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Schreiben Sie eine Rezensionthis novel is definitely one of the best ever!! I'm usually put off by most of those extra's novels because of the slow pace , or the MC being so weak for so long but this novel right here is absolute 🔥🔥🔥! I hope it doesn't become a harem because I feel the girl he's with now is perfect for him, but even if it does 🤷🏿♂️ I'll still read because the novel is that damn good!
320 chapters in, time for a review: First of all I love this book, I am really happy that I decided to endure on and read through this book. But before I start glazing, I have to give criticism. This is probably just me being soft but the first 30 chapters are difficult to read because they are just too realistic. What the mc goes through is just pure trauma and sadness. Its like Murphy law where everything that could go wrong happens. The mc feels pathetic. It just feel grating to read how the poor boy has to suffer. The fact that mc is transmigrated into the book but at the same time has no memories/ sealed memories is a bit new and confusing for me especially with "Extra" setting. I wont lie I was on the edge of giving up multiple times during there chapters but I do understand there are important for building the story. However I would have appreciated a disclaimer in the synopsis explaining or warning about this. Now to the good part: I always appreciate a smart anti-hero mc. The bipolar nature and resourcefulness are a nice blend. The interactions mc has with "Valeria" specially are very refreshing and helps the readers understand how the mc will interact with the rest of the world. The smile that hides 1000 secrets. I have to say the character developments of the side characters is well done. A lot of books just dump 5 sides characters at once and give some specific personality traits regarding them and that's it Which leads to some of the most boring characters which you hope to just die. But thankfully the author puts efforts to actually build these characters and makes them feel like real people. Currently the author is using multiple chapters of solo-interactions with the other characters to build familiarity which I am enjoying quite well. If there characters were just dumped into the academy arc the characters would have been much more boring.There is also a lot of forshadowing regarding future characters and this builds anticipation for future events. All in all I have to say the book is in a very good place at the moment and I hope this continues in the future.
In general, I liked the character development and the story. I hope you continue like this[img=update] The tournament section was extended and some battles were too long 4-6 sections are too much for 1v1s, it starts to get repetitive.
He leído hasta el cap 278,puedo decir que el autor a ganado experiencia y su escritura es pulida es entendible,puedes sentir las emociones y experiencias escritas,para los nuevos diría que lean los hasta cuando el protagonista es obligado a ir a la guerra y pueden paras directo al segundo volumen,claro se perderán muchas cosas que se darán cuenta hasta después,pero no afecta mucho,y digo que pueden saltar esa parte porque el protagonista está en su peak,tiene los recuerdos de su vida pasada y la experiencia de la guerra,pongo esta reseña con mi experiencia leyéndola ya que mire que dejaron la historia porque al inició es difícil de leer,igual fui uno de los que casi se va por eso hasta que vi un comentario que ne saltar el volumen 1 y mira asta donde llegue,gracias autor y espero que sigas con esta hermosa obra ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
I only read a few chapters. And, I don't need to see anymore of this nonsense. The main character is pathetic. In fact, I don't even want to acknowledge such patheticness as the main character. The girl Elena or whatever her name is, goes through tragedy events orchestrated by the villains, and it's very descriptively written about after it succeeded against her. I care not about how the story changes later. I ended up thinking about the pathetic fool before I went to bed last night. It infuriated me to no end. I had to come here and leave a review to feel better.
