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suprisingly bad for how well it starts, too many shallow characters and dialogue, protagonist has murder addiction, its tecnically a transmigation but a large part of it doesn't feel like it, there too much unecessary exposition and kinda repetitive, some things even get repeated in another pov. At some point i just started skipping stuff and it didn't feel like i missed anything important
After the first volume, everything is too drawn out. ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
Amazing book with a beautiful storyline. Unlike a lot of other books on this site you can tell that this author is actually taking the time to explore our characters development and build a story, instead of the usual wake up and power up we can see our characters struggle and humanity. The common sense that a lot of novels tend to lose in exchange for a rush to power ups.
I personally liked it people say MC isn't that good but he is fine for me it's still 100 percent better than those lame extra plots where they just go to academy no training nothing bullshit
good story, only if u have the patience as it will take a minimum of 5000chapters if the author planning to finish this novel that to its just my guess. that's how slow paced and dragging the chapters are when there is no need to do so.
Really good novel. The chapters per week ratio is amazing and the story focoses on characters deeply, so you can understand them and their motives. The story can be pretty slow at times, but that could possibly be only a momentary thing, cause I can‘t wait to get to the next arc. Fights get pictured vividly in your mind, but because of that it takes a few more chapters to end a fight. If you want quick action you should think twice before buying extra, but the story is fire and really worth it.
Too many details and meaningless explanations make the story not move forward, something that should be done quickly is dragged out over several chapters due to useless details.
An absolute gem! Legit my favorite book on the app, and the only one I buy privledge for and give golden tickets to. Only downside is up to this point there still isn’t really any romance. Other than that it’s absolutely perfect
"Shattered Innocence" takes the familiar trope of transmigration and turns it into a gripping and emotionally charged narrative that transcends expectations. The novel tells the story of an ordinary individual thrown into a fictional world, only to find themselves not as a powerful protagonist, but as an inconsequential extra. The twist? This "extra" role hides layers of mystery, and the stakes are far higher than they appear. What truly sets this novel apart is its ability to weave a tale that is both heart-wrenching and thought-provoking. The protagonist’s journey of survival, self-discovery, and reluctant heroism feels refreshingly human. Far from being a typical power fantasy, it’s a deeply introspective exploration of morality, identity, and the weight of choices in a world scripted by someone else’s pen. The writing is sharp and evocative, painting vivid scenes without overindulging in flowery descriptions. The supporting characters are equally well-crafted, with their own motives and vulnerabilities, ensuring they don’t merely exist to serve the protagonist’s arc. The story's pacing strikes a perfect balance between moments of high tension and quieter, character-driven scenes that make you pause and reflect. Perhaps the novel's greatest strength is its unflinching look at the "rules" of fictional worlds. By subverting clichés and addressing the darker aspects of transmigration stories, "Shattered Innocence" challenges readers to think critically about fate, free will, and the cost of rewriting destiny. If you’re a fan of novels that deliver more than they promise on the surface—stories that make you question your own perspectives while keeping you glued to the page—this one is a must-read. With its emotional depth, intriguing plot twists, and a protagonist you’ll root for despite their flaws, Shattered Innocence is a standout in the genre. It’s not just a story; it’s an experience.
This is fucking horrible OK so a couple main points here The author has a huge reiteration issue. They will say everything over and over and over again in every way, you can think of in the same fucking chapter. It honestly doesn't matter what the subject is just know that reading this story is signing up for reading the same paragraph over again written differently in the same chapter in almost every chapter. Now it's not always the same thing chapter chapter, tho so at least there is that 🤣 Another thing this story is incredibly slow like me personally, I can read an average of about 50 to 80 chapters in a day just casually depending how long the chapters are with this the moment I passed chapter 50 it became a massive slog like it's not that it's technically slow. It's just that things that most authors skip this guy feels like he needs to write everything about and that might be a good thing if the writing was good, but I genuinely can't tell if this wasn't just done by an AI or not this is terrible just awful No, I could say more, but nobody wants to read all that so I'm just gonna end it here. I've said my peace.
