Reviews of First Demonic Dragon by AnathaShesha - Webnovel

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4.5

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KC_Milton

Great story Great characters Some of the best world building I’ve read I really did this to cover the review asking the author to add MC’s mom into the Harem

6mth
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TheRoman

This thing is a scam! That isn't a dragon, it is just some random perverted human who has nothing to do with dragons. This dragon sucks. May the force be with you when you are reading this as you will need it. Warning, no proper dragon!!!

3d
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StarShifter

the lemon scenes could be more .It’s only there when a new girl is added.And i love how he writes the mc girl get involved with each other during those scenes

1mth
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Rayan_Ch

That yuri tag is giving me PTSD, can someone please explained if the yuri between the MC harem or what is it for ? I don't mind spoiler ..............................................................................................................

2mth
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Poseidon1378

The world building is well thought out, I do have to admit that the story is a little hard to follow at the beginning but it has been extremely well written after about chapter 50, wish the author would publish new chapters more often but at this point I am just glad that each new chapter still has that same amazing quality.

2mth
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Stefans1977

my rating does not rreflect my thoughts on the book. it was given so that i don't change the average rating. i haven't read the story but from the synopsis and character arts i get strong my three wives are beautiful vampires vibes. at least he has sons in this book and not like victor Mc Creep. can someone shed a light as to how the story develops? especially the harem? i'm not strongly against harem tropes but it's frustrating if fmc keep sprouting out of the ground like mushrooms and are only relevant for a short while until he finds another woman to conquer. thx.

2mth
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StylzGT
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The type of Yuri in this novel is borderline NTR. This isn’t a Harem novel, it’s more polyamory as its ‘group love’ as opposed to MC being the sole focus. Apart from that the story is good and worth a read.

2mth
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cySol
LV 2 Badge

very good book one of my favorites i can only recommend it

2mth
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Harsh_Kishore

one of the best novel I have ever read. it became my favourite. So, please author keep on uploading me chapters counting the story.. Good health 👍 author

2mth
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Thereader_

Great story but I hate how the time line just changes and we have to get used to a new story. Author needs to focus on one time line and stop confusing us. Do time skips instead

2mth
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capoci_anni

I tried to read for 20 chapter but it's not for me. All characters has a mindset of a teenager. It feels like I'm readin shounen novel, even his mother is childish. Not for my taste.

2mth
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Magick
LV 13 Badge

So much love from here, thanks for the novel, you rock

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3mth
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TekzZ
LV 11 Badge

honestly I don't even know how to describe how good this is but ill give it a go (200+ Chp in so far). First of all we have the power system, he's ridiculously overpowered which is something I personally enjoy in a story, however its still very balanced given his growth rate, whilst it's incredibly fast compared to others, it takes a good amount of chapters for him to get a major power up, ensuring the story isn't going by ridiculously fast. The actual different powers within the story are also done very well, there are multiple different ways of which are sources for a characters Strength and each individual can specialised in different fields. Secondly the characters are arguably the beat I've seen in a novel so far, they all have their own unique and discernable personality to the point where even a single line of speech is enough to know which of the main or supporting characters said it. It also gives an in depth understand about the background of most of the characters that are consistently in the story. The world building itself is brilliant, I wouldn't say the world is unique as the concept of the contients and races etc are something often used in many novels, however every novel manages to do it differently, and this one absolutely smashed it. Further into the story the concept of higher beings and who they actually are is very intriguing and also is done very well as far as I can see so far. The Mc is also amazing, might be one of my personal favourite mc's. Overall its a ridiculously good novel, every aspect is done brilliantly and the writing is phenomenal. Note: Tried my best not to spoil anything lol

3mth
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JoshVfx
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I Don't Like Harem... I really don't like harem but... I like this [img=disgusted]

3mth
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SuperNova23

Can we just appreciate that this author has black main character in his books. Love to see it. Not only is the story great and the harem not obnoxiously huge and meaningless. But I have jokes and music I’m familiar with. I’m either not in the side of WebNovel with these characters everywhere or this is as rare as I think.

4mth
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SPECTER44

does he get the system back, or does he makes one himself

4mth
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Lusafin
LV 12 Badge

very entertaining, wish I could afford all the chapters

4mth
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brendan_smith

came across it on my free to read and am now hooked. great plot great story

4mth
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deadshot101

This is one of the hidden gems on webnovel that does one thing better than alot of other harem series don't and that focus on other characters aside the MC and FMC like we all love Abaddon and his wivies but it's nice to see other characters get some love.The world building is also fantastic the only thing I may have a grip with are some of the antagonists like the titians and lucifer barely being mentioned lately

5mth
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Leitoravido

It was good until 300/400, after that it apparently loses all purpose and the story becomes aimless, the author starts sticking gods and monsters from all mythologies into the story, it gets confusing.