Starting off with the Mc. For reference, I have read up to chapter 254 as of this review. ——— Writing quality: In terms of grammar and the like, I have seen no major issues. Although a silly spelling error or two have occured, they have not ruined my immersion. So grammar wise, it is quite alright. One compliment for the style is when it enters a combat. The author is not as ‘blunt’ with his writing style and combats. Many times during combats and what not, he gives good detail, which truly help one ‘imagine’ the scenery. Other times, it’s to the point. This is a balance in which I personally believe the author has done well in maintaining. ——— Story Development: This story has not progressed super fast IMO. However it hasn’t been slow either. The author has done quite well in pushing forward the story and the world as a whole. One thing in which I believe was done quite well was the transmigration. -This paragraph will now go into minor spoilers.- One thing in which I typically dislike is how single focused some of the works that delve into this become on this topic. They make it the entire story. Which don’t get me wrong, is fine. But can sometimes feel repetitive. Here the author has done quite well in not fully focusing on it. Though like all, there is some cheat like aspects. An entire point of being someone with prior knowledge. But minus the one mage inheritance, all of the things he knows are character based. Such as the convictions of the pink knight. A welcome change to the usual extort resources from everywhere because prior knowledge. -SPOILERS END HERE- ——— Character Design: Overall the characters have had enough depth to think about. They have goals. They have reasons, and not just ones that exist but actually hold weight. And perhaps most importantly, they don’t exist to just prop up the mc’s design. There is unreasonable people, like real life, and there is reasonable ones as well. The author has done quite well in making important characters intricate and still having some depth to those in which are not important. I personally have quite enjoyed the characters as a whole. ——— World Background: Perhaps my most conflicted part here. The world background exists. And when it is shown, it does not disappoint. However, I have yet to see foreshadowing of events to come. Of things happening to show the world is just that, a world. Although it still feels like one, I personally feel this aspect needs more attention. Of course it could be I am dense, and have missed points of not so obvious foreshadowing… ——— Overall Review: CONTAINS LOTS OF SPOILERS! I personally have enjoyed this novel thus far and now will go in depth of for my review of the story as a whole. Starting off this novel is a transmigration one. This can sometimes be forgotten by the reader. But this is the case: We join our mc in a world where he is immediately framed, and cast off by his family for the ‘betrayal’ he did. The ones in which should have loved him the most refused to hear him out. Yet there seemed to be no reason… were the bonds forged a lie? We soon arrived at the war arc. (My favorite arc story building wise). Our mc, truly just a boy without the benefit we were seemingly promised. His identity as an otherworlder didn’t continue it seemed. At least for now. As time passed, our mc grew strong bonds through war. But war is not kind. Those he built bonds with would fall, for he was still weak. Names in which could’ve been so important to be remembered, forgotten. Perhaps only a select few readers and the mc will remember. Naturally, no mc is an mc without some opportunity. Hence Gerald came into the picture. Originally just an old man, he was a bit more than that. Though grasping his strength even now can be difficult, he seemed to be an old man with knowledge and a way forward. He knew why the Mc was stuck. His innate body had stopped him from progressing. Furthermore, something came to light, this body is passed on, and limits one life to a mere two decades. And perhaps even more concerning, it is hereditary. Which brings the question: which one of his parents had it? Sadly the Mc was not informed of this horrible information, yet we were. Left to wonder; and perhaps soon forget. The path for our Mc would be opened by this man, and the typical ‘who am I?’ Seemingly resolved, giving us back the man with knowledge of the future. The path for the mc to grow was set. One would reach for the stars, and use them. Then came the Duke. A man who could be understood, if one tried to at least. Born with such a position, and falling in love. Then through series of misconceptions, killing his best friend who he believed had done taken the wrong path, and only then, realizing what he had done as the man he held the strongest bond with perished before him. But this is not the Duke’s story. As we transition back to the Mc, he knows the fate before him if he stays in this war. Death. The war was lost before it was waged. Using this knowledge, he planned his escape. Alone once again. He had grown, two-stars if one could believe it! But now, he was on the run; and the only place that was ‘safe’ was a deadly forest. As we transition into the arc where he meets the cat. Although I disliked it at first, opportunity must sprout from somewhere. This cat, a mythical beast, in which was connected to his master. Was it fate or coincidence? One cannot know, but it offered another unique power. One of life and death. An answer to the clock he is on? Or perhaps a justification of why he is so close to this unique death energy. One which would not be answered. At least yet. He would be forced to grow in this forest, and a monster would be born; and do not be mistaken, a monster he was. Hence the importance of the next location. The search for a sword. His estoc had failed him. Or so it seemed. For instead he had failed it. He came to a small town plagued by bandits, and found the man who he believed could make him a sword. However, this was not without a challenge, he was tasked to kill bandits, and to make it harder, he must use the blade he has now. For it was not the blades fault, but his. Hence begun a journey of finding a balance between the beast, and finesse. This would found, and we would see his strength truly for the first time. He had once again grown. This would earn him his sword. And let him meet the pink knight. The pink knight was someone understandable. She had convicitons and she had goals. She had come for glory, not for herself, but her family. Our mc offered another perspective. Is that all this knight wished for? The two would funnily enough find themselves on the same path as one another, and meet at a tourney. Here, the mc would use his knowledge once more. For himself, and for others. Whether it be underminding what seems to be an evil sect, or helping someone he knows so much about. Now before you is a summary, and I believe it paints how I saw this novel quite well. It has been a journey: one filled with excitment, curiousity, and wonder. And one I would highly recommend you at least try.