Too much rubbish info. So wastage of time is one issue. But secondly, the story was good at start but the mc progression just went from extremely low to extremely high so fast that the rhythm of whole story was ruined. I feel very disappointed because of it. Thirdly after all this the mc is kind even though he says he is not but he sure acts like a saint (I dont know if I should be happy or sad for it) . Truely a miracle there. Lastly he is becoming a idiot as the story is progressing. I liked the story far better before that cat came into his life(unnecessary extra) . I am at 160 ch now. And I hope it will get better ahead.
The story is intriguing, and characters so far have good development, with interesting interactions, while the world building for now looks of sufficient depth, there is one deficiency, which lowers quality of novel. The use of AI, in this case i would guess GPT, is quite obvious (sorry if you dont use it and it only looks like it). Personally I don't have anything with usign AI, as out there, are quite few works which use it and in such ways that you wouldn't even noticed, or it doesnt have influence on any aspect of the novel, whether it is in aspect of content, or from the readers expierence. The case of this novel is the second one, as repeated phrases (after each other), with in essence same meaning/point, are quite annoying, and at some point quite noticable (mainly during long read). I wouln't say no to few occurences (repetitions) but not in current frequency. Overall novel is worth reading, with expectations to ignore the repetitions, or take pauses during reading. At last, the additional refining of repeated phrases after each other would surely lifted quality of the novel. PS: English is not my native language, so I apologise for any errors in the rewiev.
This is my favorite ongoing novel at the moment, absolutely amazing and you can tell the author gets more of a hold on the story the longer it goes on. My only complaint, and why it isn’t 5 stars, is that some of the characters that die aren’t as fleshed out as they could be, which doesent detract from the story but it could make it better. Definitely give it a read.
this novel is definitely one of the best ever!! I'm usually put off by most of those extra's novels because of the slow pace , or the MC being so weak for so long but this novel right here is absolute 🔥🔥🔥! I hope it doesn't become a harem because I feel the girl he's with now is perfect for him, but even if it does 🤷🏿♂️ I'll still read because the novel is that damn good!
So far I think this story has amazing potential keep up the great work author
320 chapters in, time for a review: First of all I love this book, I am really happy that I decided to endure on and read through this book. But before I start glazing, I have to give criticism. This is probably just me being soft but the first 30 chapters are difficult to read because they are just too realistic. What the mc goes through is just pure trauma and sadness. Its like Murphy law where everything that could go wrong happens. The mc feels pathetic. It just feel grating to read how the poor boy has to suffer. The fact that mc is transmigrated into the book but at the same time has no memories/ sealed memories is a bit new and confusing for me especially with "Extra" setting. I wont lie I was on the edge of giving up multiple times during there chapters but I do understand there are important for building the story. However I would have appreciated a disclaimer in the synopsis explaining or warning about this. Now to the good part: I always appreciate a smart anti-hero mc. The bipolar nature and resourcefulness are a nice blend. The interactions mc has with "Valeria" specially are very refreshing and helps the readers understand how the mc will interact with the rest of the world. The smile that hides 1000 secrets. I have to say the character developments of the side characters is well done. A lot of books just dump 5 sides characters at once and give some specific personality traits regarding them and that's it Which leads to some of the most boring characters which you hope to just die. But thankfully the author puts efforts to actually build these characters and makes them feel like real people. Currently the author is using multiple chapters of solo-interactions with the other characters to build familiarity which I am enjoying quite well. If there characters were just dumped into the academy arc the characters would have been much more boring.There is also a lot of forshadowing regarding future characters and this builds anticipation for future events. All in all I have to say the book is in a very good place at the moment and I hope this continues in the future.
In general, I liked the character development and the story. I hope you continue like this[img=update] The tournament section was extended and some battles were too long 4-6 sections are too much for 1v1s, it starts to get repetitive.