5mth
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Blazzing18

I just read the description and this book looks really good... I think Ill check it out and I also looked at the characters that will be in the book and there r 3 well 4 that r supports its the to human looking girls and the twins that I hope would be with the MC as well... I mean who doesnt like twins and the 2 human looking girls would bring some normalcy to his life or maybe it would help him in the new world better because he used to be a regular human but thats just me and cant wait to see how thing go!

6mth
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Enterthedragon

i don't know where yr going with the thea's character lol seems so sudden and out of the blue.Perhaps catering to a certain fanbase?Not a fan of such things but the other aspects of the book are top tier.👍👍

6mth
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Logtagor

I don’t know why, but from the first chapters the characters in this novel irritate me. I don’t understand MC’s logic. He first says that he hates people and their behavior and asks to be made someone else, but in the end he is transferred to the “dragon” in society indistinguishable from the human one, the author could have thought through this moment and changed the desire of the main character or prescribed other social principles in the new world. The rating is too high for me, it’s not worth spending money on it

6mth
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Fox_MCPE

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6mth
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Samantha_Torres_8702

Love it all. Thanks for creating such an amazing story.

6mth
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Hayden_Machonisse

Bro this one of the best great world building and the creator really knows how to make characters and the evolution interesting

6mth
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7_night
LV 14 Badge

I'm currently on chapter 375. I think the MC is a hypocrite. Why the hell is he declaring war on all of the gods when he's only in conflict with at least three or four gods? His goal is to live peacefully with his family, but instead of targeting only the gods he has a problem with, he declares war on all of them. He just wants to kill them because they ignore each other's selfish actions. That's the stupidest thing I ever heard. Literally everyone in this world is like this—humans, dragons, phoenixes, elves—all selfish, including him. Anyways, the MC being a hypocrite is the only thing I currently have a problem with in the story.

6mth
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Lucifer_TheOrignal

While I agree at first story seems bland but it gets better just give it a read it gets better after 100 chapters. Great story

8mth
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Magul_Arica

Muy bien, excelente, muchas gracias por este libro

8mth
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Kore_42
LV 15 Badge

This book is why I started trying out web novel . I originally read the initial pieces via kindle. So happy to find this now and able to keep reading.

8mth
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KC_Milton

Great story Great characters Some of the best world building I’ve read I really did this to cover the review asking the author to add MC’s mom into the Harem

6mth
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TheRoman

This thing is a scam! That isn't a dragon, it is just some random perverted human who has nothing to do with dragons. This dragon sucks. May the force be with you when you are reading this as you will need it. Warning, no proper dragon!!!

3d
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StarShifter

the lemon scenes could be more .It’s only there when a new girl is added.And i love how he writes the mc girl get involved with each other during those scenes

1mth
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Rayan_Ch

That yuri tag is giving me PTSD, can someone please explained if the yuri between the MC harem or what is it for ? I don't mind spoiler ..............................................................................................................

2mth
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Poseidon1378

The world building is well thought out, I do have to admit that the story is a little hard to follow at the beginning but it has been extremely well written after about chapter 50, wish the author would publish new chapters more often but at this point I am just glad that each new chapter still has that same amazing quality.

2mth
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Stefans1977

my rating does not rreflect my thoughts on the book. it was given so that i don't change the average rating. i haven't read the story but from the synopsis and character arts i get strong my three wives are beautiful vampires vibes. at least he has sons in this book and not like victor Mc Creep. can someone shed a light as to how the story develops? especially the harem? i'm not strongly against harem tropes but it's frustrating if fmc keep sprouting out of the ground like mushrooms and are only relevant for a short while until he finds another woman to conquer. thx.

2mth
2 Antworten anzeigen
StylzGT
LV 15 Badge

The type of Yuri in this novel is borderline NTR. This isn’t a Harem novel, it’s more polyamory as its ‘group love’ as opposed to MC being the sole focus. Apart from that the story is good and worth a read.

2mth
2 Antworten anzeigen
cySol
LV 2 Badge

very good book one of my favorites i can only recommend it

2mth
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Harsh_Kishore

one of the best novel I have ever read. it became my favourite. So, please author keep on uploading me chapters counting the story.. Good health 👍 author

2mth
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Thereader_

Great story but I hate how the time line just changes and we have to get used to a new story. Author needs to focus on one time line and stop confusing us. Do time skips instead

2mth
0 Antworten anzeigen
capoci_anni

I tried to read for 20 chapter but it's not for me. All characters has a mindset of a teenager. It feels like I'm readin shounen novel, even his mother is childish. Not for my taste.