Spoiler enthüllengreat characters, they are almost tangible. The world building is efficient and effective, almost all of the details were necessary for the story except for some details about cultivation being unclear. Great dialogue for all characters. character interactions are interesting and portray the traits of the characters effectively.
ok so i like it but 1. the writing is good yes it uses ai which like ok whatever i don’t care as long as it’s good but it’s repeating certain phrases too much and sometimes just makes the text really long but it’s still good 2. the pacing is good and i like the plot no complaints here 3. ironically even though the main character keeps whining about bad character writing i think it’s kind of an issue with this novel. specifically the main character, in the earlier arcs he feels human but at a certain point he just stops feeling like a human character and he only wins and everyone likes him and he’s never scared and never serious and just confined to a stereotype. 4. yeah the world building is pretty cool could use a little more background but it’s cool
The novel was initially good but to be honest the quality declined over time and the fillers were very numerous, such as repeating events that had already occurred, the intention was obviously to add words in order to have more premium chapters, but as previously reviewed, boring, a lot of plot armor, and the quality decreased due to the number of unnecessary fillers.
I like this work and his other work Hunter academy. Does a really good of developing characters and world. My biggest criticism is the pace, and how entire chapter and some time numerous chapters in a row is dedicated to idle conversations where nothing is happening.
story is good. enjoying it so far but author can you please tone down the smirking part a little and use some synonyms in it's place it will boost your vocabulary.
bro your writing is so amazing,your words of choice 👏,making reader to read more ,good background,character development 😃, I became a fan of your after reading this book .
I really like the story and I enjoy reading it and getting to know the characters. It’s a good read and no issues that truly stick out except for the grammar or punctuation errors. Another thing I find a bit unsettling is how the characters interact, especially when they talk. It feels as if they are putting on a show, as if they are part of some drama or play. I get that this is a story but the flowery descriptions and constant repetition of something the author said literally a paragraph before would then be explained again with even more detail and flowery descriptions. That’s the only turn-off with the book in my opinion but other than that, I’m still enjoying it. Not more than the author’s Villainess novel but yeah, still enjoying it
Hi author this is a superb webnovel you have written. Writing quality is nice, characters are well made the story is well paced too. I dont't like the harem tag but if it has proper build up then I guess I'm all in .After all I'm sure you are writing it by your standards and I like the way the story progresses so who am I to criticize anyways keep writing and good luck . 😄
The character design and development is great. But the plot is way to cliche! Like more than once have i already prideicted the plot when a scene starts. like when he will meet his master etc. The plot is way too predictable if you are a veteran reader. Just like watching a romance anime. But the execution is pretty good. Though more than once the novel feels like it was written by A.I. This novel literally has all the tropes of the underdog MC types. I would advise the author to make it more realistic the plot i mean. Like the chances of such encounters is insanely low!! Especially how MC and Elara found their masters.