He leído hasta el cap 278,puedo decir que el autor a ganado experiencia y su escritura es pulida es entendible,puedes sentir las emociones y experiencias escritas,para los nuevos diría que lean los hasta cuando el protagonista es obligado a ir a la guerra y pueden paras directo al segundo volumen,claro se perderán muchas cosas que se darán cuenta hasta después,pero no afecta mucho,y digo que pueden saltar esa parte porque el protagonista está en su peak,tiene los recuerdos de su vida pasada y la experiencia de la guerra,pongo esta reseña con mi experiencia leyéndola ya que mire que dejaron la historia porque al inició es difícil de leer,igual fui uno de los que casi se va por eso hasta que vi un comentario que ne saltar el volumen 1 y mira asta donde llegue,gracias autor y espero que sigas con esta hermosa obra ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
I was tempted to read this novel the moment I saw it’s cover. A truly work of art!
I only read a few chapters. And, I don't need to see anymore of this nonsense. The main character is pathetic. In fact, I don't even want to acknowledge such patheticness as the main character. The girl Elena or whatever her name is, goes through tragedy events orchestrated by the villains, and it's very descriptively written about after it succeeded against her. I care not about how the story changes later. I ended up thinking about the pathetic fool before I went to bed last night. It infuriated me to no end. I had to come here and leave a review to feel better.
Starting off with the Mc. For reference, I have read up to chapter 254 as of this review. ——— Writing quality: In terms of grammar and the like, I have seen no major issues. Although a silly spelling error or two have occured, they have not ruined my immersion. So grammar wise, it is quite alright. One compliment for the style is when it enters a combat. The author is not as ‘blunt’ with his writing style and combats. Many times during combats and what not, he gives good detail, which truly help one ‘imagine’ the scenery. Other times, it’s to the point. This is a balance in which I personally believe the author has done well in maintaining. ——— Story Development: This story has not progressed super fast IMO. However it hasn’t been slow either. The author has done quite well in pushing forward the story and the world as a whole. One thing in which I believe was done quite well was the transmigration. -This paragraph will now go into minor spoilers.- One thing in which I typically dislike is how single focused some of the works that delve into this become on this topic. They make it the entire story. Which don’t get me wrong, is fine. But can sometimes feel repetitive. Here the author has done quite well in not fully focusing on it. Though like all, there is some cheat like aspects. An entire point of being someone with prior knowledge. But minus the one mage inheritance, all of the things he knows are character based. Such as the convictions of the pink knight. A welcome change to the usual extort resources from everywhere because prior knowledge. -SPOILERS END HERE- ——— Character Design: Overall the characters have had enough depth to think about. They have goals. They have reasons, and not just ones that exist but actually hold weight. And perhaps most importantly, they don’t exist to just prop up the mc’s design. There is unreasonable people, like real life, and there is reasonable ones as well. The author has done quite well in making important characters intricate and still having some depth to those in which are not important. I personally have quite enjoyed the characters as a whole. ——— World Background: Perhaps my most conflicted part here. The world background exists. And when it is shown, it does not disappoint. However, I have yet to see foreshadowing of events to come. Of things happening to show the world is just that, a world. Although it still feels like one, I personally feel this aspect needs more attention. Of course it could be I am dense, and have missed points of not so obvious foreshadowing… ——— Overall Review: CONTAINS LOTS OF SPOILERS! I personally have enjoyed this novel thus far and now will go in depth of for my review of the story as a whole. Starting off this novel is a transmigration one. This can sometimes be forgotten by the reader. But this is the case: We join our mc in a world where he is immediately framed, and cast off by his family for the ‘betrayal’ he did. The ones in which should have loved him the most refused to hear him out. Yet there seemed to be no reason… were the bonds forged a lie? We soon arrived at the war arc. (My favorite arc story building wise). Our mc, truly just a boy without the benefit we were seemingly promised. His identity as an otherworlder didn’t continue it seemed. At least for now. As time passed, our mc grew strong bonds through war. But war is not kind. Those he built bonds with would fall, for he was still weak. Names in which could’ve been so important to be remembered, forgotten. Perhaps only a select few readers and the mc will remember. Naturally, no mc is an mc without some opportunity. Hence Gerald came into the picture. Originally just an old man, he was a bit more than that. Though grasping his strength even now can be difficult, he seemed to be an old man with knowledge and a way forward. He knew why the Mc was stuck. His innate body had stopped him from progressing. Furthermore, something came to light, this body is passed on, and limits one life to a mere two decades. And perhaps even more concerning, it is hereditary. Which brings the question: which one of his parents had it? Sadly the Mc was not informed of this horrible information, yet we were. Left to wonder; and perhaps soon forget. The path for our Mc would be opened by this man, and the typical ‘who am I?’ Seemingly resolved, giving us back the man with knowledge of the future. The path for the mc to grow was set. One would reach for the stars, and use them. Then came the Duke. A man who could be understood, if one tried to at least. Born with such a position, and falling in love. Then through series of misconceptions, killing his best friend who he believed had done taken the wrong path, and only then, realizing what he had done as the man he held the strongest bond with perished before him. But this is not the Duke’s story. As we transition back to the Mc, he knows the fate before him if he stays in this war. Death. The war was lost before it was waged. Using this knowledge, he planned his escape. Alone once again. He had grown, two-stars if one could believe it! But now, he was on the run; and the only place that was ‘safe’ was a deadly forest. As we transition into the arc where he meets the cat. Although I disliked it at first, opportunity must sprout from somewhere. This cat, a mythical beast, in which was connected to his master. Was it fate or coincidence? One cannot know, but it offered another unique power. One of life and death. An answer to the clock he is on? Or perhaps a justification of why he is so close to this unique death energy. One which would not be answered. At least yet. He would be forced to grow in this forest, and a monster would be born; and do not be mistaken, a monster he was. Hence the importance of the next location. The search for a sword. His estoc had failed him. Or so it seemed. For instead he had failed it. He came to a small town plagued by bandits, and found the man who he believed could make him a sword. However, this was not without a challenge, he was tasked to kill bandits, and to make it harder, he must use the blade he has now. For it was not the blades fault, but his. Hence begun a journey of finding a balance between the beast, and finesse. This would found, and we would see his strength truly for the first time. He had once again grown. This would earn him his sword. And let him meet the pink knight. The pink knight was someone understandable. She had convicitons and she had goals. She had come for glory, not for herself, but her family. Our mc offered another perspective. Is that all this knight wished for? The two would funnily enough find themselves on the same path as one another, and meet at a tourney. Here, the mc would use his knowledge once more. For himself, and for others. Whether it be underminding what seems to be an evil sect, or helping someone he knows so much about. Now before you is a summary, and I believe it paints how I saw this novel quite well. It has been a journey: one filled with excitment, curiousity, and wonder. And one I would highly recommend you at least try.
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great characters, they are almost tangible. The world building is efficient and effective, almost all of the details were necessary for the story except for some details about cultivation being unclear. Great dialogue for all characters. character interactions are interesting and portray the traits of the characters effectively.
Hello, Author here. In this thread, I will clarify some questions regarding the start of the book, and you can treat it as a Q&A as well. Firstly, the novel will seem a little odd to you at the start since it starts differently. But, I must insist that you read the free chapters, the first volume, until the end and bear with it a little since it is just an introduction to the work. I know at the start of the novel, Lucavion doesn't start as your typical main character of such novels, which is something I intended since, at the start of the novel, the main character is 14 years old and mentally unstable due to all the events surrounding him. Even though I know it may be frustrating to read a little, I also think that it is an accurate description of how a person who was put into such a position would think at those moments and the type of psychology that they would have. However, at the end of the first volume, his mentality and everything will have undergone a huge change, making it a lot more readable, and from then on, the story will stretch with many interpersonal relationships going on. For now, this is all I have to say about the book, and you may continue with your questions here. I will answer them if I can.
