid moments. But those moments are vastly drowned out and over shadowed by things being drawn out. For example: There is a chapter that consists basically of just asking how a couple people slept that night. I can handle things being slow paced but only if it feels natural in the writing. In this case it just feels like things are being intentionally dragged along. That said I will probably continue reading every now and then but it most certainly wouldn't be something I'd recommend to others.
I am amazed. I have been continuously reading this novel…. I can’t put it down. Story is good, the scope of the universe building is good, and the characters are still being themselves is good. The only difficulty I am experiencing is the multitude of cultivation realms and remembering them. There are a lot and the names aren’t easy to remember. Otherwise, this is a terrific novel.
story is great but you should use commas and punctuation marks brackets etc and make it more Readable overall it is nice I will support you with power stones so keep it up bro
The pace of the novel is very slow in comparison with other similar novels in the same genre. Same goes for the mc to become stronger if not for the fact that he can fight more than his power allows , Also from the way author is going with novel it looks like it will take months to reach certain arc where mc meets his origin family and with some female character introduced which are possibly future harem members are way above his current power and knowledge which tells it will be a long novel not that i mind because it will be good but if the pace was a bit more than it could have been more enjoyable . like literally it takes so much chapter for mc to just turn from 11 to 12. as far as i have read i.e till chapter 400 it is overall good with some problems which can be rectified in future.
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harem harem. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. the story is awesome and there is some comedy
oh i just forgot to write a review to this one. .. this novel is good and the harem is nice, no one left or something like that. .. and im currently at chapter 382 or 362?
I started Reading casually,but the world enviroment and your own progress as a writer is amazing. While Reading, you were able to pick my curiosity on what Will happen when he finds his godmothers. One thing i liked the most too, is that, while the MC has a harem, not every girl Will be part of, as the main goal for the MC is a big and happy family. Overall, i belive your work is a gem, please dont stop writing , for your fans,of course. Sorry for my english, its not my main language!
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Probably one of my favorites on here, but in later chapters it gets extremely drawn out. Like 6 chapters of doing the business back to back to back then followed by a chapter or 2 of story movement followed by individual dates for another several chapters. I need storyline movement to keep me interested.
Read till chapter 338 and so far the story is great.i like mc's personality.his interactions with harem girls are really good.there is no forced romance.also there is no yuri and ntr so far.so its perfect for my taste. The story is bit slow paced but i like the development.action scenes are also good.so overall it's a good read.5 stars for me....
Everything about this novel is good except the mc's progressing. I mean there so many level to the top that it will take literally 1000 chp to finish pbly. Thats why I currently stopped at 189 and waiting for at least 500 chp. Otherwise everything seems perfect to me especially the harem. I like how the girls get along so well.
autor , please promise you will complete this great story . we need to know . i fell in love with this book. please author write till the end no matter what. we need you thank you for yout effort
Yes, it is really refreshing, there are taboos, there is interest and much more, very pleasant reading and the ms is very pleasing, the author knows how to present, very nice, thank you.
I wanted to know if you were planning on releasing chapter again soon it’s been a long time since we’ve had steady chapter releases
~It is good, just one simple problem author, we need pic of characters for visualisation of story and stuff 'cough' segs 'cough' ..........,~😏