how to say i read it because of the academy and harem tag but WHay why is there cultivation involved ( star devoured) ( 1 st star move) shit ... 50 .... 50 and above chapter wasted on cultivation drama meeting old man and advancing to 1,2,3,4 stage bro I am here for romance not chinese drama.... but I will give it a try I have reached 58 by now I will read some more and review back
So far a very good story, it presents good characters and it is really very satisfying to see the interactions of the characters and also the different points of view presented, I hope for more chapters
Yep definitely a 5/5 rating. The Start was a pain to go through but it built how we see the MC in the ongoing chapters. Definitely a must read. [img=update][img=recommend]
story may not be for everyone, especially if you’re looking for immediate action or quick resolutions. But if you’re willing to go through the slower, heavier beginning, the emotional payoff is immense. This is a story of healing, overcoming internal battles, and finding strength in vulnerability. I highly recommend it for readers who enjoy stories where the MC’s growth is just as important as the plot itself.
Spoiler enthüllennice read so far, i wish the author could focus less on the female leads bc why is their useless internal dialogues taking up half the chapters.
Great novel if you get past the starting chaps. Now I am just waiting for the academy arc to start.
I love your book again making another review after reading all the chapters. This is the perfect balance of growth and character development and molding it into a plot in the story. The character actually has a identifiable personality that isn’t just a forced personality but one molded by his experiences and what he has been through. Or just projected your character traits onto a characters. It’s very easy to read when people with middle school syndrome write a book comparing it to people who actually have experience with life. He keeps his obsession with his swords and I love that he wasn’t just some loser with no attachments to his past life. His estoc is a good weapon choice. At first I was unsure but how you wrote it made it very good. Like how he stabbed the his familiar on their first encounter, that was hilarious. But it matched his personality. He didn’t stop to admire how cute it was. Especially the ice sect (I forgot it was cloud something) I liked how you described them, keeping the equality and balance. I’m really liking the current events building up. Everyone is human. Especially how you describe the characters actions it fits him extremely well, especially the amount of detail you put in everything is just right. Like how he conducts himself. Like a free spirit. I especially like his personality trope of Dancing with death even with the devil at some points. I wish I could find more books like this with a mc that’s like this also. Or has experienced something like this that changed them. This book has given me alot of insight, thank you.
Spoiler enthüllenRead the whole thing, the pacing is good if you don’t have a TikTok brain like half the reviewers. The Mc slowly adapts like a human and once he overcomes his mental block it gets 1000x better. The emotions the Mc feels in the story aren’t too forced and the supporting characters are fleshed out enough as well. The main drawback is the fact that most of the females are super cliche, Fe: Crazy yandere Tsun tsun knight Childhood best friend who has always loved him And prob the Flmc of the original story after she finds the truth They aren’t very real feeling. I’d rather no romance than the stereotypical harem that will not progress and will just be used as filler in between plot points. Overall not bad ig. Has pontential to be amazing and could be someone’s favorite story.
One of the better free stories in the past coming of weeks. Wish the second arc was done better. It kinda of got predictable and boring after the first arc. Really hoping the author comes up with something fresh instead of the same predictable story
Just an opinion after I read few chapters... the author uses purple proses a bit too much. The excessive descriptions are unnecessary and to the point of obsession. 🤢 It doesn't change at all. NOT. AT. ALL. More I read, more I get that. Overall story is good but the roundabout narration seems deliberate only to increase the number of words to reach the per chapter word quota and hence, individually the chapter lack substance. The world setting seems alright (though much wasn't revealed), the character design was likeable too, even the plot development was great. However, the purple proses are what make it shit for me. I know that only shows how dedicated the author is towards certain details but they really are unnecessary. Better to burn your brain cells on something else for efficient writing - that's what I want to say.