suprisingly bad for how well it starts, too many shallow characters and dialogue, protagonist has murder addiction, its tecnically a transmigation but a large part of it doesn't feel like it, there too much unecessary exposition and kinda repetitive, some things even get repeated in another pov. At some point i just started skipping stuff and it didn't feel like i missed anything important
After the first volume, everything is too drawn out. ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎
Amazing book with a beautiful storyline. Unlike a lot of other books on this site you can tell that this author is actually taking the time to explore our characters development and build a story, instead of the usual wake up and power up we can see our characters struggle and humanity. The common sense that a lot of novels tend to lose in exchange for a rush to power ups.
I personally liked it people say MC isn't that good but he is fine for me it's still 100 percent better than those lame extra plots where they just go to academy no training nothing bullshit
good story, only if u have the patience as it will take a minimum of 5000chapters if the author planning to finish this novel that to its just my guess. that's how slow paced and dragging the chapters are when there is no need to do so.
Really good novel. The chapters per week ratio is amazing and the story focoses on characters deeply, so you can understand them and their motives. The story can be pretty slow at times, but that could possibly be only a momentary thing, cause I can‘t wait to get to the next arc. Fights get pictured vividly in your mind, but because of that it takes a few more chapters to end a fight. If you want quick action you should think twice before buying extra, but the story is fire and really worth it.
Too many details and meaningless explanations make the story not move forward, something that should be done quickly is dragged out over several chapters due to useless details.
An absolute gem! Legit my favorite book on the app, and the only one I buy privledge for and give golden tickets to. Only downside is up to this point there still isn’t really any romance. Other than that it’s absolutely perfect
"Shattered Innocence" takes the familiar trope of transmigration and turns it into a gripping and emotionally charged narrative that transcends expectations. The novel tells the story of an ordinary individual thrown into a fictional world, only to find themselves not as a powerful protagonist, but as an inconsequential extra. The twist? This "extra" role hides layers of mystery, and the stakes are far higher than they appear. What truly sets this novel apart is its ability to weave a tale that is both heart-wrenching and thought-provoking. The protagonist’s journey of survival, self-discovery, and reluctant heroism feels refreshingly human. Far from being a typical power fantasy, it’s a deeply introspective exploration of morality, identity, and the weight of choices in a world scripted by someone else’s pen. The writing is sharp and evocative, painting vivid scenes without overindulging in flowery descriptions. The supporting characters are equally well-crafted, with their own motives and vulnerabilities, ensuring they don’t merely exist to serve the protagonist’s arc. The story's pacing strikes a perfect balance between moments of high tension and quieter, character-driven scenes that make you pause and reflect. Perhaps the novel's greatest strength is its unflinching look at the "rules" of fictional worlds. By subverting clichés and addressing the darker aspects of transmigration stories, "Shattered Innocence" challenges readers to think critically about fate, free will, and the cost of rewriting destiny. If you’re a fan of novels that deliver more than they promise on the surface—stories that make you question your own perspectives while keeping you glued to the page—this one is a must-read. With its emotional depth, intriguing plot twists, and a protagonist you’ll root for despite their flaws, Shattered Innocence is a standout in the genre. It’s not just a story; it’s an experience.
This is fucking horrible OK so a couple main points here The author has a huge reiteration issue. They will say everything over and over and over again in every way, you can think of in the same fucking chapter. It honestly doesn't matter what the subject is just know that reading this story is signing up for reading the same paragraph over again written differently in the same chapter in almost every chapter. Now it's not always the same thing chapter chapter, tho so at least there is that 🤣 Another thing this story is incredibly slow like me personally, I can read an average of about 50 to 80 chapters in a day just casually depending how long the chapters are with this the moment I passed chapter 50 it became a massive slog like it's not that it's technically slow. It's just that things that most authors skip this guy feels like he needs to write everything about and that might be a good thing if the writing was good, but I genuinely can't tell if this wasn't just done by an AI or not this is terrible just awful No, I could say more, but nobody wants to read all that so I'm just gonna end it here. I've said my peace.
