When will Adrian come back we know ? The current situation is very confusing. It would be great to get some clarification.
I liked it very much, the story flow is very good, the character interactions are not left behind. Keep writing, I want to keep reading.[img=Your move]
In general, I liked the character development and the story. I hope you continue like this[img=update] The tournament section was extended and some battles were too long 4-6 sections are too much for 1v1s, it starts to get repetitive.
dude rong chap
Do you have a chance the much more update, this is not enough.[img=Your move]
I don't like irina sorry bro this chapters is bad for me (too forced relationship)
Dude irina just annoying tftc
too long chapters for the bill pls reduce this writing style (Bill couldn't care less)You repeat this 3-5 times or there are others similar, please don't do it.
Couldn't it be better if sunny was angry with cassie?she turned man life upside down and he was chatting with her at the cafe as if nothing happen(I now she doesn't remember)still i kill her 3 times.
I'm desperate to know how soon pls
Aetheric Chronicles: Reborn As An Extra
Fantasy · Peace_in_Chaos