This is my favorite ongoing novel at the moment, absolutely amazing and you can tell the author gets more of a hold on the story the longer it goes on. My only complaint, and why it isn’t 5 stars, is that some of the characters that die aren’t as fleshed out as they could be, which doesent detract from the story but it could make it better. Definitely give it a read.
this novel is definitely one of the best ever!! I'm usually put off by most of those extra's novels because of the slow pace , or the MC being so weak for so long but this novel right here is absolute 🔥🔥🔥! I hope it doesn't become a harem because I feel the girl he's with now is perfect for him, but even if it does 🤷🏿♂️ I'll still read because the novel is that damn good!
320 chapters in, time for a review: First of all I love this book, I am really happy that I decided to endure on and read through this book. But before I start glazing, I have to give criticism. This is probably just me being soft but the first 30 chapters are difficult to read because they are just too realistic. What the mc goes through is just pure trauma and sadness. Its like Murphy law where everything that could go wrong happens. The mc feels pathetic. It just feel grating to read how the poor boy has to suffer. The fact that mc is transmigrated into the book but at the same time has no memories/ sealed memories is a bit new and confusing for me especially with "Extra" setting. I wont lie I was on the edge of giving up multiple times during there chapters but I do understand there are important for building the story. However I would have appreciated a disclaimer in the synopsis explaining or warning about this. Now to the good part: I always appreciate a smart anti-hero mc. The bipolar nature and resourcefulness are a nice blend. The interactions mc has with "Valeria" specially are very refreshing and helps the readers understand how the mc will interact with the rest of the world. The smile that hides 1000 secrets. I have to say the character developments of the side characters is well done. A lot of books just dump 5 sides characters at once and give some specific personality traits regarding them and that's it Which leads to some of the most boring characters which you hope to just die. But thankfully the author puts efforts to actually build these characters and makes them feel like real people. Currently the author is using multiple chapters of solo-interactions with the other characters to build familiarity which I am enjoying quite well. If there characters were just dumped into the academy arc the characters would have been much more boring.There is also a lot of forshadowing regarding future characters and this builds anticipation for future events. All in all I have to say the book is in a very good place at the moment and I hope this continues in the future.
In general, I liked the character development and the story. I hope you continue like this[img=update] The tournament section was extended and some battles were too long 4-6 sections are too much for 1v1s, it starts to get repetitive.
He leído hasta el cap 278,puedo decir que el autor a ganado experiencia y su escritura es pulida es entendible,puedes sentir las emociones y experiencias escritas,para los nuevos diría que lean los hasta cuando el protagonista es obligado a ir a la guerra y pueden paras directo al segundo volumen,claro se perderán muchas cosas que se darán cuenta hasta después,pero no afecta mucho,y digo que pueden saltar esa parte porque el protagonista está en su peak,tiene los recuerdos de su vida pasada y la experiencia de la guerra,pongo esta reseña con mi experiencia leyéndola ya que mire que dejaron la historia porque al inició es difícil de leer,igual fui uno de los que casi se va por eso hasta que vi un comentario que ne saltar el volumen 1 y mira asta donde llegue,gracias autor y espero que sigas con esta hermosa obra ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
I only read a few chapters. And, I don't need to see anymore of this nonsense. The main character is pathetic. In fact, I don't even want to acknowledge such patheticness as the main character. The girl Elena or whatever her name is, goes through tragedy events orchestrated by the villains, and it's very descriptively written about after it succeeded against her. I care not about how the story changes later. I ended up thinking about the pathetic fool before I went to bed last night. It infuriated me to no end. I had to come here and leave a review to feel better.