2mth
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Magick
LV 13 Badge

So much love from here, thanks for the novel, you rock

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3mth
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TekzZ
LV 11 Badge

honestly I don't even know how to describe how good this is but ill give it a go (200+ Chp in so far). First of all we have the power system, he's ridiculously overpowered which is something I personally enjoy in a story, however its still very balanced given his growth rate, whilst it's incredibly fast compared to others, it takes a good amount of chapters for him to get a major power up, ensuring the story isn't going by ridiculously fast. The actual different powers within the story are also done very well, there are multiple different ways of which are sources for a characters Strength and each individual can specialised in different fields. Secondly the characters are arguably the beat I've seen in a novel so far, they all have their own unique and discernable personality to the point where even a single line of speech is enough to know which of the main or supporting characters said it. It also gives an in depth understand about the background of most of the characters that are consistently in the story. The world building itself is brilliant, I wouldn't say the world is unique as the concept of the contients and races etc are something often used in many novels, however every novel manages to do it differently, and this one absolutely smashed it. Further into the story the concept of higher beings and who they actually are is very intriguing and also is done very well as far as I can see so far. The Mc is also amazing, might be one of my personal favourite mc's. Overall its a ridiculously good novel, every aspect is done brilliantly and the writing is phenomenal. Note: Tried my best not to spoil anything lol

3mth
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JoshVfx
LV 12 Badge

I Don't Like Harem... I really don't like harem but... I like this [img=disgusted]

3mth
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SuperNova23

Can we just appreciate that this author has black main character in his books. Love to see it. Not only is the story great and the harem not obnoxiously huge and meaningless. But I have jokes and music I’m familiar with. I’m either not in the side of WebNovel with these characters everywhere or this is as rare as I think.

4mth
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SPECTER44

does he get the system back, or does he makes one himself

4mth
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Lusafin
LV 12 Badge

very entertaining, wish I could afford all the chapters

4mth
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brendan_smith

came across it on my free to read and am now hooked. great plot great story

4mth
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deadshot101

This is one of the hidden gems on webnovel that does one thing better than alot of other harem series don't and that focus on other characters aside the MC and FMC like we all love Abaddon and his wivies but it's nice to see other characters get some love.The world building is also fantastic the only thing I may have a grip with are some of the antagonists like the titians and lucifer barely being mentioned lately

5mth
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Leitoravido

It was good until 300/400, after that it apparently loses all purpose and the story becomes aimless, the author starts sticking gods and monsters from all mythologies into the story, it gets confusing.

5mth
0 Antworten anzeigen
Blazzing18

I just read the description and this book looks really good... I think Ill check it out and I also looked at the characters that will be in the book and there r 3 well 4 that r supports its the to human looking girls and the twins that I hope would be with the MC as well... I mean who doesnt like twins and the 2 human looking girls would bring some normalcy to his life or maybe it would help him in the new world better because he used to be a regular human but thats just me and cant wait to see how thing go!

6mth
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Enterthedragon

i don't know where yr going with the thea's character lol seems so sudden and out of the blue.Perhaps catering to a certain fanbase?Not a fan of such things but the other aspects of the book are top tier.👍👍

6mth
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Logtagor

I don’t know why, but from the first chapters the characters in this novel irritate me. I don’t understand MC’s logic. He first says that he hates people and their behavior and asks to be made someone else, but in the end he is transferred to the “dragon” in society indistinguishable from the human one, the author could have thought through this moment and changed the desire of the main character or prescribed other social principles in the new world. The rating is too high for me, it’s not worth spending money on it

6mth
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Fox_MCPE

.........................................

6mth
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Samantha_Torres_8702

Love it all. Thanks for creating such an amazing story.

6mth
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Hayden_Machonisse

Bro this one of the best great world building and the creator really knows how to make characters and the evolution interesting

6mth
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7_night
LV 14 Badge

I'm currently on chapter 375. I think the MC is a hypocrite. Why the hell is he declaring war on all of the gods when he's only in conflict with at least three or four gods? His goal is to live peacefully with his family, but instead of targeting only the gods he has a problem with, he declares war on all of them. He just wants to kill them because they ignore each other's selfish actions. That's the stupidest thing I ever heard. Literally everyone in this world is like this—humans, dragons, phoenixes, elves—all selfish, including him. Anyways, the MC being a hypocrite is the only thing I currently have a problem with in the story.

6mth
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Lucifer_TheOrignal

While I agree at first story seems bland but it gets better just give it a read it gets better after 100 chapters. Great story

8mth
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Magul_Arica

Muy bien, excelente, muchas gracias por este libro

8mth
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Kore_42
LV 15 Badge

This book is why I started trying out web novel . I originally read the initial pieces via kindle. So happy to find this now and able to keep reading.

8mth
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