Too much rubbish info. So wastage of time is one issue. But secondly, the story was good at start but the mc progression just went from extremely low to extremely high so fast that the rhythm of whole story was ruined. I feel very disappointed because of it. Thirdly after all this the mc is kind even though he says he is not but he sure acts like a saint (I dont know if I should be happy or sad for it) . Truely a miracle there. Lastly he is becoming a idiot as the story is progressing. I liked the story far better before that cat came into his life(unnecessary extra) . I am at 160 ch now. And I hope it will get better ahead.
The story is intriguing, and characters so far have good development, with interesting interactions, while the world building for now looks of sufficient depth, there is one deficiency, which lowers quality of novel. The use of AI, in this case i would guess GPT, is quite obvious (sorry if you dont use it and it only looks like it). Personally I don't have anything with usign AI, as out there, are quite few works which use it and in such ways that you wouldn't even noticed, or it doesnt have influence on any aspect of the novel, whether it is in aspect of content, or from the readers expierence. The case of this novel is the second one, as repeated phrases (after each other), with in essence same meaning/point, are quite annoying, and at some point quite noticable (mainly during long read). I wouln't say no to few occurences (repetitions) but not in current frequency. Overall novel is worth reading, with expectations to ignore the repetitions, or take pauses during reading. At last, the additional refining of repeated phrases after each other would surely lifted quality of the novel. PS: English is not my native language, so I apologise for any errors in the rewiev.
This is my favorite ongoing novel at the moment, absolutely amazing and you can tell the author gets more of a hold on the story the longer it goes on. My only complaint, and why it isn’t 5 stars, is that some of the characters that die aren’t as fleshed out as they could be, which doesent detract from the story but it could make it better. Definitely give it a read.
this novel is definitely one of the best ever!! I'm usually put off by most of those extra's novels because of the slow pace , or the MC being so weak for so long but this novel right here is absolute 🔥🔥🔥! I hope it doesn't become a harem because I feel the girl he's with now is perfect for him, but even if it does 🤷🏿♂️ I'll still read because the novel is that damn good!
So far I think this story has amazing potential keep up the great work author
320 chapters in, time for a review: First of all I love this book, I am really happy that I decided to endure on and read through this book. But before I start glazing, I have to give criticism. This is probably just me being soft but the first 30 chapters are difficult to read because they are just too realistic. What the mc goes through is just pure trauma and sadness. Its like Murphy law where everything that could go wrong happens. The mc feels pathetic. It just feel grating to read how the poor boy has to suffer. The fact that mc is transmigrated into the book but at the same time has no memories/ sealed memories is a bit new and confusing for me especially with "Extra" setting. I wont lie I was on the edge of giving up multiple times during there chapters but I do understand there are important for building the story. However I would have appreciated a disclaimer in the synopsis explaining or warning about this. Now to the good part: I always appreciate a smart anti-hero mc. The bipolar nature and resourcefulness are a nice blend. The interactions mc has with "Valeria" specially are very refreshing and helps the readers understand how the mc will interact with the rest of the world. The smile that hides 1000 secrets. I have to say the character developments of the side characters is well done. A lot of books just dump 5 sides characters at once and give some specific personality traits regarding them and that's it Which leads to some of the most boring characters which you hope to just die. But thankfully the author puts efforts to actually build these characters and makes them feel like real people. Currently the author is using multiple chapters of solo-interactions with the other characters to build familiarity which I am enjoying quite well. If there characters were just dumped into the academy arc the characters would have been much more boring.There is also a lot of forshadowing regarding future characters and this builds anticipation for future events. All in all I have to say the book is in a very good place at the moment and I hope this continues in the future.
In general, I liked the character development and the story. I hope you continue like this[img=update] The tournament section was extended and some battles were too long 4-6 sections are too much for 1v1s, it starts to get repetitive.