Starting off with the Mc. For reference, I have read up to chapter 254 as of this review. ——— Writing quality: In terms of grammar and the like, I have seen no major issues. Although a silly spelling error or two have occured, they have not ruined my immersion. So grammar wise, it is quite alright. One compliment for the style is when it enters a combat. The author is not as ‘blunt’ with his writing style and combats. Many times during combats and what not, he gives good detail, which truly help one ‘imagine’ the scenery. Other times, it’s to the point. This is a balance in which I personally believe the author has done well in maintaining. ——— Story Development: This story has not progressed super fast IMO. However it hasn’t been slow either. The author has done quite well in pushing forward the story and the world as a whole. One thing in which I believe was done quite well was the transmigration. -This paragraph will now go into minor spoilers.- One thing in which I typically dislike is how single focused some of the works that delve into this become on this topic. They make it the entire story. Which don’t get me wrong, is fine. But can sometimes feel repetitive. Here the author has done quite well in not fully focusing on it. Though like all, there is some cheat like aspects. An entire point of being someone with prior knowledge. But minus the one mage inheritance, all of the things he knows are character based. Such as the convictions of the pink knight. A welcome change to the usual extort resources from everywhere because prior knowledge. -SPOILERS END HERE- ——— Character Design: Overall the characters have had enough depth to think about. They have goals. They have reasons, and not just ones that exist but actually hold weight. And perhaps most importantly, they don’t exist to just prop up the mc’s design. There is unreasonable people, like real life, and there is reasonable ones as well. The author has done quite well in making important characters intricate and still having some depth to those in which are not important. I personally have quite enjoyed the characters as a whole. ——— World Background: Perhaps my most conflicted part here. The world background exists. And when it is shown, it does not disappoint. However, I have yet to see foreshadowing of events to come. Of things happening to show the world is just that, a world. Although it still feels like one, I personally feel this aspect needs more attention. Of course it could be I am dense, and have missed points of not so obvious foreshadowing… ——— Overall Review: CONTAINS LOTS OF SPOILERS! I personally have enjoyed this novel thus far and now will go in depth of for my review of the story as a whole. Starting off this novel is a transmigration one. This can sometimes be forgotten by the reader. But this is the case: We join our mc in a world where he is immediately framed, and cast off by his family for the ‘betrayal’ he did. The ones in which should have loved him the most refused to hear him out. Yet there seemed to be no reason… were the bonds forged a lie? We soon arrived at the war arc. (My favorite arc story building wise). Our mc, truly just a boy without the benefit we were seemingly promised. His identity as an otherworlder didn’t continue it seemed. At least for now. As time passed, our mc grew strong bonds through war. But war is not kind. Those he built bonds with would fall, for he was still weak. Names in which could’ve been so important to be remembered, forgotten. Perhaps only a select few readers and the mc will remember. Naturally, no mc is an mc without some opportunity. Hence Gerald came into the picture. Originally just an old man, he was a bit more than that. Though grasping his strength even now can be difficult, he seemed to be an old man with knowledge and a way forward. He knew why the Mc was stuck. His innate body had stopped him from progressing. Furthermore, something came to light, this body is passed on, and limits one life to a mere two decades. And perhaps even more concerning, it is hereditary. Which brings the question: which one of his parents had it? Sadly the Mc was not informed of this horrible information, yet we were. Left to wonder; and perhaps soon forget. The path for our Mc would be opened by this man, and the typical ‘who am I?’ Seemingly resolved, giving us back the man with knowledge of the future. The path for the mc to grow was set. One would reach for the stars, and use them. Then came the Duke. A man who could be understood, if one tried to at least. Born with such a position, and falling in love. Then through series of misconceptions, killing his best friend who he believed had done taken the wrong path, and only then, realizing what he had done as the man he held the strongest bond with perished before him. But this is not the Duke’s story. As we transition back to the Mc, he knows the fate before him if he stays in this war. Death. The war was lost before it was waged. Using this knowledge, he planned his escape. Alone once again. He had grown, two-stars if one could believe it! But now, he was on the run; and the only place that was ‘safe’ was a deadly forest. As we transition into the arc where he meets the cat. Although I disliked it at first, opportunity must sprout from somewhere. This cat, a mythical beast, in which was connected to his master. Was it fate or coincidence? One cannot know, but it offered another unique power. One of life and death. An answer to the clock he is on? Or perhaps a justification of why he is so close to this unique death energy. One which would not be answered. At least yet. He would be forced to grow in this forest, and a monster would be born; and do not be mistaken, a monster he was. Hence the importance of the next location. The search for a sword. His estoc had failed him. Or so it seemed. For instead he had failed it. He came to a small town plagued by bandits, and found the man who he believed could make him a sword. However, this was not without a challenge, he was tasked to kill bandits, and to make it harder, he must use the blade he has now. For it was not the blades fault, but his. Hence begun a journey of finding a balance between the beast, and finesse. This would found, and we would see his strength truly for the first time. He had once again grown. This would earn him his sword. And let him meet the pink knight. The pink knight was someone understandable. She had convicitons and she had goals. She had come for glory, not for herself, but her family. Our mc offered another perspective. Is that all this knight wished for? The two would funnily enough find themselves on the same path as one another, and meet at a tourney. Here, the mc would use his knowledge once more. For himself, and for others. Whether it be underminding what seems to be an evil sect, or helping someone he knows so much about. Now before you is a summary, and I believe it paints how I saw this novel quite well. It has been a journey: one filled with excitment, curiousity, and wonder. And one I would highly recommend you at least try.
