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Avatar: The gamer
4.3 (25 Bewertungen)
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Dying in a truck accident Levi wakes up to find himself in a completely new world, so different from his own and yet so familiar, the world of "Avatar The last airbender"
Will he survive and thrive in this new world and climb the leader of power or will he fall down and be forgotten like countless people before him
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I really love Atla fics however, I hate when people make fics and add unreasonable elements (pun-intended) to them. Time and space bending... NO. with that aside, you need to go through your chapters and fix the spelling mistakes. I understand English might not be your primary language, but you can use grammerly or even AI (not for all sentences tho). Hold yourself to some standards my man.
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summoning system .... in Avatar ... it is all right, but in chapter 22 onwards ... soo many bad changes in sistem i cant read it more. add system store - soooooo bad man, but fine But the summoning system is really unfair, and the author still says, "Don't worry, if I summon Madara, he will be limited by the world's constraints." Sorry, did you actually read Avatar to understand what the supreme power of an Avatar is? Man, it's at least Kage level, and I'm being generous. After all, leveling mountains with hand gestures (I'm not even talking about the spirits' powers, which aren't limited by human Avatars) is no joke. The only reason we don't see such monsters in the story is because bending requires time for enlightenment, and humans die quickly. Now, imagine a Kage-level being roaming the Avatar world. That guy is practically a god.
Am the author so my review will certainly be biased but I really think this book deserves a 5 stars review, my opinion at least, I put a lot of time and effort into it and made sure to smooth Any rough edges, plus I learned from my previous 2 books and applied my experience here. So I hope you enjoy it.
it was okay despite the grammar mistakes to read up to chapter 24, but then the system got some additions that ruined it because the break the world balance so far to the point it is no longer fun to read. (character summoning and system store)
If I'm honest, the dialogues and narrative of this story have a lot of room for improvement. It is quite noticeable that this novel was written by a novice writer. Another VERY critical point is the rate of updates. It would be great if it were updated at least twice a week, otherwise with the random chapter updates I highly doubt that a new reader will stay to read this novel no matter how much they like it. My recommendation for the author is to read books on how to create a good character, a good narrative, and dialogue that you find useful.
Great story… but takes too long for updates otherwise the rating would be higher
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Overall, I would say that this is a pretty, enjoyable avatar story. The main character is likable, and he is definitely going to get incredibly strong before the start of the main story, but he isn’t necessarily curb stomping the best of the best right away. He has some great teacher so far, and he takes advantage of that, as well as trying to use the system the best way possible. I also like the relationship he has with his family, making sure to take care of them, and teach them, his siblings, at least, and he cares greatly for his father and mother. This is much better than the usual trope where the main character sees his family as a burden, not caring about that one way, or another, or is nothing but story characters. He knows that this is the real world for him, that the people around him are more than characters from the show. Overall, I would say that the story is definitely worth at least checking out to see if it’s your cup of tea, and I think most Raiders will find it to be an entertaining read. overall, I would say that the story is definitely worth at least checking out to see if it’s your cup of tea, and I think most readers will find it to be an entertaining read.
I have been wanting to read this novel for month but was afraid it will be discontinued like all avatar fanfics with a gamer system. Now I am gonna have a bit of faith in you. I really hope it turns into a long novel especially for It to turn AU or MC to unite all nations to make an army to defeat otherworldly opponents or something?
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untuk ceritanya sangat bagus terutama dalam pengembangan karakter. tapi menurutku karakter lain dari naruto sangat menggangu jalan cerita. untuk sistem sudah sangat bagus. cerita yang bagus.
I just like the book so I decided to write a review, just wish updates weren't so slow.
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excellente histoire qui mériterais un 5 étoile , elle les rate car les mise a jours ne sont pas stable mais chère auteur ne vous y trompé pas, j AIME votre histoire ( adore= i love it) . j ai vraiment rien a redire sur cette histoire a part les mise a jours qui sont vraiment base ( je suppose que l auteur est occupé IRL ce qui explique les 3 étoile sur la stabilité des mise a jour au lieu d un 1 étoile) j ai mis toutes les autre étoile sur 5 étoile. continué votre bon travail =) ( FRENCH)
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5 stars cause I didn't see the "harem" tag, and I'm in a good mood.