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First Demonic Dragon

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Autor: AnathaShesha

4.54 (105 Bewertungen)

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Zusammenfassung

Carter Williams was your typical twenty year old loser. After a fight in the street leaves him unconscious he wakes up in the body of a young dragon in an entirely new world.

Armed with a system to assist him and two beautiful wives to support him, Carter vows never to live his life hiding in the dark again as he seeks the title of dragon king.

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Additional tag : Yuri


Discord link is : https://discord.gg/q68P5JPnNz

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    KC_Milton

    Great story Great characters Some of the best world building I’ve read I really did this to cover the review asking the author to add MC’s mom into the Harem

    4mth
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    DaoistsJV1Jj

    i really hope his mommy joins the harem c'mon author san do it

    2yr
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    Red_dragon

    I clicked this because it was on feature and piqued my intrest with over 100 free chapters and thought it would be bad or something but I was so wrong it’s honestly one of the best novels I have read on this app definitely top 10 and if there’s a mistake in the spelling or whatnot if you comment on it Anatha is quick to fix it and he/she seems like a nice person so I highly recommend not only is the world,character,and plot 10/10 but Anatha gives their best to make it great

    1yr
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    Custom_Avultis

    This novel is extremely cringy. I can't read anymore as it kills me to try. Please forgive my harshness but I only reviewed this because webnovel recommend it. [img=faceslap]

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    1yr
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    PIasma
    LV 15 Badge

    I found this in my recomendations and I can honestly say that I am very impressed with this novel. The quality of the story, so far, in regards to pretty much everything is amazing. The overall grammer and spelling of the novel is just awesome, and the world building has been great. There are some cliches but they are still added to the story pretty well. The character all have there own personalities and thoughts, and I appreciate how the author changes POV every so often to let us see into the minds of the main characters (he states whos POV it is as well). The authors titles for the chapters are funny and overall very good which gets me excited for what I’m about to read. The only thing I question about the story so far is how early in the book Exedra is to accept things like killing and exterminating bloodlines over something that didnt really hurt him. Which happened on only the second day of him being there. Other than that I am honestly shocked at how good this novel is despite it being the authors first novel. If you are into fantasy, reincarnation, and a bit of seggs this is a great story (though the seggs aint necessary). P.S. the seggs are pretty good.

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    1yr
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    TruthHurtsX1000

    Its a good novel. Its sad tho that 100+ chapters in mc still hasnt evolved and basically author threw away his dragon side to focus his demon side more. Kinda cliche story and its like a cultivation novel with the whole he level 0 evolution but can fight level 2 and plus enemies. Even his adopted kid evolved before him. It really seemed author had no real plan so stretched evolution and what to do out so just made him op for a 0 evolution. Good luck to author tho

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    1yr
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    Toothpick_Of_doom

    None human MC with evolution as long as he doesn ’t become a wife collector this should be a fun ride

    2yr
    0 Antworten anzeigen
    DaoistArbore

    Started off pretty interesting to say the least. However, it’s another story where the author interprets dark themes meaning mass sexual assault of women… it’s not an interesting plot point, and quite obviously not enjoyable and yet the descriptions of the actions are decently in detail as if I’m supposed to enjoy it. Within like 5 ch you get introduced to one of the new harem members and the noble that is famous for kidnapping women, physically abusing and assaulting them with vivid detail on how he forces them to use their mouths before tossing them aside. How he wants his servant to go get the husband and brother out of the dungeon so that they are forced to watch… The women of the story are pretty well thought out, but the rest of the story will give me some new form of ptsd at this rate Are you alright author?

    1yr
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    Neco_Arcussy

    TLDR: solid story, interesting take on the relationship between gods (author clearly knows a lot about that stuff), A little glossy on the details about powers, but makes up for it with decent character development, overall funny without beating dead horses too much. feels a little rushed in story development at points but I can see it being fine if it takes the route I believe it will. i wish the author would update a wee bit more but as long as the posting stays consistent it's no big deal.

    1yr
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    CH1LLGUY

    review from chapter 88. story so far has just been meh. It really is a nice read but bland. I feel as though the Mc is a Gary stu. most females easily fall for him. gets married out of nowhere easily. Mc constantly keeps having things go his way. He is op for his level. fighting above his level constantly. So if you really like op Gary stu Mc read this. I'm not trying to be mean as well. It is just the way I see it. which has made me drop it. Since I just find to boring at this point.

    1yr
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    Divine_Onahole

    could you please stop with PAV PIV POV ? it feel lame,its reduce the fun of reading a books,

    1yr
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    Dexter_Sled_1111

    I love the story. Yuri chased a lot of people away. Even if I don't like it too, I still enjoy the thrilling parts of an overpowered Mc novel.*currently in chapter 125.

    1yr
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    Deaboro
    LV 12 Badge

    the story is really good it has really good world building the quality seems really high as well since there not many spelling errors

    1yr
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    Selio
    LV 3 Badge

    Good job author, incredible story but please don’t drop it!

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    1yr
    1 Antworten anzeigen
    Novicey
    LV 15 Badge

    Absolutely fantastic. So far I feel like the harem has progressed really well, nothing seems forced and although there are some women who I would love to see with the Mc ,the author does a really good job at limiting the pace of the harems growth. The story is pretty good so far and has kept me interested since the beginning. The writing is fantastically well done with very few spelling errors that you probably won’t even notice. The one and only problem I have with this novel is that there aren’t enough chapters, I cought up to the current chapter 78 and now I don’t know that to do😔.

    2yr
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    Re_shin

    Good work for a novice writer. The novel has potential. It's just that the streams of events happen very quickly.The characters are well written. If the author continues to improve himself, I'm sure his future works will be outstanding. I hope the author doesn't lose his motivation.

    1yr
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    Empyrium

    Finally a good novel where the mc is not a human, release is pretty good, story is good, sad that mc looks better then me, should give you only 4 stars for that😇😂 Hope you dont drop it and are able to finish the story with many chapters ^^

    2yr
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    StylzGT
    LV 15 Badge

    The type of Yuri in this novel is borderline NTR. This isn’t a Harem novel, it’s more polyamory as its ‘group love’ as opposed to MC being the sole focus. Apart from that the story is good and worth a read.

    1mth
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    loeto_letswhiti

    Please stop with the random child insertment trope.Mira wasn't even his child and he somehow loves her strongly on the first meeting it doesn't make sense for him to even like her cause she's evidence of another man in his girl

    8mth
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    Izanagi1x_

    It’s been good so far until Lisa came in. But, still went and read it. Then every chapter want me to drop coz this unnecessary girls comment like okay your hot and all but doesn’t really matter that every beautiful gurl out there. They have pride like god them, your making every girl look like a bot

    11mth
    0 Antworten anzeigen

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