Spoiler enthüllengreat characters, they are almost tangible. The world building is efficient and effective, almost all of the details were necessary for the story except for some details about cultivation being unclear. Great dialogue for all characters. character interactions are interesting and portray the traits of the characters effectively.
ok so i like it but 1. the writing is good yes it uses ai which like ok whatever i don’t care as long as it’s good but it’s repeating certain phrases too much and sometimes just makes the text really long but it’s still good 2. the pacing is good and i like the plot no complaints here 3. ironically even though the main character keeps whining about bad character writing i think it’s kind of an issue with this novel. specifically the main character, in the earlier arcs he feels human but at a certain point he just stops feeling like a human character and he only wins and everyone likes him and he’s never scared and never serious and just confined to a stereotype. 4. yeah the world building is pretty cool could use a little more background but it’s cool
The novel was initially good but to be honest the quality declined over time and the fillers were very numerous, such as repeating events that had already occurred, the intention was obviously to add words in order to have more premium chapters, but as previously reviewed, boring, a lot of plot armor, and the quality decreased due to the number of unnecessary fillers.
I like this work and his other work Hunter academy. Does a really good of developing characters and world. My biggest criticism is the pace, and how entire chapter and some time numerous chapters in a row is dedicated to idle conversations where nothing is happening.
story is good. enjoying it so far but author can you please tone down the smirking part a little and use some synonyms in it's place it will boost your vocabulary.
bro your writing is so amazing,your words of choice 👏,making reader to read more ,good background,character development 😃, I became a fan of your after reading this book .
I really like the story and I enjoy reading it and getting to know the characters. It’s a good read and no issues that truly stick out except for the grammar or punctuation errors. Another thing I find a bit unsettling is how the characters interact, especially when they talk. It feels as if they are putting on a show, as if they are part of some drama or play. I get that this is a story but the flowery descriptions and constant repetition of something the author said literally a paragraph before would then be explained again with even more detail and flowery descriptions. That’s the only turn-off with the book in my opinion but other than that, I’m still enjoying it. Not more than the author’s Villainess novel but yeah, still enjoying it
Hi author this is a superb webnovel you have written. Writing quality is nice, characters are well made the story is well paced too. I dont't like the harem tag but if it has proper build up then I guess I'm all in .After all I'm sure you are writing it by your standards and I like the way the story progresses so who am I to criticize anyways keep writing and good luck . 😄
The character design and development is great. But the plot is way to cliche! Like more than once have i already prideicted the plot when a scene starts. like when he will meet his master etc. The plot is way too predictable if you are a veteran reader. Just like watching a romance anime. But the execution is pretty good. Though more than once the novel feels like it was written by A.I. This novel literally has all the tropes of the underdog MC types. I would advise the author to make it more realistic the plot i mean. Like the chances of such encounters is insanely low!! Especially how MC and Elara found their masters.