He leído hasta el cap 278,puedo decir que el autor a ganado experiencia y su escritura es pulida es entendible,puedes sentir las emociones y experiencias escritas,para los nuevos diría que lean los hasta cuando el protagonista es obligado a ir a la guerra y pueden paras directo al segundo volumen,claro se perderán muchas cosas que se darán cuenta hasta después,pero no afecta mucho,y digo que pueden saltar esa parte porque el protagonista está en su peak,tiene los recuerdos de su vida pasada y la experiencia de la guerra,pongo esta reseña con mi experiencia leyéndola ya que mire que dejaron la historia porque al inició es difícil de leer,igual fui uno de los que casi se va por eso hasta que vi un comentario que ne saltar el volumen 1 y mira asta donde llegue,gracias autor y espero que sigas con esta hermosa obra ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
I was tempted to read this novel the moment I saw it’s cover. A truly work of art!
I only read a few chapters. And, I don't need to see anymore of this nonsense. The main character is pathetic. In fact, I don't even want to acknowledge such patheticness as the main character. The girl Elena or whatever her name is, goes through tragedy events orchestrated by the villains, and it's very descriptively written about after it succeeded against her. I care not about how the story changes later. I ended up thinking about the pathetic fool before I went to bed last night. It infuriated me to no end. I had to come here and leave a review to feel better.
Starting off with the Mc. For reference, I have read up to chapter 254 as of this review. ——— Writing quality: In terms of grammar and the like, I have seen no major issues. Although a silly spelling error or two have occured, they have not ruined my immersion. So grammar wise, it is quite alright. One compliment for the style is when it enters a combat. The author is not as ‘blunt’ with his writing style and combats. Many times during combats and what not, he gives good detail, which truly help one ‘imagine’ the scenery. Other times, it’s to the point. This is a balance in which I personally believe the author has done well in maintaining. ——— Story Development: This story has not progressed super fast IMO. However it hasn’t been slow either. The author has done quite well in pushing forward the story and the world as a whole. One thing in which I believe was done quite well was the transmigration. -This paragraph will now go into minor spoilers.- One thing in which I typically dislike is how single focused some of the works that delve into this become on this topic. They make it the entire story. Which don’t get me wrong, is fine. But can sometimes feel repetitive. Here the author has done quite well in not fully focusing on it. Though like all, there is some cheat like aspects. An entire point of being someone with prior knowledge. But minus the one mage inheritance, all of the things he knows are character based. Such as the convictions of the pink knight. A welcome change to the usual extort resources from everywhere because prior knowledge. -SPOILERS END HERE- ——— Character Design: Overall the characters have had enough depth to think about. They have goals. They have reasons, and not just ones that exist but actually hold weight. And perhaps most importantly, they don’t exist to just prop up the mc’s design. There is unreasonable people, like real life, and there is reasonable ones as well. The author has done quite well in making important characters intricate and still having some depth to those in which are not important. I personally have quite enjoyed the characters as a whole. ——— World Background: Perhaps my most conflicted part here. The world background exists. And when it is shown, it does not disappoint. However, I have yet to see foreshadowing of events to come. Of things happening to show the world is just that, a world. Although it still feels like one, I personally feel this aspect needs more attention. Of course it could be I am dense, and have missed points of not so obvious foreshadowing… ——— Overall Review: CONTAINS LOTS OF SPOILERS! I personally have enjoyed this novel thus far and now will go in depth of for my review of the story as a whole. Starting off this novel is a transmigration one. This can sometimes be forgotten by the reader. But this is the case: We join our mc in a world where he is immediately framed, and cast off by his family for the ‘betrayal’ he did. The ones in which should have loved him the most refused to hear him out. Yet there seemed to be no reason… were the bonds forged a lie? We soon arrived at the war arc. (My favorite arc story building wise). Our mc, truly just a boy without the benefit we were seemingly promised. His identity as an otherworlder didn’t continue it seemed. At least for now. As time passed, our mc grew strong bonds through war. But war is not kind. Those he built bonds with would fall, for he was still weak. Names in which could’ve been so important to be remembered, forgotten. Perhaps only a select few readers and the mc will remember. Naturally, no mc is an mc without some opportunity. Hence Gerald came into the picture. Originally just an old man, he was a bit more than that. Though grasping his strength even now can be difficult, he seemed to be an old man with knowledge and a way forward. He knew why the Mc was stuck. His innate body had stopped him from progressing. Furthermore, something came to light, this body is passed on, and limits one life to a mere two decades. And perhaps even more concerning, it is hereditary. Which brings the question: which one of his parents had it? Sadly the Mc was not informed of this horrible information, yet we were. Left to wonder; and perhaps soon forget. The path for our Mc would be opened by this man, and the typical ‘who am I?’ Seemingly resolved, giving us back the man with knowledge of the future. The path for the mc to grow was set. One would reach for the stars, and use them. Then came the Duke. A man who could be understood, if one tried to at least. Born with such a position, and falling in love. Then through series of misconceptions, killing his best friend who he believed had done taken the wrong path, and only then, realizing what he had done as the man he held the strongest bond with perished before him. But this is not the Duke’s story. As we transition back to the Mc, he knows the fate before him if he stays in this war. Death. The war was lost before it was waged. Using this knowledge, he planned his escape. Alone once again. He had grown, two-stars if one could believe it! But now, he was on the run; and the only place that was ‘safe’ was a deadly forest. As we transition into the arc where he meets the cat. Although I disliked it at first, opportunity must sprout from somewhere. This cat, a mythical beast, in which was connected to his master. Was it fate or coincidence? One cannot know, but it offered another unique power. One of life and death. An answer to the clock he is on? Or perhaps a justification of why he is so close to this unique death energy. One which would not be answered. At least yet. He would be forced to grow in this forest, and a monster would be born; and do not be mistaken, a monster he was. Hence the importance of the next location. The search for a sword. His estoc had failed him. Or so it seemed. For instead he had failed it. He came to a small town plagued by bandits, and found the man who he believed could make him a sword. However, this was not without a challenge, he was tasked to kill bandits, and to make it harder, he must use the blade he has now. For it was not the blades fault, but his. Hence begun a journey of finding a balance between the beast, and finesse. This would found, and we would see his strength truly for the first time. He had once again grown. This would earn him his sword. And let him meet the pink knight. The pink knight was someone understandable. She had convicitons and she had goals. She had come for glory, not for herself, but her family. Our mc offered another perspective. Is that all this knight wished for? The two would funnily enough find themselves on the same path as one another, and meet at a tourney. Here, the mc would use his knowledge once more. For himself, and for others. Whether it be underminding what seems to be an evil sect, or helping someone he knows so much about. Now before you is a summary, and I believe it paints how I saw this novel quite well. It has been a journey: one filled with excitment, curiousity, and wonder. And one I would highly recommend you at least try.
Spoiler enthüllen great characters, they are almost tangible. The world building is efficient and effective, almost all of the details were necessary for the story except for some details about cultivation being unclear. Great dialogue for all characters. character interactions are interesting and portray the traits of the characters effectively.
Hello, Author here. In this thread, I will clarify some questions regarding the start of the book, and you can treat it as a Q&A as well. Firstly, the novel will seem a little odd to you at the start since it starts differently. But, I must insist that you read the free chapters, the first volume, until the end and bear with it a little since it is just an introduction to the work. I know at the start of the novel, Lucavion doesn't start as your typical main character of such novels, which is something I intended since, at the start of the novel, the main character is 14 years old and mentally unstable due to all the events surrounding him. Even though I know it may be frustrating to read a little, I also think that it is an accurate description of how a person who was put into such a position would think at those moments and the type of psychology that they would have. However, at the end of the first volume, his mentality and everything will have undergone a huge change, making it a lot more readable, and from then on, the story will stretch with many interpersonal relationships going on. For now, this is all I have to say about the book, and you may continue with your questions here. I will answer them if I can.