how to say i read it because of the academy and harem tag but WHay why is there cultivation involved ( star devoured) ( 1 st star move) shit ... 50 .... 50 and above chapter wasted on cultivation drama meeting old man and advancing to 1,2,3,4 stage bro I am here for romance not chinese drama.... but I will give it a try I have reached 58 by now I will read some more and review back
So far a very good story, it presents good characters and it is really very satisfying to see the interactions of the characters and also the different points of view presented, I hope for more chapters
Yep definitely a 5/5 rating. The Start was a pain to go through but it built how we see the MC in the ongoing chapters. Definitely a must read. [img=update][img=recommend]
story may not be for everyone, especially if you’re looking for immediate action or quick resolutions. But if you’re willing to go through the slower, heavier beginning, the emotional payoff is immense. This is a story of healing, overcoming internal battles, and finding strength in vulnerability. I highly recommend it for readers who enjoy stories where the MC’s growth is just as important as the plot itself.
Spoiler enthüllennice read so far, i wish the author could focus less on the female leads bc why is their useless internal dialogues taking up half the chapters.
Great novel if you get past the starting chaps. Now I am just waiting for the academy arc to start.
I love your book again making another review after reading all the chapters. This is the perfect balance of growth and character development and molding it into a plot in the story. The character actually has a identifiable personality that isn’t just a forced personality but one molded by his experiences and what he has been through. Or just projected your character traits onto a characters. It’s very easy to read when people with middle school syndrome write a book comparing it to people who actually have experience with life. He keeps his obsession with his swords and I love that he wasn’t just some loser with no attachments to his past life. His estoc is a good weapon choice. At first I was unsure but how you wrote it made it very good. Like how he stabbed the his familiar on their first encounter, that was hilarious. But it matched his personality. He didn’t stop to admire how cute it was. Especially the ice sect (I forgot it was cloud something) I liked how you described them, keeping the equality and balance. I’m really liking the current events building up. Everyone is human. Especially how you describe the characters actions it fits him extremely well, especially the amount of detail you put in everything is just right. Like how he conducts himself. Like a free spirit. I especially like his personality trope of Dancing with death even with the devil at some points. I wish I could find more books like this with a mc that’s like this also. Or has experienced something like this that changed them. This book has given me alot of insight, thank you.
Spoiler enthüllenRead the whole thing, the pacing is good if you don’t have a TikTok brain like half the reviewers. The Mc slowly adapts like a human and once he overcomes his mental block it gets 1000x better. The emotions the Mc feels in the story aren’t too forced and the supporting characters are fleshed out enough as well. The main drawback is the fact that most of the females are super cliche, Fe: Crazy yandere Tsun tsun knight Childhood best friend who has always loved him And prob the Flmc of the original story after she finds the truth They aren’t very real feeling. I’d rather no romance than the stereotypical harem that will not progress and will just be used as filler in between plot points. Overall not bad ig. Has pontential to be amazing and could be someone’s favorite story.
One of the better free stories in the past coming of weeks. Wish the second arc was done better. It kinda of got predictable and boring after the first arc. Really hoping the author comes up with something fresh instead of the same predictable story
Just an opinion after I read few chapters... the author uses purple proses a bit too much. The excessive descriptions are unnecessary and to the point of obsession. 🤢 It doesn't change at all. NOT. AT. ALL. More I read, more I get that. Overall story is good but the roundabout narration seems deliberate only to increase the number of words to reach the per chapter word quota and hence, individually the chapter lack substance. The world setting seems alright (though much wasn't revealed), the character design was likeable too, even the plot development was great. However, the purple proses are what make it shit for me. I know that only shows how dedicated the author is towards certain details but they really are unnecessary. Better to burn your brain cells on something else for efficient writing - that's what I want to say.
This is my favorite ongoing novel at the moment, absolutely amazing and you can tell the author gets more of a hold on the story the longer it goes on. My only complaint, and why it isn’t 5 stars, is that some of the characters that die aren’t as fleshed out as they could be, which doesent detract from the story but it could make it better. Definitely give it a read.